Originally posted by: orion23
Oh la la!
RES!
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Do you think it would be weird if I quoted the entire chapter? I think it would right... See you asked for what parts I liked..
Aww... 😳
I'll be honest, I loved the whole of it!
Not one dull moment not one part our of place. All so perfect...
I'm beating around the bush to find words...
Lara, you Ma'am I have gotten into the habit of tipping my hat to!
Inspirational is what your writing is!
Thank you sooo much, Zoya! 🤗
So sweet of you to say such lovely things, dear.😳
Coming to the update. I absolutely loved the justification Shravan gave, his running away made complete sense. Your vision here is commendable. Poor Sumo, she's been through so much. Poor Shravan, the guilt ain't letting go anytime soon...
Pheww... I had a little trouble while expressing his reasons here. 'm glad you found it all apt. 😊
His concern is ❤️
He got a guard posted below her window.. Your Shravan takes my heart away!
Only if guys like this could exist in real life... 😭 🤪
Pushkar Shravan confrontation was beyond epic 🤣 You are cheating on my Sumo! The hell😆 I like how Shravan went all protective there...
Then get ready, more of possessive / protective husband syndrome coming up soon. Shravan will get only worse with time...😉
His fears, his love, his desires, all were penned so beautifully Lara, I shit you not I blushed 😳Brilliant touch there. I love how he's being open with her and wants her to be open too. He wants to be her shield, heart leapt there!
The last bit, so I feel like the 5 year old who's candy was snatched yet again! Why doth thou torenth me so! I can't wait for the don't stop moment! Did she know what she brought upon? We'll know soon enough..
And no I don't mind if you take longer to reply to my comment, update soonish😆
But I've done both a little late this time I guess. Sollyyy...😳
Oh and special mention to the moral and the little couplets you add here and there. They literally make the work stand out.
Oh. I'm so glad you liked them as well.
Love and adoration,
Zoya
Thank you so much, Zoya!
You never fail to leave a huge smile on my face, sweety. Love you! ❤️