FF Bitter Sweet Symphony#Thread 3: Epilogue on#Thread4 link on pg1 - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Lara
U r really great writer
Love ur writing skill
Always waiting for ur update
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just loved it...now shravan going to cross bridges . ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice writing!! Glad that one misunderstanding got cleared easily!!! And alas shravan tho baal baal Bach gaya sumo ke vase throwing se!!! He will have to be extra careful in the future😲 i loved the convo between sumo and preethi at the end of the chapter!!! In a nutshell a very wonderful chapter👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lara.. 🤗
Awesome chapter like always.. 👏
U know what I was also scared like sumo who at this hour.. 😆 ..
Sumo my husband will come out of bathroom and shra I am that husband of yours ah Damn funny..but love that scene..and then vase out of Window..window ne hi saath dia shra ka jab ki woh hi kehta tha close that window.. 😆 ..beautiful scene..
Finally the prenuptial agreement mu cleared and now they are little bit more close and sleeping together without finding excuses..
Morning scene sumo.choking ..blasted cologne blasted husband..then shra's turn to choke..sweet scene..
About party still am not positive about that...
Continue soon dear..
Thnx for pm dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey lara😛
Thank you for the pm⭐️ the chapter was awesome as usual...i loved it...it was almost all about ShraMan and this is what i loved the most in this chapter...especially the beginning of the chapter...how she warned the intruder and he turn out to be her husband ...and the moment which followed ...i loved it all⭐️
Update next part soonish please⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Lara!!!
I had already read it once but didn't comment coz of time crunch.
I wanted to re read it n comment in detail 😛
So here I'm 😳
As this story progresses I'm having hard time deciding which chapter or which part is my favourite one
This FF is something beyond awesome n my favourite one too 😳
Poor sumo cried over the prenuptial papers!
How convincingly she lied to the supposed intruder that her husband is in bathroom 😆 . Lil did she know her dear hubby was at the window himself 😆

"I'm that husband himself " cracked me up 🤣
Omg!! She threw the vase at him even after knowing it was him 🤣 So like Sumo 😆
She reminds me so much of our crazy Ellie 😳

He was so worried for her that he climbed up the window .
Loved how he tore the papers saying

"You won't have to take anything from me. All of it's already yours anyway." ❤️
This man is love ❤️
Loving their sleeping arrangements *dreamy eyes*
That was my favourite part

Loved the breakfast convo.
Sumo choking on breadcrumbs 😆 ..deeply affected by her Hott hubby n his cologne 😉 😆
Shravan spluttering tea at the mention of khurana.
He only wanted to protect her n save her from painful memories ❤️
Shravan is ready to take a step forward in their relationship 😳
I'm glad there misunderstandings are clear for now.

Sumo now knows about preekar.
Super se bahut upar wali update 👏 👏 👏

Love
Priyam
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Posted: 8 years ago
loved the chapter very much, i am glad the misunderstanding got cleared.
plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
finally read it :) ...Lara you're such a darling yar ...wat a start ..loved this chapter as always but most of the parts I was laughing like maniac at morning 3am but silentli you know...otherwise my family members would've thought I've gone mad :p laughing alone in somewhat middle of night upon reading something... had read it yesterday ...thanks to notifications ;) couldn't comment as u know my comments are always long n I don't get peace until I speak my heart out about chapter :-P I knew it was shravu...n this time I was right ;) my prediction u know... n how he climbed to her window...n death hell scared sumo...how she said stop...my husband will come out any moment of bathroom n I warn he'll break ur bones into fine powder..n his reply m the husband itself...lol...hilarious it was... n how sumo threw the vas on him... n he got it...goddamn...she can't lie to him...n the word smart ass lawyer ...rofl... n finally the misunderstanding ...bloody hell got solved...yeah noticed it dear... n their hug, sleeping together...wow... n next morning...the ritualiscally word I was laughing...lol... n on dining table how he called her wifey ...lovely... n her reaction bloody hell he had to sit this close n patting her back made her more miserable...lol... n the dialog I wont die simply of choking n how seriously he said to not use death word..n the expression whoa...funny n lovely at the same time... n khurana part...how he choked n glared meethi like he'll swallow her down... finally they're talking, not hiding things... n friends part seems like will soon change into wifey thing ;) the trust, belief, love, care is building up more n more.. loved the way you described his reaction after reading pre nuptial agreement...how hell shocked he was n how innocently he replied I didn't send it... I think its the bloody bas***d khurrana behind it... n sumo n preeti's part was amazing... how sumo made her accept about their relation...loved it... thanks for the pm dear...waiting for next :) love u sweetie...ur an amazing writer...:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
it ws amazing.. I loved hw u cleared the misunderstanding n hw sumo questioned shravan abt those papers directly.. dining table part ws good.. waiting fr nxt part
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Castile2

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Hello Lara
I'm Cas 😊

Hey, Cas!

I have been closely following your story and always wait with baited breath for updates!
Though this is the first time I am leaving a comment 😛
Thank you so much for deciding to comment, dear! *tight hugs🤗


Now coming to this chapter...

It was fabulous 👏
Thank you!

The way the last chapter ended I thought Shravan would give Sumo 'space' and leave her alone for the night 😕

But him coming to her despite the closed doors cleared one thing for me...
That he was no more going to run around being all emo with 'just friends' tag wounding his little self!! 👍🏼
Yes, the guy's pretty determined now
to change that status his marriage.😉

And how he came to her...climbing through her window!

(Let me tell you that you scared me a little bit there cause I am also alone right now in a old house 😕 😆 )
Oh shit!😆 Sorry to scare you... 😃

Did I tell you I absolutely love Suman's inner musings?! ❤️
Her inner persona🤗

And their convo at this point was adorably funny 😆 😳

'...bathroom be damned the husband couldn't get inside the room itself' 😉 😆

I knew she was going to throw the vase at him 🤣

I loved the way you so smartly cleared the pre-nup fiasco between them without too much emo fireworks 👏
Glad to know you liked it, really, because that is why I had to rewrite the chapter four times - the proper solution of the prenuptial poison.

Indeed they are floating around 😉
Relationship. Sleeping arrangements. Emotions.

Bizzare doesn't even start to cover it! 🤪

Sumo's hormones and emotions are going the right way here!! 🤣 🤪
Better than the show if I might add...

Am I the only one who turns into a puddle of too when Shravan say 'My wife..'
Awww... ☺️

Halloween party... Hmm. 🤔

Kamini is finally going to come in the main picture isn't she?
Her royal witch-ness...😈

Preeti-Pushkar you ask? I m not saying a word for them! Nope! I have had enough of them in the show
I know. But don't worry, in this story they'll be in the sidelines just as it's supposed to be in the first place.

All in all I am relieved after this chapter seeing the progress on Shravan's part!
Yep, that's a thing to celebrate.🥳

And waiting for the party of course 😉

After Thought: I m gonna name this chapter 'Blasted'! 😆

Blasted window. Blasted cologne. Blasted husband. 🤣
Lol... 😆 How accurate...🤣

Love
Cas

Love you, Cas!
Take care till later. Tada!

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