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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Lara, this chapter let me yearn for more. I want more. I loved that Shravan is not running away... Open ur eyes both of u n see each other's.

Best part, their sleeping arrangement, his holding hands at every instances, her coughing n then clearing d miaundersyanu so nicely... I loved everything, but the length. So next one more lengthy, see even my comment is.lengthier this time round...hahahhaha

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Sharavan is tempting suman for love which she had avoided like a plague and he isn't the one who will let suman go down.

I am loving shravan and suman scenes.

Shravan trying to enter suman room through the window was funny.

Looking forward to read more.

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

brilliant update

too good

continue soon

superb

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Mitali Gupta

@SleepyPsycho

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Res!

I'll unress once I am back from school.

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

oooh we got an update

loved it

sumo is so funny lol my husband will come from washroom

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Meera

@Jerry2308

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Amazing update...so happy that the prenuptial agreement mu is cleared Nd not stretched as they already have many other issues ,thanks to the open window Nd shravan's Window climbing skills... loved the dining table scene..sumo choking on sandwich..Nd the caring husband shravan

Vandy bhabhi 's Halloween tea party sounds fun

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Aayushi

@aayra24

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Loving the way Sumo gets flustered every time Shravan is near her...their dialogues are so much fun...I just couldn't stop grinning..

why do I think something is fishy??...the Halloween party ... witch theme and the party being arranged by kamini

Great going girl... already want the next chapter *facepalm*

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

I am having a severe cold and was planning to go to bed at 10.

But then you said u were about to update and i so i waited till 12...!!

and after reading.. I felt.. IT WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT .. ❤️

The way u dealt with the pre nup agreement.. Amazing.. 👏

In the last chap i thought ab toh gaya sab.. sab khatam..

and in this one i realised this only brought them closer

Just love the way you write and how the story is moving forward... ❤️

and ofcourse Sumo's Self talks/ thoughts.. This is something i love the most in your story..

Superb Update Lara 🤗

Rewriting a chap 4 times... Man... So much pain for just one chap... 😲

But you did a tremendous job 👍🏼

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manisha771

@manisha771

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

You don't know Lara how eagerly I was waiting for ur updates.

This is so damn good. Loved the parts where shravan climed up the window and cleared everything and then Shraman having breakfast 😆

Is preeker marriage on the cards??

Will be waiting for the nxt update...

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Ankita

@Fly_high

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Okay who sent those papers and why I am having not so bad feelings for this Halloween Coven themed tea party 😕 anyways buwahaha Shravan barely got saved from that vase attack from Sumo be ready Shravan this is what your future is gonna be when wifey will be pissed at you🤣 but good misunderstanding has been cleared off :)

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