Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Vinayarao

Hi Piyali...

Amazing chapter I read 1st part on FB...

Sounds interesting...

I want more more Shramans romance because we didn't get in the show... We were just waiting but we were disappointed...

Shravan can't avoide Sumo how much he try... His heart doesn't believe what his brain says to him poor guy he stuck between heart & brain...

Misunderstanding always will there it was in the show also... But don't pull too much where they will start hate each other... I want them to see them love each other where they will ready to do anything for each other... romance only romance... no fighting fighting always... Please.

Thank you,

Update soon if possible send me PM

Thnank u dear
Exactly my point. I wanted shraman's romance so badly in the show but couldn't get it..
There was misunderstanding but now its time to get sor it' out
N here sumo is not at all egoistic like the show .. She is as normal as us.. She loves to do dance , party, loves to wear western clothes.. A girl nxt door.. So it will be easy to solve the mu

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Originally posted byCrazypiya

Actually thts is my point we couldn't get more shraman moments if they r staying apart.. So I imagined it like this.. M trying to weite all those romantic moments which I wish to see between them.. But in a different circumstances.. N one more thing here sumo is not tht much egoistic

OMG !! Am feeling sooo happy knowing this.😃😃romantic moments and sumo not egoistic !! is there anything more I can wish for ?!!! thanks a lot friend...Dil jeet liya aapne😊

Hahaha thank uu but here shravan is a bit khadoos ( for a time being)
But pyaar to hona hi tha
Piyali

hi piyali ...read both parts in one go...n I must say loved both .. m glad u started writing ...the story seems quite interesting... n no negative characters n u mentioned ur gonna show shraman romance that's amazing...these are plus points of ur ff ... I was a silent reader like u too but I started commenting from a month or two as I couldn't resist myself from doing this... (one warning I'd give u about me my comments are too long ...so if u wish I comment here you'll have to bear with me..;) phr mt kehna I didn't warn u :p ) now about the story...firstly I was like wat is sumo their daughter? ? but u cleared my doubt... m glad they all adore her, love her...its touching n beautiful... the bond sumo shares with all malhotras is beautiful n the way they love her is amazing... they all treat her like their own daughter.. the bond between pushkie n sumo is so beautiful n pure...they're best friends n like bro sis too n the dumb shravu thinks they're in love...kuch zyada hi he predicts... n in first part the way pushkie dragged sumo I guess he was giving her hints about shravu that he's gonna come... the childhood fb were so so cute...sumo hiding in his room. , breaking of car. , n sumo explaining thanks God doll didn't break, his anger, her biting his hand all were cute moments... they've a lot of issues in past...koini they'll sort out as both love each other but pretending they don't...idiots... pushkie brought earrings for sumo that was adorable n apna shravu jealous ho gya hihi ... n how he asked about everyone and ramu at last said about sumo ..haha...loved it... the first encounter of shravu to sumo was amazing...she must be looking mesmerizing how can anyone resist that... n the tatoo part u took from serial was hilarious...this Dumbo will never understand that the s is for him... waiting to see their first reaction after facing each other...excited about it... the smirk on ramu n nirmu's face I guess they know there's something between shraman or they already have made up their mind to make sumo their dil ... well its just my prediction... else depends on u ... kamu n ramu k characters ne to made me emotional...itne ache hai dono ;) now enough of my bakbak ... one last thing...have send u a buddy ...can u pls pm me when u update next chapter?? n can I call u pri if u don't mind dear?? update soon...waiting...:) n welcome as a writer :) loved it really...

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

hi piyali ...read both parts in one go...n I must say loved both..m glad u started writing ...the story seems quite interesting... n no negative characters n u mentioned ur gonna show shraman romance that's amazing...these are plus points of ur ff ...I was a silent reader like u too but I started commenting from a month or two as I couldn't resist myself from doing this...(one warning I'd give u about me my comments are too long ...so if u wish I comment here you'll have to bear with me..;) phr mt kehna I didn't warn u :p )now about the story...firstly I was like wat is sumo their daughter? ? but u cleared my doubt...m glad they all adore her, love her...its touching n beautiful...the bond sumo shares with all malhotras is beautiful n the way they love her is amazing...they all treat her like their own daughter..the bond between pushkie n sumo is so beautiful n pure...they're best friends n like bro sis too n the dumb shravu thinks they're in love...kuch zyada hi he predicts...n in first part the way pushkie dragged sumo I guess he was giving her hints about shravu that he's gonna come...the childhood fb were so so cute...sumo hiding in his room. , breaking of car. , n sumo explaining thanks God doll didn't break, his anger, her biting his hand all were cute moments...they've a lot of issues in past...koini they'll sort out as both love each other but pretending they don't...idiots...pushkie brought earrings for sumo that was adorable n apna shravu jealous ho gya hihi ...n how he asked about everyone and ramu at last said about sumo ..haha...loved it...the first encounter of shravu to sumo was amazing...she must be looking mesmerizing how can anyone resist that...n the tatoo part u took from serial was hilarious...this Dumbo will never understand that the s is for him...waiting to see their first reaction after facing each other...excited about it...the smirk on ramu n nirmu's face I guess they know there's something between shraman or they already have made up their mind to make sumo their dil ...well its just my prediction...else depends on u ...kamu n ramu k characters ne to made me emotional...itne ache hai dono ;)now enough of my bakbak ...one last thing...have send u a buddy ...can u pls pm me when u update next chapter?? n can I call u pri if u don't mind dear?? update soon...waiting...:) n welcome as a writer :) loved it really...

Hey dear thank uu
Can call me piya as my full name is piyali
I would love to get long comments from u .. It feels so nice if someone appreciate your work.. Especially an unknown person
I will ad u in my buddy list n will pm u
Love piyali

Simply amazing ... sumo is jaan of malhotra house nd shravan the khadoos...loved the fact that both says they hate each other but same time knows its not true...continue soon

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Hey dear thank uu
Can call me piya as my full name is piyali
I would love to get long comments from u .. It feels so nice if someone appreciate your work.. Especially an unknown person
I will ad u in my buddy list n will pm u
Love piyali

thanks sweetie...will call u piya then :) ...n m glad ur ready to bear my long comments ;)

Thank you guys for ur amazing response
I am literally overwhelmed that u gys liked it here is the nxt part
Part 3

"Oh bhagwan jii apne duniya mein yeh alarm kyun banaya..."sumo said in a sleepy mode
"Ohh god its almost 5:30..
Aj to diwali hai..
Happy diwali sumo.. "She turned to her bedside table n took the photo of her mom n dad..
"Happy diwali momma... happy diwali dad.. "She kissed the photo and got up from the bed.

She opened her wardrobe n took out a bag covered wid gift wrap
Her bade papa gave her yesterday evening..
"Bade papa bhi na.. Har diwali se pehle mujhe mera diwali gift de dete hai.. Unka man na hai diwali din subhe subhe woh mujhe naye roop mein dekhna chahte hai.. "She smiled at the bag
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"Dekhte hai bade papa is baar kya leke aye hai??
Definitely last week jab paris gaye the tab laye honge.. Kya ho sakta hain party gown?? Short dress??jacket? Long coat?? Pallazo hoga sure.. Bade papa ka choice hi khas hai.".she murmurs while unpacking it..

Where everybody in this house wanted her to wear more ethnic outfit only her bade papa supported her to wear western clothes..
She opend it n found a beautiful red churidar was folded nicely..
"Wowww"- she gasped
But she was a bit surprised.. Coz this is the 1st time her bade papa gave her something like this..she headed towards the bathroom with the dress..
She stepped out from the bathroom n standing in front of her dresser..
Not bad sumo" shd looked at herself
Suddenly she noticed the windows are closed
Opened it and n murmurs.." Maine to kal windows khulle chode the.. "
She realised it rained yesterday
It has to be pushkar...
She smiled and stepped out from her room
She looked at the locked door.. N remember about him..
"Itna soch mat sumo... Kuchh farak nahin padta wo kya sochta hai tere bare mein" her mind said to her..
She came to downstairs n found the servant was cleaning the room..
She headed towards the mandir to take blessing from her bhagwanji..
"Happy diwali bhagwanji... Iss ghar mein humesha aap khushiya banaye rakhna... Iss ghar ko saare musibaton se door rakhna.. Iss ghar ki saari balaye mere pe de do bas sabke liye sirf khushiya dedo" she closed her eyes n said this in her prayers
"Bitiya aj aap Bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho.. Ek dam nayi dulhan jaisa..waise bitiya aj nashte mein kya banega" kamal asked her from behind
"Thank uu kaka yeh meri is saal ki pehli diwali gift hai..aur haa nashta.. Ap chalo main aati huun.." She said wid a smile
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Knock knock
"Happy diwali lalaji happy diwali chhoti maa"...she came wid the tray wid two cups of tea
"Happy diwali puttar ji"- both of them greeted her wid a smile..
She took blessings from them..
"Aj to lag raha hai laxmi ji ki taraf koi dekhne nahi wala hai.. Humari suman itni pyaari jo lag rahi hai"--Lalaji touched her chin
"Khabardar jo meri suman pe nazar lagaya to.." Kamini cupped her face.. "Humesha khush rahna.."
"Yeh le puttar tera diwali gift"- lalaji gave her a packet..
"Thank u lalaji .. Aap dono jaldi se ready hoke neeche ajao tab tak main bakio ko chai deke ati hun.."suman said while leaving the room
She met varun near tge dinning area who was praising her the same way lalaji did
"Varun bhaiya aap bhi na bikul lalaji jaise hi soch te ho.. Main pushkar ko uthake aati hun"- sumo left with the tray full of 3 cups of tea
1st she entered pushkars room she found him standing on the floor wid a socking expression towards her
"Happy diwali... Aur tujhe kya huya aise ankhe farke kya dekh raha hai" sumo said while giving the him the tea..
"Dekh raha hun diwali ke din subha subha firebrigade wala truck ban ke ghar mein kaun ghoom raha hai.." He burst out of laughing
Jaldi se ready hoke neeche aja .. Aj late huya to bahut pitega.. She whacked his arm and left wid the tray..
She reached ramnath's room n was about to knock when she found it was open..
" aj mehra's aa rahe hai.. Wo chahte hai ke varun ki shaadi unki beti vandana se ho.. Tum jaan ti ho na use.. Achhi ladki hai..is ghar mein ayegi to achha hoga.. "Ramnath said while bruhing his hair in front of the mirror
"Jee bilkul.. Bahut achhi ladki kai vandana.. Patah hai raam agar bahu achhi nahin huyi toh ghar ko bikhara ne mein time nahin lagta..bahu ghar ko jod ke rakhti hai"-nirmala replied while putting her bangles on standing in front of her opened wardrobe..

"I hope humara nxt generation ki bahuye bhi aise sochti ho..ramnath smiled at nirmala

"Aur jis ghar mein meri badi maa aur bade papa ho us ghar ko koi nahin tod sakta.
Happy diwali .." Sumo entered with the tray .. N touched nirmala's feet
"Are sumo kitni pyaari lag rahi hai".. Said nirmala with a smile
Suman looked at ramnath and winked
Yeh aap ne di hai?? Finally aap ne bhi maan li ke indian kapdo mein woh zyada khubsoorat lagti hai... Nirmala cupped suman's face

"Kyun ke main chahti thi aj ke din humari suman sab se khaas laage" ramnath said

"Happy diwali bade papa" sumo took blessings from ramnath

"Happy diwali beta" he kissed her forhead
"Waise tune sahi kahan jis ghar mein meri biwi ho us ghar ko koi nahi tod sakta" ramnath headed towards nirmala n gave her a side hug..
"Aap bhi na bachhon ke samne .. Kuchh bhi.. " nirmala blushed..
"Aur chooti maa aur main bhi to hun.. Hum teeno milke is ghar ko kabhi nahi toot ne denge.." She put her hands on nirmala n ramnath's hand..

"Aaa promise??"asked ramnath
"Pakka wala " replied sumo..
"Dekhna baad mein bhool mat jana diwali ke din wada kiya tune.. "Asked nirmala wid a smirk on her eyes..

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"Ohh god m late.. Aj diwali hai aur mera 1st day in house.. Jaldi kar shravan beta nahin to papa chhodenge nahi.." He took his hair brush n brushed his hair..
He just came out of his room n saw the door is open of suman's room..
He shook his head and headed towards the stairs to get down.. He shood in the middle of the stairs from where he can see the mandir.. Where everybody was standing facing their back towards him .. A girl wearing a red churidar was doing arati.. It has to be her...
"Bhaiya aise kya dekh rahe ho.. Wo apki sumo hi hai.. Mera matlab apni sumo hai.. " Pushar said coming from upstairs standing behind him..
I know woh teri sumo hai"- shravan walked towadrs the mandir and stand along with others when pushkar followed him with a grin on his face...
Shravan was standing wid them suddenly he remembers tht he bought a gold coin wich has laxmi ganesh embossed in it.. N he needs to put it in front of bhagwanji. He took it out from his pocket n showed it ti nirmala..
Nirmala pointed towadrs the thal which is placed in front suman who is doing arati wid another thaal..
He stepped on the mandir's stairs and stand behind her..


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Bhagwanji iss ghar ki shanti banaye rakhna.. Mujhe uss khadoos se bachake rakhna..
Chalo arati done.. ab sabko arati aur prasad de deti hun"- sumo said in her thought..

Suddenly she felt someone is standing behind her
She can feel someone's breath on the top of her head.
She turned around with the thali on her hand but her dupatta was stuck on of the decorations she felt a tug n slipped..
She was about to hit the floor when a strong pair of hands hold her tightly..
She closed her eyes tightly out of fear..
When she realised tht she landed upond a strong pair of hand.. She slowly opened her eyes..

The first thing she saw a pair of big brown eyes was looking directly at her..
The masculine fragrance was making her dizzy.. She couldn't blink her eyes..
Kitnaa lamba ho gaya hai.!! Chhoti ma was right he is sooo Handsome..

She closed her eyers
She has big eyelashes
Her lips are closed
Slowly slowly she opened it..
Wowww
Those biiiggg hazelnut eyes...
Those luscious pink lips..
Those red cheeks..
He was lost...totally lost in her beauty

Ankheen Dekheen To Main Dekhtaa Rah Giyaa Jaam Dooo Ore Doonoon Hee Doo Ateshaaa Ankheen Yaa Makadeee Kaee Doo Baab Hain Ankheen Inn Ko Kahoon Yaa Kahoon Khawab Hain

"Be careful " he made her stand properly..
She cant take her eyes from his face..
His manly voice is making her insane...


Without braking the eye lock he took out her dupatta which was stucked with the decoration and give it back to her...
She took it from his hand and lowered her eys
Shravan was still lost in her beauty of eyes
Suman tuu theek hai?? " kamini came infront and ask..
"Ji chhoti maa" sumsn fumbled while taking her eyes off from him..
Sumo tu to gayi... Tera ab kuchh hain ho sakta.. Hey bhagwanji maine kya manga tha aur apne kya diya..she thought.
She took the thali n put teeka on everybody's forehead and gave prasad...
Shravan was still standing at mandir premises Sumo turned around and went towards him
She wanted to put the tika on his forehead but he was too tall tht she couldn't reach him.. He bend down a bit n she put teeka .. Hee took the arati n she gave him the prasad..
Kutubminar" only one word left from her mouth
He left the mandir..

She came down n headed towards the kitchen.. suddenly pushkar hold her dupatta and pulled her " laal chaadi maidan khadi , kya khuub ladi kya khub ladi" he burst out of laughing..
Sumo pulled her ear and says something
Shravan was glared at them while standing infront of the dinning area..

Suman sat between pushkar n Varun while shravan was infront of puskar..
They start eating breakfast..
"Are wah itna kuchh?? Pasta ?? Ohh my favourite grilled sandwich.. Methi ke paranthe.. Shravan took a bite .. Maaa u r great ... Itna kuchh subhe subha kaise banaya aapne?? Now I understand shaadi ke itne saal baad bhi papa aap ke deewane kyun hai.. The truth is Aisa khana hoga to duniya mein aisa koi nahi bananewali ke deewane na ho jaye.. "He threw two flying kisses towards nirmala and took a bite of grilled sandwich

Oye thand rakh puttar itna kuch bhabi ne nahi apni suman ne banaya...lalaji said

Shravan started coughing as he got choked... Kamini passed the water to him n rubbed his back .. When she saw sumo trying to suppress her smile..
"Shravan tu to 1st ball pe hi clean bold ho gaya.".he murmurs

Everyone started eating there breakfast .. Where ramnath broke the news about mehra's daughter vandana.. Varun was blushing .. And was just opened his mouth to say something when puskar told him.. "Varun bhaiya bilkul naa nahi bolna plzz .. Aap ghori chadhoge uske bad hi to apna number ayega.. ?" Suman n pushkar did a Hi5 ..
Kyun bhaiya maine sahi bola na?" Pushkar asked shravan ..
M done wid my breakfast .. Need to sort out some thing b4 party.. Chhoti maa plzz mere room mein ek cup coffee bhej dena.."he wiped his face with napkin .
"By the way thanx pushkar. "Said suman
"Kis liye drama queen?" Puskar asked her
"Kal raat ko mere room ka window bandh kar ne ke liye.."
"But main to kal raat ko tere room mein gaya hi nahi"
Suddenly pushkar's eyes met shravan ..
"Itna peeta kyun hai ke kuchh yaad nahi rahta.." Suman whacked his hand..
"Bhoolta to main kuchh bhi nahin huun ... Chahe woh kal raat ki baat ho ya barso purani... He winked at her and whisper " woh main nahi tha ... Shayad kisi aur ko bhi teri fikr ho... "

Suman looked at shravan who was shooting dagger at them ..
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Its 2 am in the night and everybody is sitting in the lounge area suman was cruing bitterly. Her face was read.. Eyes were red amd puffy. Lalaji is trying to console her. But she was crying loudly. Pushkar varun was standing perplexed in front of her .
Kamini n ramnath is trying to comfort her ...
But nobody is able to stop her.. Nirmala is sitting on her knees in front of her wid a blank face...
"Mummmaaa pas jana hai" she whispers between her sobs
Beta mumma papa kal aa jayenge.. Aj to ap logo ki sleepover hai na..lalaji was patting on her back .. While she was shivering coz of crying...
Nirmala looked at ramnath with embarrassing face .. Who didn't know how to stop suman..

Nirmala turned around and glared at pushker n varun then asked them.. "Kisne kiya yeh ghatiya harkat?? Pushkar tune kiya??? " she was pointing towads a thing which is lying down on the centre table infron of everyone

"Nahi badi maa main to sabse pehle so gaya tha.. Varun bhaiya ka story finish hone se bahut pehle"...puskar replied wid a trembling lips.

"Maine kuchh nahi kiya..main aisa kaise kar sakti hun badi maa..main to soch bhi nahi sakta.. Aur woh bhi itni chhoti bachhi ke saath.." Varun said as he knows not its gonna be his turn..

Suman was still crying loundly...
"Ek chamat lagao jiji inko.. Bachhe to nahin khuukhar atankwadi paalke rakkhe hai hum. Hayo rabba ab priya jiji ko kaise muh dikhayenge..."
kamini said while patting sumo's back..

Suddenly ramnath stand up
"Ssshhrrraaavaaannn"-he called shravan ..

After few sec shravan came down .. Looking straight at ramnath's eyes..
"Idhar aaoo.. Yeh tumne kiya???Sach sach batao??" Ramnath bent down and took the thing from the cetre table..
It was long brown braid.. Which has been chopped off from the top n now it is hanging from ramnath's hand... Suman looked at it once more time n started crying again ..

Before lowered his eyes he took a glamce of that crying doll who his curled up on "his" lalajis lap .. Her eyes were red.. She is sobbing profusely

" Jii " he nodded his head
Everyone became shocked..

Thud!!!!!!!! Ramnath slapped him hard..
Shravan stood perplexed coz this is the first time anyone has hitted him..
He is the best student in his class.. Everyone loves him .. He is the perfect son of this house .. Never got scholded .. While for pushkar its normal to get scolded by everyone.. He is example of good boy.. His study room is full of awards n trophies which he got in studies as well as in sports...
N today his hero his dad slapped him infront of everyone.. Especially that cute lil monster..

Nirmala came towards him and asked "r u crazy shravan kyun kiya tune aisa us bachhi ke saath.. Tu to bada hai na usse 5 saal phir bhi aisi harkat??"

"She deserves this... she broke my cars , she bites me .. Loook.. It was bleeding.. N now she took all of u from me... Agar mera bas chalta to main ek ke bajai uski doosri choti bhi kaat deta..." He said while grinding his teeth..

Ramnath is going to slap him again when Nirmala guarded him ..
"Jitna jaldi ho sake main ise boarding school bhejna chahta hun.. Aur is baare mein koi mujhse baat nahin karega.. Its finall.."
He looked at shravan who was standing perplexed after his dad spoke about boarding school" I am sending u to the boarding school of london.. Samjhe tum????"

"I hate you suman tiwariii" he screamed n turned aroung n ran to his room..

"Sumaaan. "
"Ja beta coffe thanda ho raha hai".. Suman came back to his sense after kamini patted her back..

She headed towards upstairs where she met pushkar
"Oye hoye aj badi hindustani naari banke phir rahi hai? Kisko behosh karne ka irada hai??Oho coffee??? Bhai ke liye.. Sun sumo ek serious baat hai...". Pushkar became very serious as well as suman.
"Samhalke jana yaad hai bachpan mein bhaiya ne teri ek choti kaat di thi.. Is baar tere ek kaan na kaat de..." He burst out of laughing n pulled her ear..
Suman glared at him n followed upstairs

Oh god plzz mujhe bacha kena jab bhi main is se milti huun kuchh na kuchh gad bar kar deti tu.. Aur baad mein haar baar yeh mujhse revenge leta hai.. Plzzz bhagwan ji meri iss saal ki diwali kharab mat kar na..

She knocked the door...
Didn't get the rwply
She knocked again
"Come in"
She stepped inside
He was standing near the windows facing his back towards her..he was typing something oh his mobile..
"Yahan side table pe rakh dijiye kamal ji"

The table was just behind him she put the tray and was about to leave when he turned around and they bang on each other..
"Aaaooo"she screamed holding the nose. She hit her nose on his strong arm
"Ooohhh sorry tumhe lagi to nahi? "Shravan asked with concern "
She nodded but tears coming out from her eyes..
Shravan felt a pinch on his heart.. She was about to touch her face.. Suddenly his face became stiff ..
"Tum yahan mere room mein kya kar ne ayi ho "
"Wo main main main woh"
"Bakhri ho kya jo mein mein kar rahi ho.. Pushkar bhao nahin de raha hai kya jo mere paas chali aayi ho.."
"Kya???" Suman asked in surprise
"Tum jaisi ladki ko main achhe je jaan ta hun.. Mujhe pushkar ke tarha mat soch na jo tum kuchh bhi karogi aur main tumhari age peeche ghumonga.." He hold her shoulder and jerked her off
"Main to sirf coffee dene ayithi.." She pointed towards the coffee..
She turned around and was about to steP outside when she spoke.. "Aur haa tum agar chahoge bhi to bhi kabhi pushkar ke jaise nahi ban sakte.. "She left the room wid a tearful eyes

He clenched his fiat n threw the phone on his bed.." How dare she is to compare me wid pushkar.. Kuyun nahi...main pushkar ke jaisa use peechhe lattoo jo nahi hun.."


Suman was standing just behind the door while resting her back on the door with tears rolling down her eyes .. When he heard his words.. And she left the corridor

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Everyone has gathered in the sitting area where is a big bag full of gifts was beside shravan..

"Papa this is for u.". He took out a atmani suit bag n give it to ramnath. N took his blessings..

"Puttar mere liye kya laya hai jaldi dikha" lalaji asked impatiently
"Aap liye yeh Saari cooking recipes ke books .. I know yeh apki nayi hobby hai.. Isme saari italian n french cuisine hai.."shravan handover some books to lalaji
Uhu uhu uhu.. Kamini started fake coughing whileBEverybody started laughing
"These are all the new shades of make up from MAC .. For my beautiful chhotima..."
"Achha kiya tune ...tere chhoti maa make up utar degi to hum sab ko heart ho attack aa jayega..". Lalaji teased kamini

Kuchh bhi ayinvi..kamini whacked lalaji

"Bhai humare liye kya layeho..."puskar asked impatiently
"Aap dono ke liye naya iphone 7 .. "He gave one iphone to varun otherone to pushkar..
"Aur yeh mere maa ke liye .. He took a foot massager.. Jab meri maa kaam karke thak jayegi to unle nazuk pairon ko aram dene ke liye..."

"Aur bhai sumo ke liye??" Pushkar asked normaly
Shravan grinned his teeth.." Maine apne gharwalo ke liye diwali gift leke ayi huun naki koi baharwalo ke liye.. Koi humare gharme rehne lage it doesn't mean tht he or she is my family member...aur waise bi tu hai na use gift dene ke liye i mean aap sab logo ne uske liye gift to diya hi hoga"
"Suman!!!!" Varun said
Shravan turned around and found suman standing with a tray full of coffee cups..
He looked at her teary eyes .. She is trying hard not to shed those tears with a huge smile on her face...
"Sab ke liye sumo special coffee.. "She put the tray down while everyone is looking at her with embarrassment..

Excuse me guys mujhe ek zaroori call kar hai "shravan turned around and went upstairs

He closed the door and ran his hand through his hair
Why shravan whyyy can't you see the emptiness in her eyes??
Why everytime i hurt her i feel it's paining in my heart
Why it burns my heart every time i saw her close to pushker..
Is it becoz she chose pushkar over me??
Why today morning i bad mouthed her when she came wid the coffee
I know tht maa or chhoti ma might have send her..
He closed his eyes.. A flashback scene came infront of his eyes..
A 20 yr old boy grabbed a a 15 yr old girls wrist and yanked her in the wall ..
He put his face close to her.. He can see her eyes which is full of tears..her trembling lips...
"I am sorry i don' know who did this ... Plzz believe me" the girl said
I don't believe u" suman tiwari.. He said in rage ..
He can feel her breath
His nose is touching her nose.
Her trembling lips are looking delicious
But why didn't he feel angryanymore.. He just wanted to grab those lips with his ..
Is it because today he has consumed alcohol for the 1st time on his 20th birthday party .. Or is there something else ..
Something is happening in his head
Today for the 1st time he met her after long years..
She went to her paternal uncle's house n just came back today..
Tomorrow he is going to leave for London..
But from the time he saw her he felt there is an attraction..
She closed her eyes in fear
He was about to touch those luscious lips
""Ouchh"
------Flashback end------
Shravan opened his eyes ...
He put his hand on his pocket and took the a small box.. He opened it.. With his right Hands 1st finger n thumb he take it out.. Its a beautiful emerald n diamond studded butterfly locket with a platinum chain..
Why can't i gave it you like i gave everbody ..
Noo shravan nooo
She is not worth it...
All her tears r fake .. She chose pushkar
coz I ddnt gave her any importance
She is a attention seeker... Opportunist girl
She ruined your bday party years ago..
And made fun about you
How can u forget how everyone was laughing at u ..
And especially now She doesn't need your gift she has someone else who would give her the earings
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Knock !!!!knock!!!!
Sumo just came out from the toilet after changing her outfit.. Now she feels more comfortable in a khaki shorts n a black mini mouse t-shirt..
She opened the door n found pushkar standing outside wid a smile while hiding something on his back
Kya hai kyun tang karne aya hai? "Suman asked with a irritated face
"Janeman tang nahi teri mood sahi karne aya hun .. Follow me" he stepped inside..
Ab kya Nautanki karne wala hai tu" suman archerd her eyebrows n asked him
Taaadddaaa!!!!! Teri favourite ben and jerry's chocolate fudge brownie.. Ab khush??? Puskar said wid a grinn
She sighed..".Yeh sahi hai ek bhai mujhse itna nafrat karta hai ke mujhe dookh dene ka koi bhi chance nahi chhodta hai n the otherone mujhe khush kar ne ke liye meri fav ice cream leke ata hai.. Samajhte kya ho tum log mujhe ?? She ashed him with a tearful eyes..
"Hey sumo idhar a .. "Pushar made her seat on the window n he sat just infront of her crossing his legs
"Tu jaan ti hai hum sab tujhse kitna pyaar karte hai .. Bhaiya to pagal hai.. Thts why he talked like this..unki baat ka bura maan gayi tu?? Aur hum sab ka pyaar tujhe dikhai nahi diya..???"

"But he is right pushkar i am an outsider.. Bade papa n badi ma felt pity on me thts why they brought me here... Mumma papa ke death ke baad mama mami ne sahara diya unke usa chale jaane ke baad tum logone sahara diya nahi to padi hoti kisi orphanage mein ". She sobbed profusely..
Puskar couldn't take it anymore he hugged her n said " tu pagal hai kya?? Aj ke din bakwas kar rahi hai.. "He cares her head while hugging her
Nxt time if u talk this type of bakwas then dekhna teri kaise pitai karti huun "he broke the hug
"We r family dude ...bachpan se sab tujhse pyaar karte hai.. Now give me a smile.. "He wiped her tears..
"Itna royegi to shaam ki paarty mein sumo the dayaan lagegi"
Aur tera dance performance bhi ho hai..
Aur main kisi dayan ko partner banana nahi chahti bhia".
Suman smiled at puskar
"Chal hi5 de..." Pushkar asked
They gave hi5 to each other
"O teri!!!!!! icecream gal jayegi chal chal jaldi khaa lete hai.." They started eating together
Pushakr was about to leave the room after finishing the icecream while he stopped n turned around near the door and said " waise tujhe pata hai ma mujhe sabse zyada daanti hai.. Bachpan mein sabse zyada pitai bhi maine hi khayi hai.."
"Kyun ki chhoti ma tujhse sab se zyada pyaar karti hai ".. Sumo chuckled
"Exactly hum unhi ko sabse zyada daante hain dard dete hain jinse hum pyaar karte hai" pushkar winked with a smile and stepped outside left suman dumbfounded...
Her heartbeat started beating faster when she realised wht was pushkar trying to imply..

" Kitna bakwas karta hai yeh nalayak."
"Kya aisa bhi kabhi ho sakta hai??"
"But yeh awaz kaisi hai" she murmurs
She put her hand on her chest
All she could hear the pounding of her heart
DHAK ...DHAK... DHAK..DHAK..




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Nxt part will be the diwali party wid lots of interesting stuff.. A part of their past is revealed here .. It will revealed in the next part..
But will be full off shraman moments..

Till then byeee
Luv uuu
Piyali

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Excellent writing !! 👏















Wow, now diwali party is up, so eager to know what happens there. Also, looks like Vandhana aka Vandy is coming soon. So we will have marriage celebrations as well. Very excited🤪