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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nith this is amazing!!
Ok I mean like really amazing...such a breath of fresh air.
One thing I loved most about it is that finally someone threw light on the fact that even Sumo loved his company from the beginning only. The way we were always shown it would seem from the face of it that she only used him during childhood but actually there were so many instances she would stand for him and remember the little things about him. She was just insecure and too much image conscious and that cold exterior was too much for a fragile heart like Shravu, thanks to his forever messed up family life and battered self-confidence.

And now when the same lack of self-confidence appears in the elder Shravan I so cant wait to read it. Because as I said earlier, promises have been made but they need to be fulfilled too. And to fulfil them the first thing Shravan needs to learn is look through Sumo's cold exterior and read the "hints" 😉

Pls update soon.

Edited by Malika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Sunain

Hii Nith...m amazed like wht hav u comeup with...it was phenomenal.
n best part was tht its unique..ur hinty idea is just fantastic..So bunty the chipku is here han 😆
Really loved it...shravan n his insecurities...lets see wht more hints hez going to catch...
Waiting for the nxt part...update soon..n han plz pm me nxt time u post. 😉


Thank you so much Sunain 😳 Glad you liked the idea. Will definitely PM you for the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nileshni679

Hi Nith. Something new to read. Please continue soon

Thank you nileshi 😊, glad you liked it. Next part will be updated on Saturday hopefully.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhaktiii

Such a superb piece of writing! Loved it!

Thank you so much bhaktii 😊 Glad you liked it !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: an_chau

Nith, this is fantastic! I particularly love the way I couldn't tell where chhotu Shravan turned into The Shravan Malhotra of today. Thought that was nice because really, the chashmish of 11 years ago is still very much the core of today's Qutub Minar. Looking forward to see where you take his story.

Much love,
Anu


Anu 🤗 so glad you liked it. Yes, chashmish is very much the core of Shravan even today. Sumo calls him chashmish and Shravan no longer wears glasses. He calls her moti and she is no longer fat. I guess there was symbolism there, but we never got around to that 😭 . I hope you will like the next part as well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: amlavs

Wow...

It's new concept..
Loved it...
Curious to know Wats gonna happen next..
LavSriya...


Thank you so much ! Glad you loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start! Loved Chashmish Shravan and his cute attempts to decode Sumo's hints. Poor Bunty is lost too. I like this Bunty kid😆Hah! The math teacher is always right!
GO Shravan!! Waiting for more, and ten years later!

Good job Nith!

Cheers,
Nuts
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: memories_im

I loved the way you concluded this part. Would love to know how you take this forward. Great story and amazing writing! :) Waiting for the next part :)


Thank you ! I initially thought that this should be an OS, but found there was only so much I could write at one shot. I am so glad you liked the point at which I concluded, the idea was to relate the chotu ShraMan to the current ShraMan and stop there 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krutish22

Superb writing piece
Totally New concept
I loved hint idea, fantastic
Can't wait for next update
Update soon

Thank you so much 😊. @bold : so nice of you to say this !
Will update soonish 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nith !this is very different and amazing. Lovely parallel 🤗👏...pls update soon

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