Lara! I have never ever been at a literal loss of words. This moment goes down in history. I read the part, I reread the part and I reread it again till I finally had some words to put up here. See how late I am in commenting, it's all your doing. You blew me away with this one. So much so that I didn't want to comment till the comment was worthy of this piece. I still think no combination of words would suffice, but try I shall.
Firstly take massive hugs 🤗 🤗
The entire build up of A Night that would be Remembered, the wait was more than made up for. Goes without saying I read the Wattpad Version. And simply put, I loved it! I will however list out a few things that absolutely stood out in this masterpiece.
The initial giddy in love moments, the terrace swinging, the footsie at dinner it all made me blush like a puddle of goo. I love your ShraMan. I want a Shravan as envisioned by you. Each of us should have one of him.
If I was a happy unicorn a few moments earlier I became pensive when I got to the kidnapping part. I was always bothered with Khurana. The entire bit I was reading so fast, as though reading fast would get it over soon, I just had to know they got out unhurt. I was wrong in judging Vagga wasn't I. He did do the job plus one. Who's the handsome looking guy calling himself insane? No more surprises please Lara.
When Shravan's many missed calls and messages came to light, my heart felt for him. He would have died had she not answered the 34th time. His anger, you wrote it so well I could imagine Namik and his raging bull act. It was a treat. I wish he would have boomed a little longer. But the get out seemed to fit the bill just fine. I can't believe Vagga tried to brag, messing with the lion, he was lucky he lived. It did make me laugh though.
Shravan was right in worrying cause I have a bad feeling about this too. Lara my love, be kind. I know Khurana won't sit quite but don't be too harsh. I simply can't bare to see the two hurt.
Shravan in the shower was an amazingly written part and everything that followed managed to invoke too many feelings. It hit the right spot. I had to pause after each sentence. You slayed it. Very few writers have a knack to write mature without going overboard or graphic. You had the perfect hint of intensity, love and intimacy! I'll leave it at that.
I am declaring this by far your best piece. Spellbinding.
I am yet to read a piece quite like this. Thank you for surpassing my expectations. This I will remember for a long, very long time. You do know your work is an inspiration to me right? You are an inspiration.
Can't wait for your next.
Love and limitless admiration,
Zoya
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