FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 58

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

This is really funny episode and little scary at the end...
Shravan having a photo of sumo in his law book 😉 that's cool..
"love her like a man loves a woman" love this line , hats off to you for this beautiful line..
Sumo was in sumo mode coming to Shravan's Office with a harmer and two brother running for their life 😃 Oh God this is so funny... Had sumo get hold of pushki don't know what would have happened to pushkar 😉
Shravan thought that pushkar having a baby in his stomach when he said he is going to be father 😃 😛 I laugh out loud on this..
Pushkar comment that thar must be idol of sumo 😉
But at the end what is Shravan's secret.. Little scary..
Let's see what happens and thanks for pm




"Had sumo get hold of pushki don't know what would have
happened to pushkar 😉 "

- Pushkar bharta. Suman even brought a hammer for that purpose. But afsos... *sighs

Thanks a lot!
Yeah, let's see what will happen next. Will updt soon. Tada!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon


The pre-nuptial track is already done. It's something else I've planned.😉
But yes, it's connected to his mad days.😈


That doesn't sound good😲 but knowing your magic, im relaxed..you will make shravan redeem the most unexpected ,but romantic way..cant wait more.. pls update fast
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Mind blowing!! Shravan wants to start a family❤️
"it was because he wanted to be her nest and never her cage" so deep and beautiful.
Malhotra brothers running for their dear life from Sumo🤣poor shravan running without even knowing the reason😆

"He stared at Pushkar's stomach with horror stricken face.
But he had thought that Pushkar was a brother?" Shravan's reaction🤣
Finally shravan took his revenge😆
But Shravan is hidding something big from Sumo
Excited for next update


Thanks, dear!😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nik03

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That was a surprising one... 😉

I am im love with that law book now... 😳
With every update we comes across a new side of Shravan... making me fell in love with him more n more...❤️
This man is love...just love❤️

He wanted to be her nest and never her cage...Isnt it the most beautiful thought of a man?!!!!...Sooo loved it❤️

Pushkar n whiskey that too in office ... 😆
N Sumo with a hammer...OMG 🤣
Soo loved Pushkar's reaction... 😆

I'm having a baby...N Shravan staring at Pushkar's stomach...Oh Shit 🤣
N Sumo threw hammer breaking the glass window of Shravan's cabin was hilarious... 😆
Thor is her idol...seems like that 😆
What an ultimatum Sumo... 😉
Shravan punched Pushkar...yayyy!! 😃 😆

Nature is and always be the one to bring actual peace...Soo true...Loved it❤️
N the end... 😲
Now that was a shock...Lara special... 👍🏼

All in all it was a blasting one bud n a suprising one from you... 😉.
Loveddd it ❤️

Sooo exited for the next one now...
Cont soonish...n thanks for the pm 😊

Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik



Loads of love to you too, Nik. ❤️
I'm extremely happy knowing that you've enjoyed this chapter as much as I've enjoyed writing it. Thanks a lot, dear!

Next chap is almost ready, I'll try to up it tonight. 😳
Take care till then.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: priety.priti

Hey lara i laughed my a** off man at sumo the thor scene🤣🤣

Shravan was in perfect scared husband situation common for all mens, without knowing reason he was just running like hell was just behind him 😆😆

"I'm having a baby" and shravans reaction OMG that was too hilarious 🤣

shravan shown gratitude to his cousin great 😆😆

but in last what exactly cooking in your mind lara no idea😕, please update soon dear

OMG My stomach is paining hardly now 😃😃


Thanks a lot, dear!
Am super glad to know the chap made you laugh so much. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonai_02

Sumo the Thor 🤣 !!

Two men run for their lives in front of female Thor !!!!
That really left me in splits !!!!
The track is really interesting and lovely !!!
Thanks for pm dear !!!
Post soon 🤗


Thanks, dear!😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

What an update !! 😊 Each update is magic ..

the whole thoughts of shravan with her photo in the law book was endearing and so beautifully described , took my heart away .. They both have inhibitions about other having child.. this line - to be her nest & not her cage .. 👏

Surely Pushkar being silent is a strange sight .. drinking wine in mug , nice idea ..

The feisty Sumo scaring daylights away from Pushkar was a sight to behold,surely ppl at office had a day of entmt .. Pushkar had indeed messed up with the wrong one .. pushkar running away & taking shravan along making him partner in crime .. I loved Sumo,the Thor ..😆😆 she can single handedly deal with Malhotra brothers .. Fierce tigress .. 😃

What was the last part .. again scaring away with ur evil thoughts Lara .. But it would be interesting .. I hope they don't go back to square one again .. update soon ..


Aw... that's so sweet of you to say the updts are magic. 😳
I'm pleased that you liked the chapter that much.
Thanks! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: beasmukherjee

OMG!!! Lara you have got such a good sense of humour. I broke into fits of laughter reading the part just to earn curious look from my mom. She thinks that I have probably gone insane when I replied nothing 😆 . And why are u thinking of ending this wonderful ff. Not done at all. Ten chapters is not enough you know I m very greedy and I want more. So dare not to end this 😡
Be a bullet train again and post sooon. I don't have brain so can't solve the puzzle only you can do that 😉
Loads of love ❤️


haa haa... I just imagined the scene when your mom was giving you the looks. lol...
Love yaa. ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Prenik

Clara you are one hell of a writer ... a pro if i might say ... i enjoy your writing sooo much ... and it always leaves me to want more ... thrilled to know whatz that darkest secret of Shravan ... hope you get time to update soon ... thanks for this awesome update !!!


Oh God, thank you so much! It's so sweet of you. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

I love that runing part of pushkar and shravans

Thank u waiting for next


Thanks! 😃

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