FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 27

Originally posted by: trayee

nice...waiting fr the long awaited intimacy...

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Beautifully penned...

Waiting since long for Shraman's intemacy... Finally coming on the way...

Shravan keeping himself away from Sumo... Its a toughest thing he is doing since long...

Update soon...

I didn't get PM this time... So next time pls

Originally posted by: Joyness

Just loved it...shravan showering gifts after gifts great...mus clearing...waiting fir the next update

Originally posted by: LubSha

Hi Lara, was waiting for this chapter after read the others in one go. Very beautifully written. I really like this pace of the story and how how you cover little details. Looks like Sumo is getting into something dangerous, but I just hope she doesn't hide it from Shravan.
Last part was awesome. The notes, gifts and his hearty talk. Eagerly waiting for the next part. Update soon please.

Lubna.

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

Lara thanks for pm sweety...was waiting for ur update badly...n thanks for understanding that my heart stays at peace when I speak everything out :) about the chapter oh darling I really didn't want it to end ;) I was like oh my finally at least they'll kiss now ...but :( chapter ended...please update next one soon...I'm dying to read as u already said ur too excited to write ... about the chapter from beginning ...ah their poshness aka fakeness ...the gate guards.. pity them...how happy they became when sumo gave them advice...lol...n vandy cute but dumb n height of show offness ...how she welcomed sumo nn the sarcasm sumo threw on her was God she's really dumb...can't even catch a sarcasm... n sanzh n her son rahul ...oh he must be a cutie...liked the way sanzh retorted back to vandy saying he's an angel not a devil...lol... n how this lil cutiepie was stick to sumo...adorable kid...n then kamini seriously can't ever change...such a cunning lady...n how she was indicating to sakshi...arrgghh...but loved it when sumo replied her sarcastically yet firmly...leaving kamu stunned...lol...n then sakshi n sumo k convo ...God I pity this lady...khurrana is such a monstrous bas***d...why don't someone kill this f**king asshole... how could he stoop so low?? well he's already stooped ...as sumo said right, he's mentally sick...n such creature should rest in jail or mental asylum...sumo the brave girl...loved it the way she was giving strength to sakshi...n ah shravu is their to save his tigress from crocodile's mouth Lara...my guess ;) this time shravu will kill him...if he even dare to touch sumo... n in morning...the note with mobile...my God "yours, husband" ...whoa...n then next day clothes n undergarments ...rofl...n "I've the right ...yours, husband" ...God this man...how he hugged sumo from behind , holding her waist ...I love backhugs... <3 n the intensity in his eyes God ...my cheeks started to turn pink, but the color faded faster than it started coloring my cheeks as the chapter ended...loved it as usual Lara...ur an amazing writer darling...update next chapter soon please... n the best dialogs are for me "please throw that phone, I don't like to see you in torn n old clothes, I've the right" ...n the best words were "yours, husband" ;) waiting for next pm...love u my dear...:)

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing update... really liked Sanzh will love to see sumo nd Sanzh as best friends...Nd what a befitting response to Kamini 's Taunts...

Everytime new revelation is made related to khurana start hating him more Nd more

Loved the notes attached with every gift

Plz continue soon

Originally posted by: mamajani15

Hey where's the story in whatpad? 😕

Originally posted by: krits67

Amazing update dear

Loved it nd u nailed it as always

I liked last shopping part most

Continue soon

Originally posted by: krutish22

Hey Lara
It's not fair yaar only few shraman moments
Next time update more shraman moments plzzz

By the way Nice update
Thanks for PM

Originally posted by: Sweetheart645

Thanx for the pm...

The chapter is as usual amazing...

Waiting fr the nxt 1...

Ps- my practicals are knocking at my door😭

Nxt tym lamba wala cmmnt krne wali hu... bht kuch kahna hain...

Take care.. tata