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Posted: 8 years ago
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Here is the Part 2


26...27...28...29...30
As suman heard varun finished counting she was desperate to find a place to hide herself coz she doesn't want to get caught like last time.. Pushkar found her easily as she was hiding herself under the dinning table.. N ofcourse its his house so he knows each n every corner .. Where as for suman its just the second time she came malhotra house wid her mumma papa..

Suddenly she saw a door which was open just on her right side.. As far as she remember last time it was locked.. It can be the best place to hide from varun bhaiya n puskar...she thought..as she entered the room she stood perplexed... This is the perfect place to hide herself.. It has a hanging sportscar.. Some model sportscar.. A basketball hoop ...An amazing car bed..
Whose room it can be she thought.. Suddenly someting stuck on her little mind.. It may be pushkar's 'Bhai's room.. He always talks about him.. Bhai is like this .. He is the best.. Like that..
She found a corner between the bedside table n the study table.. Its just perfect.. Surely this time varun bhaiya will not be able to find her..
She can hear pushkar's voice just outside of the room..
"Yesss varun Bhaiya caught him.." She whispered with a giggle..
Suddenly she heard footsteps
"It must be varun bhaiya" she thought
"But varun bhaiya was wearing a blue slippers"she remembers it coz she was trying to wear them n found it was too big for her tiny feet...
And this person is wearing a black sports shoe.. With a greypant and a navy blue loose sleevless tshirt.. He has a ball in his hand.
a big brown ball.. Which is neither a football nor a cricket ball.He is taller than varun bhaiya n pushkar.. Who is he?? A new member of the hide and seek team??
She came out from her hiding place while she was facing his back ...
"Who are you? R u struggling to find a place to hide from varun bhaiyaa?? "

"Sumooo" she just came out from her flaskback as she heard preeta calling her.
"Kya huya gala kyun far rahi hai??" Sumo
gave an annoying look to preeta
"Kab se bula rahi hun.. Kahan khoyi hai?? Achha sun main chalti huun mera kaam ho gaya dhurinder waha na jane kya gul khila raha hai.. Hey mata rani aur koi nahi mila jo us nalayak ko mere gale mein bandh diya" preeta took her bag and was about to left when she asked sumo "kal aur parso chhutti rite?? Main tujhe nxt day market mein milti huu.. Saath mein sabzi le lenge.. N ha kal milti hun shaam ko party mein.. Byee.". She waved her hand towards sumo
Byeee.. She whispered..
Oh god what will she do now... Its only 2pm... She doesn't want to headed back towards home where that khadoos is back.. But there is nothing to do here ..
She is feeling damm tired .. After having a long bus journey from shimla to delhi she ddint get the opportunity to take rest.. "Admi kya sochta hai aur bhagwan uske liye kuchh aur soch ta hai.. Yeh sab aj hii hona tha... Hey bhagwanji kyuuunnn". She stamped her foot on the floor...

She took out her phone .. Thank god before the trip she downloaded some movies on her ph..
"Ek movie mein 2 hours to spend ho hi jayega" she thought in her mind.
She opened her fb .. Its full off diwali wishes.. Colorfull photos of diyas n lovely msgs.. She scrolled down .. Wow preeti posted such beautiful photos .. Not only her.. all of her friends posted their photos wearing their lovely outfits

It was pushkar who didn't allow her to post any of her photos in social media after bade papa had a case regarding cyber crime .. It was about a innocent girl who was the victim by her frnds.. They used her photos for some illegal crime..
There was a faint smile on her lips remembering how pushkar was concerned about her sumo .. She closed her eyes n thanked god for giving her such a beautiful family when she knows tht in reality she is an orphan...she feel so lucky sometimes tht she got them.. She knows very well tht she is the "Jaan" of malhotra family.. Every one loves her like anything .. Except tht khadoos...
Her hand typed his name
"Coming back home after ages..let's celebrate diwali with love n peace" she read his status update.. There was not a single photo of him in his account..
"Ladki hai kya?? Ek photo nahi laga sakta... Darpok kahika...khadoos... Super khadoos " she groaned
She closed the window n opened the movie files..
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"Are bhaiya sumo yahan road pe kya kar rahi hai??" suddenly pushkar said.
Shravan was busy while updating his fb staus. His phone fell off his hand and he looked up..
He saw a girl just stepped in side an auto.. He couldn't see her face as pushker was trying to get a glance of her from the front seat...
"Par wo yahan road pe kya kar rahi hai?? Car kahan hai uski?? Abhi to wapas ayi hai..bilkul kheyal nahin rakhti apni.. Par auto mein kyun jaa rahi hai??"varun shooted his questions towards pushkar
"Bhaiya aap jante ho na use. Sab ka kheyal rakhne se fursat mile tab na apna kheyal rakhegi.. Aur apna kheyal khud rakhegi to mujhe tension kaun dega .. Sab mumma ki galti.. Sar pe chadake rakhha hai usse.. Humesha manmani karne deti hai" pushkar replied annoyingly
Shravan couldn't take it any more.. What's wrong wid them..
"I thnk most of ppl in delhi traveled in auto.. So what's the big deal".. Shravan said arching his eyebrows
The duo couldn't replied coz they have entered malhotra house ..
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He entered the living area while while nirmala n kamini was discussing about tomorrow's party
"Hello lovely ladies " sravan said with a huge smile
Both of them just turned around n shocked to see him infront of their eyes.. Nirmala come forward while kamini was standing with a socking expression
Shravan touched nirmala's feet n hugged her tightly... Nirmala cupped his face n kissed his forehead..
"Kaisa hai mera beta".. Nirmala asked with a choked voice
-"Ekdam fit n fine"
-" kitna dubla ho gaya hai na kamini?" She asked kamini who was staning near the dinning table..
Shravan walked towards her.. He saw the tears of his chhoti maa's eyes..
He just picked her up and twirl aound..
"Chhod chhod mujhe pagal kahika?? Ab achanak itna pyaar kyun?itne dino tak yaad nahin aya chhoti maa ka"- kamini's voice choked as tears following down from her eyes
"Maine aap ko sab se zyada miss kiya.." Shravan replied while putting her down ..
"Aur ab to main wapas aa gaya..mere dono maao ke paas" he said while giving a side hug to both of them.

After having coffee wid malhotra clan Shravan headed towards his room .. There is a lots of change in this house.. They renovated it 3-4 yrs back now they have an open terrace garden in this floor... While walking on the corridor he heard some tingling sound .. Just then pushkar came n asked..
"Wht happen bhai?? Yahan kyun khade ho?? Fresh nahin hona hai?? "
"Whts tht sound pushkar ?"
"Are bhai its from sumo's room .. U know she is very fond of wind chimes.. "

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It has been yrears he left this room but its still the same... Every time he comes back from london he found it in a same position.. Only difference is previously he used to have a car bed instead of this king size one..
He was looking around his study table , walking closet, haging sports car.. Ohh here it is his basketball.. He took it in his hand n stepped back , he turned around n throw it on his back .. N yesss he did it once again.. He sat on his bed n put his hand beside when he found something pricking in his hand.. He took it from the bed .. A hairpin .. He frowned his eyebrow when he found a hair in it... A long brown hair..
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He jumped on his feet n turn around..
A doll in his room looking directly in his eyes.. Only the difference is this is a real doll
She asked him whether he is looking for a place to hide or not.
Who is she n what is she doing there??
.. She knows barun bhaiyaaa ...
Ohooo suddenly something clicked on his mind she must be the girl the whole house is talking about
She is Priya aunty's daughter...
Last time when they came to visit, he was on his summer camp.. N today also he was in his basketball class.. Before coming upstair he greet them in lounge area..
She is just like a doll.. Big hazelnut eyes.. Chubby cheeks n having a cascade of brown nhair..
He smiled at her and says "not yet but i will start find places to hide as soon as i join u guys.. Now come here .. Varun bhaiya caught pushkar so u r safe"...
She was struggling to come as the corner of her baby pink frock caught the corner of his bed side table where he kept his most valuable car models..
Shravan gasped as he found the table was trembling coz she is struggling to come out.
He screamed "ohhh god nooo"" hold onnn""
But the damage was done
Clang !!!!!!!
N he found the model car is on the floor in pieces...
He was standing in a shock...
As if nothing hapeen .. She told him ..
Its okkk no need to worry its just cars.. Thnk god it was not some dolls.. He shouldn't feel sad about it.. It would have been a great loss if she broke some dolls..
She was about to leave the room when shravan hold her wrist n screamed
"R u crazy????? U broke my model cars n saying there is nothing to worry about it.. I will not spare u ..".
Suddenly he saw she was shivering in fear there r tears in thise brown eyes..
He felt sad
But she did a mistake n she should apologise..
"Aaahhh"!!!!!
She bite meee!!!!
Shravan couldn't believe his eyes that a little girl half of his height destroyed his most favourite car .. N when he asked for an explanation the bite his hand n ran off...
"Pagal ladki" he grinned his teeth.


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After taking a hot shower while coming out from his room he saw the room which stand exact opposite to his room ..
N kamal is cleaning the room..
"Kuchh chahiye shravan baba?" Kamal asked as he saw him just standing in front of sumo's room.
Shravan nodded no but peeked inside the room.. It has a pink color wall withh floral curtains .. Different shades of pink drapes were falling from the bed stand.. Tung tung sounds was coming from the wind chimes which are hanging from the balcony.. Dream catchers are hanging from the window pannels
As wind flows he felt a unique fragrance was coming from tht room..

Kamal asked him again "shravan baba kuchh chaiye aap ko? Yeh sumo bitiya ka toom hai .. Bitiya bahar gayi thi .. Aaj hi ayi hai.. Pct gayi hai.. Aap ko unse kuchh chahiye..?"

Ohh god what's wrong wid every one ??? Why r they behaving like this?? Its seem she has done some Black magic to everyone.. He shook his head n murmurs..
"Bhai" pushkar called him from behind
"Lets go n have lunch.. It has been a long time aap ne ghar ka food nahin khaya" pushkar was telling him while getting down wid him towads the dinning area

Malhotras r having lunch
"Suman dikh nahi rahi hai??" Lunch ho gaya kya uska?" Ramnath asked kamini
"Bhaisab woh abhi lauti nahi pct se" kamini answerd him back while serving others
"Mumma sumo aj auto mein nikli maine aur varun bhaiya ne dekha.. Shayad uski ambassador ne phir se uske dhoka de di"-puskar informed every body..
"Ohh wowww ise kehte hai khana mumma aj main double khaunga" shravan said while looking at his plate..
Everybody laughted at shravan
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Its 4 o clock when sumo realise now she cant stay longer at pct..
But how can she face him after whatever happened between them yrs ago
Who's fault was tht??
She was so immatureed that time..
She did mistake on that day
He doesn't deserve those humiliation
But she mistakenly did it.. It was not purposely done by her..
Everytime she met him something wrong happend
Everytime.. From their 1st encounter..
Yaa its true tht each n everytime the mistakes was done by her .. But it also true tht everytime he took his revwnge .. Which were more dangerous
But after the last incident, whatever shravan told her how she accused her was wrong wrong wrong...
Suman shook his head...
"I hate u shravan malhotra"... She stumped her foot in rage...
But she knows tht its not true...
She locked the door n headed towards auto stand..
She was completely lost in his thoughts when a car stopped
"Ajaaa" varun smiled at her
Suman opend the door n sat on the front seat of the car...
Varun was saying something but she couldn't hear it .. All her mind was captured by him..
"Kitni bhi tu karle sitam
Has has kar sahenge hum
Yeh pyaar na hoga kam
Sanam teri sanam"
Isn't this song saying the exact thing whats going on her mind???
She changed the station

They reached malhotra house
Suman tu ab kya karegi?? Ab kahan bhagegi??
Plzzz suman tu darpok nahin hain.. Uske kuchh kehne na kehne se kuchh farak nahin padhta hai
Everyone loves u ...
Everyone????" She thought herself

"Kithhe rahe gayi thi tu??"kamini asked her
"Chhoti maa sorry thodi late ho gayi"-sumo replied
"Koi nahi chal aja .. Kal ki party ki dresses dikhati hun... "
"Pehle mujhe plzz ek kup chaye pilao na chhoti ma.. "Sumo hugged kamini in a cute way n pouted
"Chal pilati huun"-kamini headed towards the kitchen
Suman followed her
Kamini was making tea .. While nirmala came and asked kamini to make another cup for shravan later as he is sleeping boc of having jet lag..
"Puttar tu shravan se nahin mili na??" Kamini asked sumo
Jiji aap ko yaad hai bachpan mein yeh dono kitne ladte the.. Ufff suman tune shravan ko kitna pareshaan karti thi yaad hai??woh bhi kuchh kam nahi tha...par tu usse mili bhi to kam.tere yahan ane se pehle hi to wo london chala gaya tha.. Jiji humara shravan kitna Handsome ho gaya... "Kamini was talking while pouring the tea on the cups
Nirmala was looking at sumans expression with a smirk on her face...
After having tea suman and kamini went out for some last minute shopping for tomorrow's party..
Shravan came down from stairs..
Ramnath was seating at the sofa with a file on his hand
"Hii papa" shravan greeted him
"Uth gaye tum??" Ramnath gave him a smile
"Actually was a bit tired.. N pushkar told me tht he will take me to some party .. Uske frnds ne prediwali mein rakhha hai.. So thoda rest le liya.. By the way baki sab kahan hai??" Shravan repiled his dad while taking a sip from his cofee which kamal gave it to him
"Pushkar n varun i guess getting ready for your party , humari home minister is taking some rest.. Lala as usual taking care of the decorations regarding tomorrow's party.. Kamini lagta hai shopping pe gayi hai. Aur hum aap ke samne hazir hai..." Ramnath replied him
"Aurrr..."shravan asked while looking here and there..
"Aur kaun beta ?? Koi khas?? Jo nahi mil
Rahi hai?? Main kisika naam mention kar bhool gaya kya?? "- ramnath asked him with innocent face
"No no papa no one .. Ha sab ka to ho gaya.." Shravan got up from the couch and headed towards the stairs while he heard ramanath said " aur haan suman pata nahi kahan hai.. "
He halted for a sec and left for his room with without uttering a single word.
Ramnath looked at him with a smirk in his face..
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"Where is your party bro?? Why are we going towads the market area.." Asked shravan wid a frown on his face..
"Bhai mujhe yahan pe thoda kaam hai."I promise it will not take more than 5 mins.. Actually yeh main ghar mein kisiko batake nahi kar sakta, especially varun bhaiya"-Puskar said while finding a parking.
Shravan entered the shop wid him n asked pushkar " but what r u going to do in a jewellery shop??
He ignored shravan n directly went toward the manager and asked whether his gift is ready or not..
The manager gave a packet to him with a smile n replied " bilkul wasa hi hai jaisa aap ne kahan tha.. "
Pusker took it from him n gave his card for payment
Shravan was standing behind n was thinking why is pushker buying a jewellery..
Suddenly a thought came to his mind... Ohhhooo a diwali gift for his girlfriend..
Puskar came towards him n took out the box
There was beautiful emarald earing...
"Wowww bro tu to bada ho gaya.. Girlfriend ke liye?? "Shravan patted his back n asked with a smirk on his face
Pusker shaked his face and asked shravan
"Woh sab chhodo n tell me what do u think bhai.. Is it good?? " "will she like it?? "
"She will love it "- shravan replied
" i know bhai waise bhi emerald to sumo favourite hai.. I m sure use bahot pasand ayega" puskar said while putting the box inside the gift bag..
Shravan was standing like a statue
Pushkar is buying a diwali gift for suman!!!!! Are they dating each other???? Puskar n suman!!!!!
He clenched his fist n murmurs.." Uski jaisi ladki aur kar bhi kya sakti hai.."
He came out of his thought n followed pushkar to the car..

"One more thing Bro plzzz varun bhaiya ko mat bolna" puskar told shravan while fastening his seat belt and drove his car.. I
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The party was going on in full swing..Puskar introduced him to some hot chicks.. Who r dying to get a chance to have dance with him.. Shravan just gulped his drink and asked the bar tender for a repeat..
Puskar is dancing wid a girl .. Loud music, lights n the smoke nothing is letting him Njoy the atmosphere.
"Whats wrong wid me yaar... I haven't met her since long .. I know the last encounter wid her was not good .. But its her fault .. He made me do that.. Tht selfish opportunist girl..
How does it matter if puskar is dating her??
No its matter .. I am sure she is exploiting puskar.. Puskar bought such an expensive diwali gift for her n that also without informing any of the family member.. Not even varun bhaiya..
She is not good for pushkar .. This cant be happening.. Pushkar cant love her ...i hate tht girl.. But he knows its not true.. All the time he was looking for her from the time he reached home..
He came out from his thoughts its 12:30 already late.. N he is feeling sleepy...
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The lights are dimmed in the downstairs.. Everybody is sleeping while shravan n puskar entered the house..
"Bhai i thnk i am hungry..aap kuchh khaoge?" Puskar asked shravan
"I am full tu khaa le.. M going to my room kal jaldi bhi uthna hai.. " shravan replied pushkar wid a yawn..
"Lagta hai barish hone wala hai.. "Shravan said after he heard a lightning sound
He reached upstairs n about to open the door of his room when fe feels there is cold wind coming from somewhere
He turned around n found the opposite door is open n a cold breeze is coming from that room.. He felt tht its started raining becoz he can hear the sound..
May be the windows are open .. He entered the room .. N ofcourse he is right .he was just about to close the window when something touched his face and made him realise actually where he is standing..
Its the same pink room he saw in the morning..
The tung tung sound is everywhere.. The dream catcher was hanging from the window pannel. Which is touching his face rite now..
He just turned around and was about to leave the room when he saw her...
Someone is sleeping on that bed.. Is it a princess .??. All he can seee a angelic face who is sleeping peacefully.. She looks so serene.. How can b someone so beautiful.. This cant be the same suman he knew long time before. Thise big hazelnut eyes are close rite now.. A lock of hair was falling on he face... Those luscious lips.. Is she wearing lipstick or its real??

The bedside lamp, the cool breeze from outside, the tingling soud from the wind chimes is creating a havoc waves in his heart.. His eyes followed down where he found a creamy white legs came out from the comforter.. Where he can see a tatto.. A heart sign which has S written on it..his heart skipped a bit..
"Sahi hai dimag ghutno mein hai to dil to uske neeche hi hoga na.. Emotion less ladki.." He murmurs
Suddenly a sound of thunder with lightning meke her turn the other way around while covering her entire body with the comforter which bring him back to his sense..he closed the windows And leaves the room..
While he was about to poen the door of his room he saw puskar coming upstairs..
"Bhaiya aap abhi tak room mein nahi gaye?" Puskar reached him n asked
He didn't replied n went inside n closed the door..
He ran his hand to his hairs n gasps
He lie down to bed with the same clothes.. He knows he is not in a position to change clothes..
"Beautiful".. A whisper came from his mouth.. She has grown up to a beautiful lady.. Her luscious lips the lock of hair falling at her face, the creamy legs n the tattoo.. What is the S stands for.. No Noo shravan puskar loves her... Chii how can u think something like tht..
N dont forget what she did to u..
He threw the comforter on the ground and headed towards the shower .. He need it rite now ... Yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi...opportunist girl.. Selfish ladki..how can u forget shravan how she humiliated u in the party.. How can u forget how everybody was laughing at u...it was your birthday party and she ruined it by showing those videos to everyone..
Everytime she did someting like that to u remember??
But shravan u took the revenge rite??
So its same same
Was tht a revenge??
Or something else which had changed your whole world.. After that moment there was not a single day when u ddint thnk about her..
Those touch
Those tearful eyes
Her shivering lips
Plzzz shravan dont forget u hate her..
He closed his eyes and came out of this thought

Standing in front of the bathroom mirror while looking at the reflection of himself he agin lost in his thoughts
Then why my heart is pounding after getting a glace of her after so many ears??
Why i can't stop thinking about her from the time i heard her name for the 1st time in the car?
Why i felt bad bad when I couldn't see her whole day?
Why I ddnt feel good when i found pushkar loves her?
Why i thnk that she can't be wid pushkar or anyone else??
Why my lawyer brain doesn't work when it comes to her..??
Why my heart doesn't want to believe my mind when it screams tht i hate her?

He put his hand on his bear chest
All he could hear the pounding of his heart..
DHAK ...DHAK... DHAK..DHAK..



To be continued
Plzz ignore tge grammatical mistakes

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Thanks for the amazing response i got from all of uu...
Let me remind you its gonna be a pure love story full of shraman romance which we didn't get to see on the show becoz of its abrupt ending.. But obviously in a different way
One more thing there will be no negetive character in this story but misunderstanding can be there .. N we may be see the grey shades of them.. Becoz its the human nature.. No body is perfect.. No body is purely possitive or negetive in this world.. If you like my story plzz do comment n hit the like button.. As I mentioned this is my first ff .. Feel free to criticise...

Love
Piyali


Edited by Crazypiya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Amazing...
U wrote it wonderfully..
ShraMan are made for each other...
Shravan got attracted to sumo it seems..
Eagerly waiting for next part..
Plz update soon..
LavSriya
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#23
Loveddd it.. continue soon...waiting for it..
-Dolly
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#24
Amazing dr... looking forward for next updates... update soonish 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Piyali...awesome...
Loved it ...
Waiting for the update . ..
And your concept is very good...
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Its really amazing !! The relationship that shravan shares with his mom and chotti ma, I find it very heart warming...He is getting double the mother's love and that feeling is really good.
I hope Nirmala and Ram are thinking sumo for shravan 😳 Wow that would be cake walk to their wedding đŸ€Ș. I loved the chotii sumo part, her cute antics while playing, the way she talks to Shravan, breaking his car and biting his hand😆😆. You wrote that part very well.

What names shravan is giving his Sumo... Doll ?? Princess ??!!...đŸ„ł

I really hope Pushkar is thinking Sumo as only HIS BEST FRIEND !! and not anything moređŸ˜Č Can't really take Pushkie having feelings for her, mind is really set that they can be the best friends or like bhai-behen😔 So please not pushkar sumo pleaseee

Very eager to know what will happen at the party

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow amazing update
Thank you
please update asap

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Originally posted by: amlavs

Amazing...

U wrote it wonderfully..
ShraMan are made for each other...
Shravan got attracted to sumo it seems..
Eagerly waiting for next part..
Plz update soon..
LavSriya


It's shraman's story indeed
They r ek duje ke vaaste
Sumo hasn't meet shravan till now
So for not the attraction is ek tarfa
But how can someone resist namik's charm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
It was awesome👏.Update soon
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#30
Wonderful writing👏 want to see sumo together with shravan and not with Pushkar!!!! Next update soon please!!

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