FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 42

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

absolutely brilliant

totally loved it

especially the moon date

so romantic

continue soon

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

Thanks for PM LARA 😃

First Date...red moon just wow...and SHRAMAN moments loved so much 👏

But sumo will be sumo why she is hiding things from Shravan 😔...james bond sumo

PLZ update soon

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Lara,
Another amazing update from you. Very well written and beautifully described the blood moon. I have a feeling that these masala walas might mess it up. And with Sumo not confiding in Shravan, who is unaware of these developments and diligently planning their wedding night, I don't know what the outcome will be. Hopefully Shravan understands her. Waiting for the next update already.

Lubna.

Originally posted by: Faith28

Superb!! Just loved the moon gazing...u described it beautifully...❤️ And their cosy romance😳😉 Glad to see suman in sumo wrestler mode,but worried kahi ye masale wale kuch lafda na kar de😕 Dont want her to go through that same khurrana chapter again Why do i feel the rescue mission n shravans wedding night surprise are gonna clash?!🥱 Whatever , i just hope sumo gives some inkling to shravan abt her mission...and they rescue mrs khurannas brother😊 im so loving this Shravan...all gooey gooey ☺️❤️ Cant wait for the next update😊

Originally posted by: arshuaar

awesome...
beautifully penned...
loved it...
Shraman...
thanx for PM...😊

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res
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Unres
OMG!!OMG!!
U had dedicated this chappii to me Lara...Aww 😳 ...It means a lot to me dear !! So thank u soo much!!
<🤗>< 🤗>< 🤗 >
Coming to the update...
What an amazing update dear!! 👏
Detective sumo...interesting!!
So Shravan took her to d tallest building of d city...
"More adoring is when we women peel off that skin of confidence and reveal the real man with fears and flaws underneath"...Well said !!
I just loved shravan's answer to it..."And you've already succeded in doing so"...
I loved to see shravan revealing his true feeling infront of sumo!!
THE BLOOD MOON!!
What a surprise Mr. Malhotra!!
"I can not forget a thing about you ,somo, I've tried and failed and figured i'll be easier forgetting myself in stead"...Oh My Shravan is killing with his words!!
" Your nerd"...Yes sumo's nerd!!
How beautifully you've described their loving moments here dear!! 👏
Sumo is indeed a strong girl who emerged as a winner from her dark past!!
N now my personal favourite part(although whole update is 👏 ) ..." But I want your darkness as well. Sumo , I want all of you. I want all the good and the bad and the worst of you"...And shravan said it all!! 👏
Oh God!! Sumo n her gangster activities!! 😆
I soo love shravan's jealous n possessive side!! 😳
When your "Right time" will come Mr. Malhotra!!
Shravan is also tormented by the wait to make sumo his...U hav described Shravan's feelings very well dear!!
All in all it was mind blowing update dear!! 👏
Uff!! I haven't written this long before ever!!
Plz update sooonish dear...eagerly waiting!!
Loads Of Love 🤗
Nik

Originally posted by: sapphire3

RES 😛
Haven't read last 3 chapters .
Reply in blue

Will unres it soon ...pinky promise 😛
You didn't send me pm 🥺
Judge Saab badi nainsafi hai 😭 😆


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Firstly so so sorry for being late
Blame my laziness 😆

I'm damn late in replying and even in giving a new chapter too these days. So it's definitely okay, dear, don't worry.😳

Chapter37
Journey to the past
He now knows what she had been through all those years he spent hating her
The guilt had been so much he decided to run away .
Aww he recruited guards to ensure her safety knowing well his stubborn wife would refuse to close the window ...how thoughtful ❤️
Are men like him still in stock??
"You are cheating on my sumo" 🤣 both malhotras are adorbs ❤️
Ahem ahem someone is getting desperate 😉

I'm positive that men like him are still in stock, but the problem is the stockful of them are quite expert in the game of hide-seek. 😉

If you find one, lemme know. 😃

Chapter 38
Ugh my imaginations ran wild after that "Then don't " ...you mercilessly put an end to them. But who am I to complain when we have you . Your ideas are far better than mine (actually there's no comparison)

Aww... thanks a lot, dear!

The not so confession followed by kisses *blushes furiously*
He want to court her
Sumo flustering shravan is so much fun 😆
Ahh he made breakfast for her . Already I'm in dreamland with shravan
Lara you are the writer na please find another one for sumo 😉

hee hee... no reply here... 😳

Chapter 39
Arghh Sakshi khurana . Why am I not so pleased to see her ? 😕
Sumo acting Sherlock and shravan being clueless of her rescue mission ...I'm not having good feelings about this one
Omg !!!! Blood moon gazing !!!!!
Can a date be more romantic ?
I absolutely loved loved loved this concept ❤️
These masala wala gonna ruin all plan 😕
Please please dont let this rescue mission and his plans for wedding night clash...pretty please
All three chapters were beyond awesome !!!!!!

Thank you so much, dear!

*hugs and kisses

Love
Priyam

Love you too!❤️

Originally posted by: shaggy8

Blood moon date was amazing, beautifully penned ... loved it. .
Masale wala kidnaper... haha.. 😆 ...
Plz update next part soon 😃 ..
Thanks for pm...

Originally posted by: Nirvrithi

Intense!! Thats the word for this part... Thanks Lara.. Did I ever tell you this is my most favourite shraman story??

Btw..Not only Sumo, we are all getting impatient