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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Nith bro.. its amazing..
Different concept..
Love it..
Childhood shraman..aww so good..
Superb dear..
Continue soon...

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Suzaina

@Manyata5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

I am loving your parallel right now.

It seems amazing

Continue soon

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Neha Maurya

@Neha_Maurya

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

ress...

will comment soon...really busy these days...

and yah plz remind me if i frgt to unress it fr long...

plzzz

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nith125

@nith125

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
That's a new concept and I love new concepts so bring it on !

Thank you ! Glad you liked it 😊

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Roshni2015

@Roshni2015

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Nith,

My love...

Sorry couldn't read it till now... I know the teaser though!! 😉

Been caught up a little.. Will read this in the weekend n give a detailed comment...

So ressing for now..

Love!! 🤗

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nith125

@nith125

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Safire
"Hints development"a totally different concept! Looking forward to how shravan develops the hints now😛

Thank you Safire 😊 Well now that most of you like the concept, I am actually becoming nervous.

How is the Tamil EKDV going btw ?

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: pearl.white
Super cute!!
Teen Shravan is freaking adorable!! Namik dude in all thy hunky glory, thou had a huge competition from that geeky, nerdy guy!! 😳

My heart went all "Pehla nasha, Pehla khumaar"

Him using the 9th std ki book and finding it useless. 😳
Bunty ki fab advice leke, cutie takes notes.
His inferences were so wonderful and yet I dreaded the pain of impending heartbreak.

Sumo was Sumo! I found her perfectly normal, i.e. a friend. Dont we all hang out with friends!!

I thought that it was full-fleged teen fic.

But zoom!! We rushed to present to an equally adorable Shravan - height bad gayi but dil abhi bhi uss nerd ka hi hai!! 😊 ❤️

P.S. Congrats for the unique concept!!

Thank you so much ! Glad you liked it 😊

Now that I come to think of it "Pehla Nashaa " is a better song choice than "Pal pal har pal"

I hope the second part and the conclusion (if it comes to the third) are up to your expectations as well.