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Lara / Clara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200
Waiting

Give me a couple more days. 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Kaval05
thank you for the pm..
loved the update.. aww shravan actually entered the room through the window only happens in fiction. I am glad that he ripped up the agreement in front of suman. Shravan questioning " just friends" phase in their life is great. Suman thoughts about love were so sad but so true. loved the line " love is more a battle of emotion than bed of roses" don't know but just loved that line.
Update soon

Thank you so much!❤️

Will updt in a couple more days.

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Lara / Clara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: aspatel2
Great chapter...
Pls cont soon

Thanks!

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Lara / Clara

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: krits67
Gr8 work
Amazing chapter loved it

Sry for commenting nd read it this late but what to do life being on me

Continue soon

Waiting eagerly

Thanks a lot, sweety! ❤️

Will upload the next one in a couple of days.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: mayasingh
Loved chapter 35
Specially how the prenuptial misunderstanding was cleared

I hope nothing bad happens in the tea party but I don't have a good feeling about it...

Thank you!😳

Let's see what happens in the party...😉

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mogu_togu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

Pls pls pls update sooonnn...

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pooja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#157

this update was really too gud
thanx for the pm
plz plz update soon
em really being too impaitent

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IshyMishy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#158

Dear,

your story is awesome... I read all the episodes in one shot bunking my sleep and u wont believe i am planning to read it once again... Very well written... loved the way u have portrayed Shraman and others.

I am not convinced with one area... Sharavan is the main character and is vry vry complicated. May be you could have dissected his character in depth... his emotional tug of war between his love and hardheartedness to Suman... because he got to know the truth... he cant forget how much he tortured his Sumo, his love... Maybe there's more he could have done, he could hv let the guilt remind him to do better next time. Guilt is a response to one's own actions or lack of actions and there is no bigger punishment than feeling guilt... ...

I would love to know ur analysis from this angle.

Thank u soo much for ur wonderful writinggg...

Loads of Love

Ishy

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: IshyMishy
Dear,
your story is awesome... I read all the episodes in one shot bunking my sleep and u wont believe i am planning to read it once again... Very well written... loved the way u have portrayed Shraman and others.
I am not convinced with one area... Sharavan is the main character and is vry vry complicated. May be you could have dissected his character in depth... his emotional tug of war between his love and hardheartedness to Suman... because he got to know the truth... he cant forget how much he tortured his Sumo, his love... Maybe there's more he could have done, he could hv let the guilt remind him to do better next time. Guilt is a response to one's own actions or lack of actions and there is no bigger punishment than feeling guilt... ...
I would love to know ur analysis from this angle.

Thank u soo much for ur wonderful writinggg...

Loads of Love

Ishy

Hey, Ishy.

I'm so glad to know that you've liked Bittersweet Symphony that much.🤗 Thanks a lot.😳

About Shravan's guilt being portrayed - I agree that was limited but I guess that is because I chose to write the story in - Third Person Limited POV where Suman's POV is the main theme here. Chapters focusing on Shravan's POV... I add those rarely and more as bonus chapters. So, what goes in Shravan's mind, his conflicts, his guilt, his pain - these things stay as mystery. What we only get to see are his actions and what we hear are only what he speaks, not his thoughts. 😊

Also, the story has not yet ended and despite Shravan and Suman being sort of friends again, there's still so much more. Shravan's redemption is yet not complete. 😉

So, please stay tuned.

And thanks a lot for your honest critic. That reminds me to add another chapter on Shravan's POV really very soon.

Take care.❤️ Love,

Lara.

P.S. I will rewrite the whole story (2nd draft) on wattpad right after the indiaforums draft ends. I plan to improve the entire thing there, hopefully with more chapters with Shravan's POV, more added scenes and major revamp-ing of existing chaps.