FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Hey lara😛

Thank you for the pm⭐️ the chapter was awesome as usual...i loved it...it was almost all about ShraMan and this is what i loved the most in this chapter...especially the beginning of the chapter...how she warned the intruder and he turn out to be her husband ...and the moment which followed ...i loved it all⭐️
Update next part soonish please⭐️


Hey!
I'm sooo glad you enjoyed the chap.🤗
Will updt asap.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgirl7

loved the chapter very much, i am glad the misunderstanding got cleared.

plz update soon


Thanks a lot!❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

Hey Lara!!!

Hey!

I had already read it once but didn't comment coz of time crunch.
I wanted to re read it n comment in detail 😛
So here I'm 😳
I love detailed comments. *hugs 🤗

As this story progresses I'm having hard time deciding which chapter or which part is my favourite one
This FF is something beyond awesome n my favourite one too 😳
Aww... I'm extremely happy to know that.😳

Poor sumo cried over the prenuptial papers!
How convincingly she lied to the supposed intruder that her husband is in bathroom 😆 . Lil did she know her dear hubby was at the window himself 😆

"I'm that husband himself " cracked me up 🤣
Omg!! She threw the vase at him even after knowing it was him 🤣 So like Sumo 😆
She reminds me so much of our crazy Ellie 😳
The writer is the same after all, so some antics might match in both the hard headed heroines. 😉

He was so worried for her that he climbed up the window .
Loved how he tore the papers saying

"You won't have to take anything from me. All of it's already yours anyway." ❤️
This man is love ❤️
Loving their sleeping arrangements *dreamy eyes*
That was my favourite part

Loved the breakfast convo.
Sumo choking on breadcrumbs 😆 ..deeply affected by her Hott hubby n his cologne 😉 😆
Shravan spluttering tea at the mention of khurana.
He only wanted to protect her n save her from painful memories ❤️
Shravan is ready to take a step forward in their relationship 😳
I'm glad there misunderstandings are clear for now.

Sumo now knows about preekar.
Super se bahut upar wali update 👏 👏 👏
Thank you so much!❤️

Love
Priyam

Love yaa, Priyam!
Take care till the next upload. Tada!

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

finally read it :) ...Lara you're such a darling yar ...wat a start ..loved this chapter as always but most of the parts I was laughing like maniac at morning 3am but silentli you know...otherwise my family members would've thought I've gone mad :p laughing alone in somewhat middle of night upon reading something... had read it yesterday ...thanks to notifications ;) couldn't comment as u know my comments are always long n I don't get peace until I speak my heart out about chapter :-P I knew it was shravu...n this time I was right ;) my prediction u know... n how he climbed to her window...n death hell scared sumo...how she said stop...my husband will come out any moment of bathroom n I warn he'll break ur bones into fine powder..n his reply m the husband itself...lol...hilarious it was... n how sumo threw the vas on him... n he got it...goddamn...she can't lie to him...n the word smart ass lawyer ...rofl... n finally the misunderstanding ...bloody hell got solved...yeah noticed it dear... n their hug, sleeping together...wow... n next morning...the ritualiscally word I was laughing...lol... n on dining table how he called her wifey ...lovely... n her reaction bloody hell he had to sit this close n patting her back made her more miserable...lol... n the dialog I wont die simply of choking n how seriously he said to not use death word..n the expression whoa...funny n lovely at the same time... n khurana part...how he choked n glared meethi like he'll swallow her down... finally they're talking, not hiding things... n friends part seems like will soon change into wifey thing ;) the trust, belief, love, care is building up more n more.. loved the way you described his reaction after reading pre nuptial agreement...how hell shocked he was n how innocently he replied I didn't send it... I think its the bloody bas***d khurrana behind it... n sumo n preeti's part was amazing... how sumo made her accept about their relation...loved it... thanks for the pm dear...waiting for next :) love u sweetie...ur an amazing writer...:)


Yes, I know you want to speak your heart out and I love it.❤️❤️❤️
Thanks you sooo much!
I'm so... very happy that you enjoyed reading the chap.

Will updt asap.
Love you too.🤗
Tada!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shri97

it ws amazing.. I loved hw u cleared the misunderstanding n hw sumo questioned shravan abt those papers directly.. dining table part ws good.. waiting fr nxt part


Hey, thanks!😳
Will updt asap.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mogu_togu

Lovely chapter.. how i wish i was reading this storey like a book .and there was no waiting time...


Aww...
That's such a nice thing to say.
Sorry for the long waits...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: memories_im

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Loved this update Lara! So sorry for the delay in my comment. Shravan will keep on breaking all the walls that Sumo is trying to build around herself. I am glad the misunderstanding got cleared sooner than expected. Seems like Shravan is much more determined to make her realize the depth of their relationship and their feelings. Update soon :)


Thanks a lot, dear!
Yes, Shravan is adamant now and no wall will able to stop him.😃
Will updt asap, a couple more days are needed to get done writing the chap.😕
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: an_chau

Fabulous update as always...

Shravan IS really unstoppable, isn't he? Especially now that he has stopped running away... Let's see where Sumo now hides her feelings...

Also curious to see why and how Khurana makes a comeback...



It will be a progress from both the positive and negative sides. 😉
Khurana will pop out the toaster any moment now🐷,
and our Shravan will go 🤪
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweetheart645

Hi Lara! I hope you remember me!!

I'm so soo late... very very sorry... I told you I'll be back after my exam but was caught in some other probs... soo sorry!! And still my practicals are left!!😭
Now The chapters... i read all those at one go... it totally took an unexpected turn... i knew khurana will be back but not imagined in this way... nd shravan... we seriously need a shravan pov u know... thay did not admit their feelings to each other but atleast we know sumo has admitted to herself... but what about him!!?? Nd it would be nice if they confess this to each other before khurana's interruption... but that's not possible... they still need time... i just hope their bonding remains strong at the time of difficulty... they had suffered a lot from their past...
Nd mischevious shravan😛... uhh... i'm glad your shravan suman is not from platonic era(lyk d serial)😡... they both have their needs... which is very normal... i'm looking forward for the day when he will take her to the shopping...😉
I'm jumping from chapter to chapter... i hope you are not irritated... main kya karu itna kuch eksath padh liya ab bolneka man kar rha hain...
One last thing, revealation of preekar's relationship... they will help shraman in their own way,right??
Chalo... ho gaya mera sar khana... eagerly waiting for the next chapter as usual... nd this time, do pm me!!


Yes, I remember you, dear!😊
No problem, concentrate on your practicals, Lara will wait for a you lovely one. 😃
Let's see what happens when 😉

And nope, I can never be irritated reading my readers' beautiful comments. So keep on talking. I love it!❤️

Will updt asap. Tada!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sb1185

waiting badly... Please update soon...


A couple more days needed, buddy.😳

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