Shraman TS-Karva Chauth(Ch 2-Pg13) - Page 2

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Suro 🤗

Aap ne yahan par darshan diye?Kaise?😆

Thank You!

Hahahahaa Sure.I will update really sooon;)

Originally posted by: surochitadutta

Velapan ka natija hai Yeh Mittu 😆😆 super bore ho rahi thi isilye ghoomne ayi yehan 😆😆 Vaise Acha hi hai na ki main ayi aur tera TS padh liya.. Vaise seriously Yaar such a cute story you should write often

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Hhahaaa Hota hai!

I do want to write myself,so many stories pending,so many new ideas haunting my mind but the you blame it all on my lazy gene :P XD

Mithu!! Finally, you have managed to put this thing up. ThanQ for taking time out of your busy schedule to write something sweet for us 😉 Coming to this update, as you have said it's bit dramatic Yea IT IS DRAMATIC little more than a bit. But you know what Karva chauth was also in our list of *ShraMan's Post marriage things* but Sigh!!!!! this is such a cute less complicated light chapter, loved that Khuni churail bit & sindoor n Mangalsutra part the most 😳 He is upto some surprise naa?? IKR??? And stop underestimating yourself & give us the next update asap!!

Brilliant

Awww... An OS on Karvachauth..

Nice to have you back 😊

Hello!
I'm Cas!
(What can I call you?)
Coming to the TS...
It was so cute! 😳
I had been wondering on Karva Chauth how ShraMan would have celebrated it!
#PhootiKismat
We only saw them celebrate Holi... 😕
Anyway...
Dramatic you say?
I think I can guess 😉
Not a surprise or a wedding though...
Something very emotionally draining...
Do update soonish! 😊

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Awww Thank You :)

Glad that the Mangalsutra and Vermilion part worked out.

Want an analysis? I am in a really good mood at the moment.Maybe can write one.You name a episode.:)

Actually, the last episode because there was so much symbolism and parallels like the one "Main janta hun aasani se nahi manogi tum" it reminds me of the 1st episode when she says"boldoon gi sorry, mana lun gi ", so could you write something on that, I 'd love to read your take on it !