FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 29

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow!!! That was awesome dear 👏
I just love this shravan 😊 ...i so wanted to see this shravan in EDKV but.. 😕
But i can see him now through ur writing n am so exicing to see their courtship period
Loved whole convo btw shraman...superb work dear 👏
Plz update next part soonish...waiting 😊
Love
Nik
Edited by Nik03 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Oh la la!

RES!
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Do you think it would be weird if I quoted the entire chapter? I think it would right... See you asked for what parts I liked..
Aww... 😳

I'll be honest, I loved the whole of it!
Not one dull moment not one part our of place. All so perfect...
I'm beating around the bush to find words...

Lara, you Ma'am I have gotten into the habit of tipping my hat to!
Inspirational is what your writing is!
Thank you sooo much, Zoya! 🤗
So sweet of you to say such lovely things, dear.😳

Coming to the update. I absolutely loved the justification Shravan gave, his running away made complete sense. Your vision here is commendable. Poor Sumo, she's been through so much. Poor Shravan, the guilt ain't letting go anytime soon...
Pheww... I had a little trouble while expressing his reasons here. 'm glad you found it all apt. 😊

His concern is ❤️
He got a guard posted below her window.. Your Shravan takes my heart away!
Only if guys like this could exist in real life... 😭 🤪

Pushkar Shravan confrontation was beyond epic 🤣 You are cheating on my Sumo! The hell😆 I like how Shravan went all protective there...
Then get ready, more of possessive / protective husband syndrome coming up soon. Shravan will get only worse with time...😉

His fears, his love, his desires, all were penned so beautifully Lara, I shit you not I blushed 😳Brilliant touch there. I love how he's being open with her and wants her to be open too. He wants to be her shield, heart leapt there!
The last bit, so I feel like the 5 year old who's candy was snatched yet again! Why doth thou torenth me so! I can't wait for the don't stop moment! Did she know what she brought upon? We'll know soon enough..
And no I don't mind if you take longer to reply to my comment, update soonish😆
But I've done both a little late this time I guess. Sollyyy...😳

Oh and special mention to the moral and the little couplets you add here and there. They literally make the work stand out.
Oh. I'm so glad you liked them as well.

Love and adoration,
Zoya

Thank you so much, Zoya!
You never fail to leave a huge smile on my face, sweety. Love you! ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago
FIIINAALLLY YOU ARE HERE...
u know have been starving for yur update...n just to stabalise me i had read chap 37 gazillion times like literally...inteha hi ho gae inteezar ki
Dil ko sakoon roh ko karrar agaya...Lara ka PM jaisay jeenay ka farman agaya (cheesy na😳🤪)
for now...



Ressi res!!
***
Unres



SUNSHINE..!!!!😃

first of all a big big bearie one for you...take this🤗

*sigh*...where do I start from...all awestruk😳

Loved it to core ❤️ totally entirely completly thoroughly..aahh..its like if it would have been a choclate or something i would have had devoured it by now with lots...no no no...tonz of joy...it was that yumilicious ...i was like bas i need it all for myself ...mean na...what do i do...you always manage to short a dance party in my heart and this time its fanatical one 😉...Sheer bliss

Sunshine...honestly speaking...i was highly expecting the "sub kuch"😳 part but as i started reading disappointment struk me,to know we were not getting any of that 😒 ...BUT BUT BUT!!!

the amazing turning point is as i proceeded my diasppointment as if sublimated and a hiiuugee grin appeared on my face 😃which only got deeper and deeper..u knw all satisfied😃

Throughout the chap i was awwing or adoring.. 😳 ..You astonished me to core literally i mean you pulled it stupendously..this was way way way much better than what i imagined!

What can be better than starting a fresh living each and every monment you couldn't back than but as you can now so why to waste this golden opportunity and Shravan took no second to waste his opportunity...he longed for her no dout but for his Sumo her happiness her dreams he chose or you can say sacrifice his desires his fervency for only her...and that thing touched my heart ..he wanted to pamper her love her give her a complete relation instead of that grievious one they were living...this time they'll surely cherish their moments...i can't wait for that to happen😳

So the CourtShip idea is👍🏼

Awwhh...he cooked ...shhoo sweet...❤️

The thing which cracked me into fits was Sumo planning to bind her husband to the bed😆 ...woah shez also desperate😳 ..these childhood sweethearts...❤️...N her teasy game was outstanding just to make him want more and not to make them wait for a century..☺️...Sunshine u stole my heart in every part...loved it to the deepest core...its like m fighting with myself for apropriate words to define ur excellency...U r terrific...love u love u love u..muuuhhh😳...n Hy no chappals for u han...only choclates and flowers..n han huggies also🤗🤗

about Preekar i still remember my train of thoughts😆...really God Bless Kamini🤣

i wanted to ask...the reason why she agreed to marry Shravan is still not disclosed rite...Shravan still dosenot knw about the agreement that she married him to save Tiwari Killa...or he already knows..😳


wel i guess by know u wud hav read my pm so Sorry once again...love yaa dear n will surely try to read the nxt part soon n give my views too..😳

Till thn...


Take Care!

Sunain.❤️


Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww I love this. Awesome update. Finally... they understood their feelings for each other. Waiting to see how shravan charms sumo. I almost read the 37 th chapter every freaking day. So please please please update soon this time.
Love
Madhu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunain

FIIINAALLLY YOU ARE HERE...

u know have been starving for yur update...n just to stabalise me i had read chap 37 gazillion times like literally...inteha hi ho gae inteezar ki
Dil ko sakoon roh ko karrar agaya...Lara ka PM jaisay jeenay ka farman agaya (cheesy na😳🤪)
for now...

Ressi res!!


Yep! Finally...😃

Dil ko sakoon roh ko karrar agaya...Lara ka PM jaisay jeenay ka farman agaya
-Wah wah!😆

Will be waiting for your unres...❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

Aww I love this. Awesome update. Finally... they understood their feelings for each other. Waiting to see how shravan charms sumo. I almost read the 37 th chapter every freaking day. So please please please update soon this time.

Love
Madhu


Hey, Madhu. Thanks!
Wow! You've read chap 37 almost everyday... 😳

Sorry to keep you waiting. Will try to updt sooner this time around.

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Posted: 8 years ago
This was awesome . ..loved it
Thank u for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome...
thank you for PM 😊
ShraMan...courtship...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Unressed on pg. 29 and 30

My last post.
Edited by Castile2 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Lara,
Thanks for making my day. I was just excited with your pm that you updated a new chapter, and was pleasantly surprised that you dedicated it to me. Thanks again. Coming to the chapter, I was expecting something more for sure, but the courtship was the logical way to go. Sumo does deserve more. I'm sure if the show was still on, they would have followed the same story line. After all your story had Shravan force court marriage long before that happened in the show. I feel you are very calm as a writer, and that shows in your writing which is commendable.

This was a beautiful chapter. Shravan wants to take it slow and win her heart first even though it was so hard for him to restrain. 😉 That was depicted really well. It would be definitely interesting to see how and well the courtship goes on. I would suggest long drive and beach walk would impress Sumo and anything, even messages during the day or just a chat after dinner can go a long way.
With Sakshi's phone call it seems it will be quite adventurous ride ahead. Really hope Sumo let Shravan know about it.

Good luck Lara and I really hope you update soon. 👏

Lubna.


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