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Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#381

AwesOme update
The whole kidnapping thing is just just amazing
Shravan's restlessness for sumo
His concern that someone might have harm his sumo
Sumo's daring attitude
And ohh lastly how can i forget the blissfull night
It was much more awaited and it was worth waiting gor...
Ohhh lara .. My love u have penned down the mature content without any vulgarity
Which is the toughest part i guess...
And tge way u wrote it ..
"""" super hot..
During nthe intimate moments how shravan asked her permission is really overwhelmingly
And onemore thing i am scared that u mention if he will leave her she will die... Dont make it asad ending plzzz

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

#382

Awesome update

Their romantic dates and courtships were very sweet.

Lolz, I loved vagga, a masalawala in morning n a gang leader in night.

Looking forward to read more.

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Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#383

Firstly... i've been waiting for such a long time to get ur update, and when u do...u blew me up..☺️.AMAZING!! BEAUTIFUL!! Brlliantly narrated👏 It was PURE Lourrrvvee❤️ U got me breathless babe...not with just the heart-thudding romance but the showdown post kidnap kaand too...it felt so real...👍🏼 Hes bound to get mad,hurt,angry...ye ladki hai hi pagal...sumogiri ne shravan ki jaan nikaldi😆 glad they didnt wait for another right/perfect moment ... Every moment is precious 😳Spl mention to Vagga walas HONOUR ...salute to u i say👏

Thnx for pm...plzzz update soooner babe.

Wishing u a happy and a joyous new year🥳😊

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mogu_togu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#384

Was so happy to get the PM. Read both the versions and loved it. So damn good and loved the way u ended it... no protection... my my my... you are a wonderful writer...👏

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Nik03

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Posted: 8 years ago

#385

Res 😳
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Unres

What an update dear... 👏
Loved it !!

ShraMan's courtship period was soo awww!! 😳

What a Plan Sumo...!!...as expected she kept it a secret from Shravan
Oh my my!!33 missed calls... 😲
Loved Shravan's text msgs...they shows clearly how angry n worried sick he was!!
Have I told you that I am in love with your Shravan...Angry, Annoyed, Worried, Arrogant, Fiercely Protective, Possesive, passionate Shravan is just Love!!!!

A special shout out to Vegga here...!!!
He rescude two people instead of one 🤣

A businessman of finest spices by day and the leader of my gang at night. I offer special and exceptional services to loyal customers by the way.
It just cracked me up 🤣

Shravan was soo angry but still he let Sakshi Khurana stay in his home n promised to help... ❤️
Shravan's anger...Sumo's guilt...ShraMan's patchup!!... You Wrote it too well dear!! 👏

Delaying a moment is a moment lost forever...Soo true Sumo!!!

Loved their passionate moments together!! 😳
You wrote it soo well dear n without making it awkward...Hatsoff to u!! 👏

We didnot used any protection...Ahh!!
What a cliffhanger!!!
Exited too see what happens next...!!
This time plz update soon dear...waiting eagerly
Loads of Love n 🤗
Nik

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#386

Hi Lara... Happy New Year dear...

It was hot & hottest part since u started the story...I hope Sumo's rescue mission won't back fire her ... Khuranna will definetly try to harm her... I knew it Shravan will mad on her after he came to know this her adventurous job ... He was scared for her safety... Plz make sure Shravan always be there for Sumo... Why I m feeling that something is going very bad...somebody will be hurt ...plzz don't give sad or tragedy ending... They came closer after so days of their marriage... They have just started their life as a husband & wife... Plzz don't apart them...

It was nice & blissful night for Shraman... They r become one now... Plz keep Khurrana away from them..!..

Thanx for the PM ... I read it on Wattpad also... & commented there also...

Thank u dear for long & hot part...

Vinu

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Meera

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Posted: 8 years ago

#387

Awesome update as always... Rescue mission part was quite exciting

Masala Wala has bought a bonus gift😆 curious to know who is he

Shravan was really mad which shows how much concerned nd scared he was..

Really liked the part where sumo explains shravan that delaying a moment is a moment lost.. Beautifully penned

Thanks for the PM

Plz continue soon

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anonymousanju

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Posted: 8 years ago

#388

Lara your my darling man..Happy New year😊

. thanks for the pm.😊. you just nailed it again.. made my day :)

the words that I loved were many more like gutter brain, hilarious it was😉.., saucer eyes.., adventures of sumo😛..lol.. n more..

n dialogs yar I loved each n every single word. 😊.

that evening kiss scene,😳 when an old age couple gave then disappointed look, hilarious it was..

their sweet, lovely moments n the restaurant think was naughty..😆

Then sumo smiling n thinking about shravan all the time.. its just obvious.. when you love someone wholeheartedly😳 ..

The terrace scene, her keen feelings, the swing that moment, everything was beautiful n perfect..

n when her phone beeped, don't know but I got intuition that it must be from sakshi n damn it was really her message..

the sakshi n her brother rescue part was breathtaking, scaring n funny also..

Vagga reminded me of d se dhurandhar :;) lol.. 😃n

God so many missed calls n msgs God I just love this man😊..he's real love.. n their convo obviously anyone would be scared hearing kidnapping word😭..

finally rescuing mission completed successfully :) ..that's relief..

n hell of a lot angry shravu, well sumo knew it..the frustration, anger, fear of loosing her, God he's become epitome of expressions..

n loved how vagga defended himself n his friends..

. thanks God sakshi told shravu that sumo wanted to tell him but she didn't, cause of sakshi..

n meethi, she's a darling.😊.

n how shravu ignored sumo.. those moments were heart wrenching.. 😭:(

when he came out in a towel, God sumo, n her dirty mind, how she was staring him like a hawk 😛

n finally they talked..I heaved a sigh of relief..

n then their kiss n man he had decorated the room for them .. I was speechless for a moment..how can anyone be that much lovely.. this man is pure love.😊.

n finally they made love😳 ...whoa the most awaited moment..

n at last their convo, shravu ki curiosity n sumo ki lazy replies were kinda funny n cute also😆...

the name of the chapter really suited it well.. loved it Lara.. you nailed it man.👏. love ya.. will read wattpad thing also :) . .

I just hope nothing bad happens when that monster bas***d khurrana comes back..

now waiting for next pm eagerly... waiting for more adventures ...😊

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arshuaar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#389

Happy New year😊

thanks for the pm.😊
beautifully penned...
...Shraman...

just hope nothing bad happens...

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phoenix_edkv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#390

HAPPY NEW YEAR Lara. i wish you an amazing 2017. keep showering us with your most perfect pieces of SHRAMAN.

A NIGHT TO REMEMBER is surely a CHAPTER to remember. its so perfect. the late night walks and the messages all the day along

the kidnapping part was fun. and finally the RIGHT TIME arrived and this is one of the those perfectly penned intimate scenes and its just awesome. i absolutely loved it.

your stories make me nostalgic. im missing those shraman nok-jhoks a lot. and when i read your stories i can really imagine an extra caring shravan and a careless sumo.

read it on wattpad too. please update soon.

PS- i didnt receive the pm😔

love

Madhu