FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 57

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Now that is something only your sumo could do Lara😃 my fav part was shravan returning the favor to pushkar.. and last part was creepy..did Shravan already got her sign on pre nuptial agreement or something during his mad days??


The pre-nuptial track is already done. It's something else I've planned.😉
But yes, it's connected to his mad days.😈


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

I was laughing like anything! My roommate is just rolling her eyes, and muttering unintelligible something! But who cares! Shravan thinking about having a family is ❤️

,sumo the thor was🤣
Eye for an eye! 👏
But what's cooking! Lara you better not do something horrendous to ShraMan! 😕
All in one the update was 👍🏼

Thank you for the pm! 🤗
Please update soon, like real soon! 😃


haa haa... that situation with your roommate sounds hilarious. lol... 😆

I'm nearly done writing, will updt as soon as it is possible.
Thanks.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Wonderful update.

Quintessential suman...
Scores settled between the brothers regarding the black eye.

Girl, you are scaring me with the ending. ..I hope it's more to f o with nirmala and past memories then...shravan sumo divorce. ...

Thanks for the pm


Glad to know I'm successful in scaring you. *evil laugh😈 *Swings the black cloak and disappears.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Castile2

Oh my Lara b ⭐️ 👏 😲


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Oh boy 🤣 this is me.. on the floor. with the SUMO-THOR scene. He sprinted thinking he had done something wrong. bwahahaha 😆😆 husband mentality

Pushkar is going to be killed if he doesn't come up with something smart and quick soon to fix this.

gaah. still laughing. Shravan got his revenge as well 😆

the last part... hmm.. not a clue yet. but will have to go back I think in hunt for clues. Nemesis...


amazing update girl my eyes have tears from peeling with laughter.😆


I don't think you'll find any clue back there. 😉

Thanks!
And I'm pleased to know you've laughed so much reading this chap. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Hi Lara...this is the first time I am commenting over here in spite of this story featuring among the top 3 of my all time favourites.

I don't really know why I have refrained from commenting all this while though. .perhaps you are so good at writing that I am intimidated. .what if the comments fall short of expressing my love.

Nonetheless coming to this update my favourite part was towards end, when you so deftly managed to snatch away the chuckle from my lips and replace it with a shocked O...
What could be Shravan's secret. .an ex wife?
I can be pretty dark while imagining the worst.

Loved every bit of this update, Pushkar being cornered made a hilarious read.Sumo in her sassiest best is always the most favourite one of mine.


First time commenting! 🥳
Hey!
Thanks a lot.
I'm so glad to know how much you've enjoyed reading this story. 🤗

Love you so much for deciding to comment.❤️

Please, never hesitate to comment, each one of your comment is so special to me. They're like - pizza, chocolate, snowflake, rain, rainbow, ice-cream... *breaths... I guess you get the point. 😃 So, pls, comment.
I assure you that I'm not an intimidating person. I'm like a puppy who loves to analyze and then write about human emotions. 😳

Will look forward to read more from you.
Take care.




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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Sumo is on full of Sumo mode, Malhotra brothers had to run for their lives...such an idiot Pushkar how did he so dumb ab sherni se panga liya hai toh khud sher bhi kuch nehin kar sakta... "I m having baby" whiskey made him insane he didn't know what he was saying... yes end para made me really scary was there any contract signed by Shraman over any Divorce related or separation related papers...Lara plz I don't like sad ending since last many episodes story going very smoothly I can't read again sad chapters where Sumo again breaks down...

Thanks for PM

Vinu


Thanks, dear!

I won't be lying, sad times are ahead.
And, it may sound weird but I do love writing about sadness.😭
But that doesn't have to mean that I'll give a sad ending to the story. 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: VrindaTewary21

finally i came to know from where to drop comments on india forums😆...i have read all the chapters in one go...and now no more silent reading😛 just cant express how fantastic this story is...frankly speaking, i have started loving written stories more than the telecasted episodes because expression of scenes and most importanly the intimate scenes would have never been a part of our beloved show edkv...sorry if i offended anyone but its just my POV...anyways lara di i just love your story, the way u present each emotion is amazing...👍🏼 upset to know that u are ending it😭 plz continue if possible...😊 i joined india forums just to read your story and i am happy to have done so...

so now as of this chapter as already i said how awesome it is...the best part was the comic scene when sumo chases pushkar😆 and then throws her hammer through the window🤣...it was really hard controlling my laughter...😃eagerly waiting for the next chapter and looking forward to more shraman moments😉 update soon😊


Oh, hey!
I've read your comments on wattpad too. Thanks a lot! 🤗

I'm glad you figured out how to drop comments here. I know, it's a little tricky at first but then practice makes it perfect. 😃

I'm sooo happy to know that you love my writing. Thank you so much. That's so kind of you, dear.

And you joined indiaforums to read Bitter Sweet! Wow!
Girl... I love u! ❤️
Thanks. You don't know how emotional I've gotten here. *tightest hug.

Will updt asap. I'm nearly done writing the next chap.😃
Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

sumo as thor
loved it
too funny
continue soon
superb


Thanks a lot, dear! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mogu_togu

Ha ha ha... i laughed like crazy reading it.. sumo in full form.. and what happened to our hero.. scardey cat... lol...

Waiting for next chap... bit worried abt the skeltons.. but a firm believer that love conquers all...

Thanks a lot for the pm !!! I read the chapter twice in a go... already awaiting for next pm...


Love conquers all.
Hold onto that thought, hard. ShraMan are going to have to need it. 💔

You've read the chapters twice in one go?😲😳
Thanks, dear. Love you so much.❤️

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