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@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

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Dedicating this chapter to "Castile2"

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The scene doesn't end here, we'll see the much awaited intimacy of theirs in the next chapter. I'm so excited to write it!!! eee... ☺️

Also, as you can see - our Sumo is headed towards the crocodile. Will she survive the crocodile's wrath after plucking out all it's teeth?😈 Janne ke liye, stay tuned to Bitter Sweet survival. 😆

Thanks for your awesome response to this story, reading your comments makes me really so happy that it can't be described with words. Keep them coming.❤️❤️❤️

Silent readers - still waiting with open arms.🤗

Please don't forget to - like and comment! Tell me which part, dialogue or scene you liked the most.

Three chapters are updated of Bittersweet Symphony on wattpad. It's (for now) a prequel to this indiaforums version. Check it out if you are interested.

Link here(Click it)

Take care till later.

Lots of love,

Lara.

P.S. PMs will be sent to those who liked and commented.

Edited by devilaonmoon - 8 years ago

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Anum

@anum20jamali

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Hi Lara!!

I was the 1st to res, but got so late in commenting. Sholly!!

I love each n every chapter dat u write 😊 dis 1 didn't hv much of Shraman in it, but my my, d revelations wer shocking 😲 dat bloody asshole Khurana, using his wife's weakness to his advantage 😡 I m so waiting for Shravan and Sumo as well as Sakshi and meethi to thrash him left Nd right and not to forget, police's dandas too, he drives me mad wid rage 😡

The tea party was funny as well as disgusting wen it comes to d food items 😆 Kamini deserved d "in ur face" reply by our gutsy Sumo 👏 And now Sumo is wid Sakshi. Yay!! Hope she takes Shravan's help too, protective Shravan is alwaz an amazing treat

And coming to our Shraman scene, d gifts ❤️ his notes "because I have all rights wife- ur husband" Awww!!! And their much awaited intimacy 😳 I can't wait Lara. Plz kasar puri karna, jo bhi show me nai mila, sab Dying to read it. Plz plz update dis extra soon 😊

Lots of love and hugs,

Anum ❤️

Edited by anum20jamali - 8 years ago

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#163

I am the laziest reader ever..thats the only reason for not commenting earlier.. this is my most fav ff.. i stalk it everyday.. and my fav line from this chapter is.. because I have all rights,wife... I just can imagine it happening...

Nivi

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

RES!!😛

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Lara! Lara! Lara!

What have you done?

Why would you torment me so?

I feel like a 4 year old before whom a massive candy was dangled and then she was told it ain't for her

This would be a test of patience honestly!

You'll be at the receiving end of my impatience though, be prepared 😎

To the update we shall go now..

Love the halloween party!

So well written were the details I could see it all happening..

Poor guards!

Sumo's reply to Kamini! Paisa wasool..

I shit you not I read and reread and reread that part, laughed maniacally and memorised it! I will use it some day to shut some d**k head up!

Sakshi poor lady. I felt for her.. Khurana needs to rot in hell. Promise me he will!

Sumo will help her, I'm not sure if that's a very good idea? Khurana is the devil himself, I'm scared for Sumo, please let it be alright...

And what do I say about the last part? Been in daze since.

Shravan the doting loving husband!!

Rain of gifts! Love!

Dangling red lace! I love even more!

Those lines in a raspy voice, I can't begin to tell you the feels!

And there broke my dream!

It's my favourite part, its continuation will be my favourite part in the next!

Please Please do not keep us waiting long!

Thank you for this one!

Loved it!

Until next time🤗

Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago

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Sunain

@Sunain

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#165

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Laraa...glad to see u back...🤗..long time yar...

haaah...Lara..u r mindblowong..n so was ur update...dazzling one!

Poor guards..😆..Kamni n Vandy r soo cruel..but i thing tht was more of Vandy's essence to the party thn Kamini

Vandy n her antics...she is such a DUMBO..😆..fighting over a kids getup..like srsly..

Sumo's motherly nature awoke..awwh tht part was lovely..

Saznh seemed to be down to earth woman..n her saying..

"by the good looks of u n ur husband...u too r srsly going to produce some very beaiful children"

along with Suman my heart was also jumping...☺️..imaginig their kids ❤️...cant wait for the element thy need for tht😛😆😳...plz yar dont make us wait soo long..

Kamni is never gona change...vampo...i really hate her..always spoiling the atmosphere...😡

but Suman shutted her mouth in a preety awsome way😈..shameless Kamni..

Poor Sakshi Khurana..

WT*????..Tht creep kidnapped her brother..like srsly..wht a mouron he is..bas****😡

hez such an atrocious person...having sheer low morals..

woah..Suman wants to stand for her..woww..thts perlious... wht bout Shravan..how wil he react to her decision..wil he get to knw her plans..if he gets to knw..thn tu there'll be a huge tornado..😕

Awwhh thoz gifts were❤️ n so were the notes..😳..Shravan is soo loving n caring..

tht sneeking into her room at night n sleep with her..this habbit of his is really fascinating..i love tht..alot😳

he bought her lingerie...☺️..n tht note

"becoz i've all the rites,wife"

made me blush n grin harder n harder

me tu AWESTRUK...tht sizzling moment.....n tht cliffhanger😡

puuhhleezzz...continue soon..

cant wait for their much awaited intimacy..😳

love you too my dear🤗..u r my sunshine..muuhhh❤️

thnks for such incedible update!😃

Take Care!

Sunain

Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago

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Izza

@memories_im

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#166

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Loved the update Lara! The party was interesting. You have penned Suman's thoughts perfectly! Loved the last part. Really looking forward to what happens next! So sorry for the late reply.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

OMG!

So that's why he was avoiding her.

Yours, husband, such a beautiful two words.

Can't wait to read more

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Endless_sky

@Endless_sky

Navigator

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Thank you for the pm. loved the update. really liked the scene between Sanzh and Suman a budding friendship I hope you have some more scene between the two Suman needs a friend. LOVED Suman's reply to Kamini, it is not easy standing upto people and I am glad she told her off.. never under estimate the power and strength a person can have. I am looking forward to see how Suman helps Sakshi. aww loved what shravan did for Suman and you left us like that...

Update soon

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Hey Lara!!!
Lol security guards dressed as ogres
Vandy the bimbo couldn't mark the sarcasm 😆 busy flattering herself
Loved sanzh n Suman's convo
Rahul is so adorable ❤️
Aha already dreaming about kids !! Go ahead lady your man is dying to grant your wish *winks*
Omg !! eyeball tarts; cookies with guts topping etc . It took all in me to resist puking. Poor sumo
Kamini is too nosy.
Woah girl!!! That was too good . I was literally jumping in excitement, she verbally slapped kamini . I was hoping shravan would come to her rescue . But this girl is no ABLA NARI *Salutes*
Khurana is pure devil . He should be sent to TARTARUS .
So suman decided to help Sakshi .
ShraMan should be added to the cast of the AVENGERS 😆
Wohoo her Santa showering gifts before Christmas 😃

Because I've all the rights, wife.
Yours,
Husband.
'Husband' never sounded so romantic as it now *blushes hard*
Omggg!!! Am I dreaming ? Dont wake me up then .
Shravan getting all lovey dovey
I love this chappy bas !!!!
Please dont ask me which part is my favourite . As always I can never choose.
Well I suck in this department *sticks out tongue*
All in all this was a dhamakedar update!!
I've to brace myself for romantic moments ahead
I doubt my feeble heart would still beat after reading that chapter .
Please please don't make us wait for too long.
You dont want me to go all Amitabh bachchan n sing
Intehaan ho gyi intezar ki 😆
Let's not bore you with my ramblings .
Main chali 😳

Take care
Priyam

Edited by sapphire3 - 8 years ago