Shraman ff- Destined - thread 1 - Page 11

interesting concept ... update soon ... 😊👏

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

interesting concept ... update soon ... 😊👏

Oh my God, the flashback on how shravan got paralysed. 🤢 This alisha...how can a girl be like this...After being together for quite long time, at least for the sake of humanity she should have turned up...vamp...😡 Felt really bad for shravan...

So the mystery of wheelchair got solved!!! Very nice chapter👏Thank god!!!! Alisha is now out of picture... Please PM me when you update next!!!!

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Oh my God, the flashback on how shravan got paralysed. 🤢 This alisha...how can a girl be like this...After being together for quite long time, at least for the sake of humanity she should have turned up...vamp...😡 Felt really bad for shravan...

Though felt bad that shravan wasted so much time on her, lost an year with his ill-health and all, On a positive note, he escaped from this evil girl and he is going to get Sumo👏😉. So All is well

Sumo is simply great, she managed the situation. The way she stood beside shravan was aweee...

Shravan volunteered to open up about his current state before sumo. He started trusting her. thats really good. Story is going great. I love your writing, u make feel the emotions well.

Thanks for the pm. Waiting for next one soon.

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

awesome update

absolutely brilliant

continue soon

superb

Originally posted by: Safire

So the mystery of wheelchair got solved!!! Very nice chapter👏Thank god!!!! Alisha is now out of picture... Please PM me when you update next!!!!

Hiii Sanjh!!!
sorry for being this late..😳
Coming to upii..

Woah Man!!!
Tht was totally amazing...beautifully penned..loved it!!
Tht Alisha was such a bi**h...how cud she..such a meano...she played with him..he was on wheelchair cuz of her n she..she was the last one to worry infact not worry at all bout him..she left him midway
.whn he needed her the most..how cud she..how?? 😡 thn she came to invite cum insult him for her wedding..she was literally mocking at him..which pissed me off to hell 😡
Sumo nay bikul theek kiya..akal thkanay laga di...hy Sanjh how bout thy attend the wedding i mean Shraman together just to irritate Alisha..haan..nice idea na...just a sugestion u can add in ur story..it'll be fun😉
If no thn ignore it..

Coming back..
He told her the whole story n kept on reading her face..tht was woah!!
Thn the way she said agar mein hoti tu mein kabhi ap ko nhi chorti...Man tht was the nailing point..was imagining Shravanz reaction..surely he wud be shocked..cant wait to knw wht happens ahead..
how their bonding will grow..how thy'll come closer..plz plz update soon.

All n all...was an outstanding upii...loved it😃

Thanks for PM
Very Good Update
Do continue