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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: Safire
It was mostly hilarious and a little bit scary at the end...
And I love this line from the chapter"he wanted to be her nest and never her cage"
How I wish all husbands in the world to think like this...

Thank you so much!❤️

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: violetgirl
Woah Lara awesome man..rocking Thor avatar..I had fun till the bit where Shravan has a hidden agenda in his books..I am waiting..how have you been dude?cheers d

Hey, thanks! 🤗

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#583

Originally posted by: _Eternity_
Lara amazing update dear...
shra looking at her pic with baby.aww...so cute..
pushkar.sipping whiskey and he knows sumo gonna come for his life...lol
then malhotra brothers running for life ..sumo and Thor mast combination.. love that ...
pushkar toh gya and shra.did.right..black.eye ..lol..
but last part is.scary haan what has shra done...
hilarious update love.it..

Yep, the scary bit starts from there...

Let's see what's up next. 😉

Thanks!

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_
Omg! Omg! #Dream ☺️ my late latifi..!#Disaster 😒
This one is dedicated to me !😳😳 I feel on top of the world! !😃😃
Over whelmed !! Thank you sooo much !!🤗

Kuch din se mujhe,,,Teri aadat ho gayi hai..! Missing much is happening!

Never thought, Sumo n toddler will make a comeback! ! And like how..!! Such a beauty!! Dreamy look...milky scent! !
Headline! ! I guess it states whats on her mind..!😉
Revising the laws!!... Law of fantasizing !! 😆
The Man and the Mask !!... Enthralling !!
Love sets you free..!! Each of those lines,,is love to die for..!!❤️

Too tempting to resist! #receptionist☺️
Sumo in Sumo avatar! Malhotra boys are over!!🤣
Pushkar- Shravan convo...hilarious! !😆 idea of an open window !!haha

The last lines...😲😲 nail biting ! ! Dhak dhak-dhak dhak.!

Amaaazing update as ever!
Thanks once again!

Thanks you so much, dear!😳

I'm glad you've enjoyed this chap, hopefully the next one will also be if your liking. But I must admit, more horror is lurking around the corner. 😈

Take care.

*Hugs.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#585

OMG! I thought it was suman thought to bang pushkar with a hammer and she actually try to did that.

The office scenes, pushkar running n hiding to save his life n then sharavan phunch were amazing. Though they were pretty serious but I laughed a loud reading them.

I enjoyed a lot reading this chapter and I loved sumo as Thor, one of my favorite avengers.

Looking forward to read more.

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

haa haa... that situation with your roommate sounds hilarious. lol... 😆

I'm nearly done writing, will updt as soon as it is possible.
Thanks.

Waiting waiting.. 😳

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#587

*I claim all copyrights of this work. Do not plagiarize this story, no part / scene / dialogue of it may be copied, reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means without my (Clara Ricks's) written permission. Plagiarizing my works will be taken as an offence and will be dealt with properly, and know that it is punishable by the forums and law. If you find anyone copying my works, please do let me know.*

Dedicating this chapter to - reshmanair356 🤗

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Surprise... surprise!!🥳

Here comes the hurricane. What would you name it?

I'm freaking excited to write the next chapter, because I love writing this kind of stuff where there's a lot of tears. 😈🤪

But seriously, how many of you think Shravan had cheated on Sumo? That too at their freaking wedding night? Now..., now, that can be deal breaker.

I forgot Pushkar's father's complete name and so named him Devnath Malhotra here. It matches Ramnath Malhotra. 😳

Please don't forget to let me know what part / scene / dialogue you enjoyed the most in this chapter. And the giant chapter wants to be liked, so please press the like button. Comment and let me know of your thoughts about the story, about shraman, your predictions, and anything that you want to tell me. Your reviews help me so much to write. Show me your support!🤗

Thanks a lot for your likes and comments on the last chapter. I love you all for maing me feel this wonderful. ❤️❤️❤️

Lots of love,

Lara.

P.S.1. People who've liked and commented will get PMs.

P.S.2. Forgive the mistakes in this chap.

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#588

Res!

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Thesis on the way😆

Firstly, every time I res, just assume that I've loved it and a lecture will follow soon...

Secondly, why do you like throwing curve balls? I suck at cricket 🤔

Coming to the update, I like how you keep certain members constantly in your updates. It's enduring that you take into consideration the fact that the story should be as close to reality as possible. Sanzh 😳 and Rahul Makes me think there is more to their story than meets the eye...

Vagga🤣

He has the nerve to throw in loop holes.

First off that's Sumo,

Second off she is Shravan Malhotra's wife,

Thirdly, she is angry Mrs. Suman Shravan Malhotra, a mix that cannot be taken lightly. I'm surprised she didn't make Vagga paratha and serve it with chilled lassi.

There are times history repeats itself, there are also times when we repeat them intentionally 🤣 ROFL!

"Well honey, I brought you Pushkar here" I laughed so damn hard at this😆

"Just talk" Shravan knows her too well. If she had her way, Pushkar would be dead meat.

Their little pacification-proud moment! Definitely my handy work!Swag toh dekho bande ka!😎

"For creation can never be a sin but killing it is.." 👏Take a bow buddy! I agree forever more!

I love how Shravan can do but so much as place his hand on her's and bring down her temperature in no time❤️

I loved how you've written the convincing the family bits. So true to realism. Also I like how everyone knows of the pregnancy. Had this been on the show, the four wouldn't have told a soul. 😆

Kamini😡 She sure as hell can fall low.

What words👏

You do know I love angst and angry pieces right. I may hate every word that came out of Kamini's mouth but that only means that it was written with much finesse. I loved it!

But what did she say? Shravan? Mistress?

W*F! No What in the actual frigging hell!

You ask here comes the hurricane what is it called?

Hurricane thy name is Carol.

I'm sure Suman will ask and I'm more certain Shravan will reply in the affirmative. That he did visit this hurricane but did he cheat? Nope. That I don't buy. I know your Shravan enough to know he wouldn't do that. He must have visited her for another reason.

Lara, be nice and update this sooner, anxiety will get the better off me other wise!

Can't wait for the next!

P.S. Pushkar's daddy's name was Shyamnath.. Shyam and Ram you see😆

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

@Itssanjh

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#589

res

****

Unres

Never waited for any ff to be updated!

Carol!!!😲😲 just dropped the full bottle of water on my bed! (sigh)

Was enjoying the chapter thoroughly, Sumo-pushkar part 👏, both the families agreed gr8, but then you just blasted a bomb! 😕😕 What will Sumo the thor do? Bechara Shravan! 😆😆 God save him! I don't think he has cheated on suman!

Lovely update as usual, but this kamini, ufff! 😡

Chalo let's see aage kya hota hai! Will be waiting for the next update! 🤗

P. S btw Sanzh(my name, not the spelling though😳) and her boy, both are always a treat to read!

Edited by Itssanjh - 8 years ago

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Nik03

@Nik03

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#590

Ressi res 😳
****
Unres
Waoh!!...Blasting one Lara 👏
Sanzh 😆
Destroying a disobeying husband's office with a hammer... 😆
N Rahul the cutie pie.. 😳

Vegga!!...Oh man 😆
I just love this character of yours... 😉 😆
His Loophole theory... 😆
Loved Sumo's reaction... 😆
And what a perfect timing to make a entry Shravan-Pushkar..!!

There're times when history repeats itself but then there're also times when people repeats it intentionally... 😆

Loved how you have shown Shravan's presence and words calms Sumo.❤️
ShraMan ❤️

What a handy-work Shravan...👏 😆
Scare-crow gone mad...😆
Poor Pushkar...But you deserve it man!!

Abortion 😲
Its not a solution...It can never be!!
For creation can never be a sin but killing it is... 👏
Soo true bro..!!
Thank God n you that it didnt happened!!

The reconciliation scene was beautifully penned down dear...❤️
Loved it!!

what we think is the end is where the story-teller decides to stop telling...Beautiful one!!
The whole informing family scene was superbly written dear...Ec
veryone's reactions ...👍🏼

That dangerous curve...Kamini Malhotra..!!
Such a devil!!
Loved Kamini-Sumo interaction..❤️
Dialogues man... 👏
Soo apt n powerful ...Awesome job bro 👏

But But But!!!!
WTH!!
Shravan n infidelity... 😲
No!!
Shracan cant do that...He just cant!!...Not At All!!
That hurricane Carol...Oh My My!!
So that was all about this thing that Shravan was thinking about that day!!
But Shravan cant cheat on Sumo!!

What a way to end the chappiii Lara... 😳
Fab upii dear... 👏
Thanjs for the pm n plzzz do cont soonish!!
Cant handle this curiosity now... 😛
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nikka sa Nik😆

Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago

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