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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Joyness

Nith loved it...keep posting waiting for the update

Thank you Joyness 😊 Will update soonish 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing...loved it...

Waiting for next update

Thank you ! Glad you liked it 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Malika

Nith this is amazing!!

Ok I mean like really amazing...such a breath of fresh air.
One thing I loved most about it is that finally someone threw light on the fact that even Sumo loved his company from the beginning only. The way we were always shown it would seem from the face of it that she only used him during childhood but actually there were so many instances she would stand for him and remember the little things about him. She was just insecure and too much image conscious and that cold exterior was too much for a fragile heart like Shravu, thanks to his forever messed up family life and battered self-confidence.

And now when the same lack of self-confidence appears in the elder Shravan I so cant wait to read it. Because as I said earlier, promises have been made but they need to be fulfilled too. And to fulfil them the first thing Shravan needs to learn is look through Sumo's cold exterior and read the "hints" 😉

Pls update soon.

Thanks a lot Mallika ! Glad you liked it. Sumo, whatever she pretended to be in front of others, considered him a very good friend right from the beginning, otherwise there was no reason for her to cook for him, spend time with him etc. I think we should have got more flashbacks highlighting the good in Sumo as well. Anyways that is a long list 😉
I hope you will like the next part as well. Will update on Saturday hopefully.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nuttynuts

Great start! Loved Chashmish Shravan and his cute attempts to decode Sumo's hints. Poor Bunty is lost too. I like this Bunty kid😆Hah! The math teacher is always right!

GO Shravan!! Waiting for more, and ten years later!

Good job Nith!

Cheers,
Nuts

Thanks Nuts ! Glad you liked it 😳
Of course Math teacher is always right 😉 . Bunty is the guy who owns the restaurant where they go for a dinner date.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: avni01

Wow nith !this is very different and amazing. Lovely parallel 🤗👏...pls update soon

Thanks Avni 🤗 Glad you liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nith125



Anu🤗so glad you liked it. Yes, chashmish is very much the core of Shravan even today. Sumo calls him chashmish and Shravan no longer wears glasses. He calls her moti and she is no longer fat. I guess there was symbolism there, but we never got around to that😭. I hope you will like the next part as well.




@ Sumo calls him chashmish and Shravan no longer wears glasses. He calls her moti and she is no longer fat. I guess there was symbolism there...

Nith, THAT IS DEEP!!! 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@ Sumo calls him chashmish and Shravan no longer wears glasses. He calls her moti and she is no longer fat. I guess there was symbolism there...

Nith, THAT IS DEEP!!! 👏

Thanks Anu 😳 It is so unfair that we never got to see the complete story, why did we have to see a Preekar wedding, they could have shown us chotu ShraMan instead, love them ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nith, deep breaths... breathe in, breathe out...
Let go, buddy... will message you on TT later...
Hugs!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ohh wow great yr where do u get these ideas
Something very diff absolutely amazing ..cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear..itz amazing..totally different..😊
Flashback is so cute..younger shravan is love..❤️
It 'll be interesting to see that how older Shravan will use his childhood lesson about deciphering hints..
update soon..😊

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