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Posted: 8 years ago
plz SHRAMAN ko alag mat karo 😲...why they think always next person will take lead 😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update please shraman Ki misunderstandings clear kero na..
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update
too good
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear
New entry in Shravan's life, Sumo ka kya hoga ?

Eagerly waiting for the upcoming part 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
emotional update...can't see shravan crying and feeling hurt...sumo is so confusing...she doubts him...then decides can live together...again on seeing an envelope starts the doubting and hurting again. Now when he asks divorce, she is saying "I made a mistake"... Sumo Madam, Either trust him or don't...😕😕
I thought shravan is planning something with the divorce,...but alas No...he is serious...Poor shiv...

I really hope shravan uses his amazing dimag to find out trisha's plan...

but now again a new entry...😲 ...

Just a request to you dear, am okay with any number of girl entry's in shraman's...but I need shravan to be sassy and intelligent lawyer who uses his brain...instead of sulking man who keeps his brain in cold storage just like in show...waiting to know what happens now.
Edited by dhanyata - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update
Omg ShraMan ka Divorce
I think Shravan is planning something
Again new entry ab ye kya gul khilayegi... Can't wait update soon

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Now this Diya has come... Ab doubt iss per ayegi Sumo ko... Koi bhi ladki Shravan ke saat hogi... Then she will assume they have something between them... This is not gonna end...
But plz unite Shraman.

Shiv I really pity for him.!.. Parents takes divorce & children has to suffer...

Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
New Update - Ramnath to the Rescue
At The School

Sumo arrives and parks the car, just then Shravan reaches, he gets down, pays for the taxi and walks towards Sumo. He says - Ab kya kiya isne

Sumo - mujhe bhi nahi pata, Suno tumhe bahut chot aayi hai, tum yahi ruko, main bas 2 min me aayi. He nods.

Sumo goes inside to meet the principal.

Principal - aayiye, Shiv ke papa nahi aaye?
Sumo - ji aaye hain, par actually ek family emergency ke karan hume abhi ghar ke liye nikalna padega. Waise kya kiya Shiv ne?
Principal - Aap log usse please samjhaiye usne phir se school me ladai ki hai.
Sumo mutters to herself - uff kya karun main inn baap bete ka.. To Principal - Sir, aap chinta mat kariye, main samjhaungi usko, actually wo bahut upset hai isliye shayad usne aisa kiya.
Acha, main chalti hun.

She leaves the office, Shiv is standing outside. Sumo says - beta tum aaj bus driver ko bata ke dadu ke ghar pe utar jaana. Main wahi jaa rahi hun, phir waha se hum ghar chalenge. Shiv nods and turns his face away. Sumo looks at him for a bit, then comes out of the building.

Sumo - to Shravan - Chalo
Shravan - kya kiya Shiv ne?
Sumo - kuch nahi, tumhara hi beta hai, phir kisi ko maara. Chalo ab jaldi gaadi me baitho.

They sit in the car. Sumo starts the car and dials Dr. Arora.
Sumo - Hello, Dr. Arora, aap please Malhotra House aa sakte hain, Shravan ko kaafi chot aayi hai.
Dr. Arora - Suman ji, main abhi aata hun.
Sumo - Ok. (disconnects the call)

At Malhotra House

They reach Malhotra House and go up to their room. Sumo enter the washroom, opens the cabinet and comes out with the first aid kit.

Shravan is changing , Sumo sees that he is badly hurt. She takes his arm and says - idhar aao baitho yaha pe. He pulls his arm and moves away. She holds his arm again and pulls him back and makes him sit on the bed. She puts some dettol on the cotton and starts cleaning his wounds. He winces. She says - lad rahe the tab toh dard nahi ho raha tha.. Seedhe baitho, mujhe theek se ghav ko saaf karne do.

Dr. Arora arrives, Ramnath and Pushkar bring him in.

Ramnath - kya hua Suman, isse itni chot kaisey aayi.
Sumo (while cleaning the wounds) - kuch nahi papa, aapka beta khud ko superhero samajhta hai, court ke bahar ek admi ek aurat ko pareshaan kar raha tha ye pahunch gaye bachane, wahan tak toh theek tha. Par inko toh usse peetna bhi tha. She looks at Shravan angrily.

Ramnath - kya karte ho tum beta.

She finishes cleaning the wounds and says - leejiye Dr. ye raha aapka patient.

Dr. Arora - kaafi chot aayi hai, gaal pe aur sir pe mujhe stitches karni padegi. He stitches the wounds.

Dr. - main inhe tetanus ka injection bhi laga deta hu. He gives the injection and says - ab aap rest kariye main chalta hu.

Shravan lies down. Sumo tucks him. Shiv arrives from school. Sumo says - papa ko rest karne do, chalo hum log chalte hain.

Shiv - mumma main yaha ruk jaun, promise main papa ko disturb nahi karunga.

Sumo - Theek hai. Main shaam ko lene aaungi. She leaves.

At Sumo 's house

She goes home, sits on the couch and switches on the TV. Kaho Na Pyaar Hai is playing. She reminisces the time when they were in london for their honeymoon. They were sitting together opposite the fireplace.
Shravan - Sumo, ab toh dikha do
Sumo - kya?
Shravan - live show
Sumo - tum phir se mazak kar rahe ho na
Shravan - please na Sumo. He plays kaho na pyaar hai. Sumo shyly gets up and starts dancing. Shravan joins her. He picks her up and twirls her around.

Her phone rings
Shiv - mumma, papa ko bukhar aa gaya
Sumo - papa ka dhyan rakhna, main aa rahi hu

At Malhotra House

She reaches Malhotra House. Goes upstairs. Ramnath is placing cold water towels on Shravan's forehead. Preeti is helping him. Pushkar and Shiv are on the couch.

Sumo - papa deejiye main karti hun. Shiv beta jao chachi ke saath jao apna home work kar lo. Preeti please Shiv ki home work me help kar de.

Preeti leaves with Shiv, Ramnath hands the towels to Sumo and goes and sits on the couch with Pushkar. Sumo caresses Shravan's hair and starts placing the wet towels on his forehead.

Ramnath - Suman beta, ek baat kahun, ab tak tum dono ke mann me jo aaya tum dono ne kiya, maine kuch nahi kaha kyuki mujhe laga tum dono aapas me sab solve kar loge, maine Tiwari ji Ya Kisi aur ko bhi kuch nahi bataya, kyuki Tiwari ji ki tabiyat waise bhi kharab rehti hai, par ab jo main kahunga tumhe manana padega.

Dekho Tiwari ji yaha nahi hai toh tum meri responsibility ho. Bhale hi tum iss ghar ki bahu nahi par meri beti jaisi ho, mere guru ki naatin, aur waise bhi apne pote ke bina mera dil nahi lagta, toh abse tum dono yahi rahoge samjhi.

Sumo - par papa.. Main Kaise

Ramnath - maine kaha tha na meri baat manani padegi.

Sumo - theek hai papa.

She gets up from his side and says - bukhar thoda kam hua hai, main soup bana ke laati hun, kuch khale phir medicine de denge

Ramnath nods and comes and sits next to Shravan.

Sumo goes downstairs to the kitchen, prepares the soup quickly and brings it upstairs. Shravan is awake.

Sumo - papa, aap khana kha ke rest kariye, main hun yaha.

Ramnath - Theek hai beta, tum bhi khana kha lena aur kuch lage toh batana.

Sumo - Haan papa wo preeti le aayegi mere liye.

Ramnath - theek hai beta.

Sumo - Pushkar ja tu bhi, khana kha le.

Pushkar - Haan Sumo, kuch chahiye ho toh bula lena.

Ramnath and Pushkar leave. Sumo goes and puts the soup on the side table. She sits next to Shravan and starts propping up pillows so that he can sit up.

Sumo (tries to help him up) - Chalo kuch kha lo, phir medicines bhi leni hai. He turns to the other side instead of getting up.

Sumo - theek hai, tumhe theek nahi hona toh main kya kar sakti hun, par bechara mera baby, ab tum theek nahi hoge jaldi se toh kaun usse basketball ki practice karwayega, match kaise jeetega wo ab. Sad ho jayega wo toh.

Shravan turns back and tries to get up. She helps him up and starts feeding him the soup.

Sumo thinks to herself - Shravan tum abhi bhi bilkul chote bacchon ki tarah rooth jaate ho par unhi ki tarah maan bhi jaate ho. Dekhna bacchu main tumhe mana hi lungi. He finishes the soup. Sumo gives him the medicines. He takes them and lies down again.

Preeti comes upstairs with food for Sumo

Preeti - ye lo di, aap khana kha lo. Di, mujhe Pushkar ne bataya. Main bahut khush ki aap yahi rahoge.

Shravan over hears this, thinks - ye yahaan, kab aur kaise, waise acha hi hai Shiv bhi yaha rahega. He smiles.

Sumo sits down on the couch and eats her dinner. She doesn't have her stuff so she borrows Shravan's black T shirt and goes in the washroom to change. She comes out of the washroom and sits next to Shravan and starts rubbing vicks on his feet. She then gets up and starts applying vicks on his chest. Shravan notices that she is just wearing his T shirt. He thinks to himself - kya kar rahi hai ye pagal ladki, isse pata hai ki ye mujhe bore me bhi attractive lagegi, aur ye yaha aise ghum rahi hai.

Sumo - Chalo ab sone ki koshish karo, jitna rest karoge utni jaldi tumhari tabiyat theek hogi. She goes and sits on the other side of the bed and runs her fingers through his hair to help him sleep. She also falls asleep seated like that. A while later Shravan wakes up and quite out of habit puts his head on her lap. She wakes up and runs her fingers soothingly over his forehead and bends down to kiss him on the side of his head. She also lies down. He nuzzles closer to her and goes back to sleep.

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I hope they work on their issues and we get to see some good moments!!
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New Update - Pushpa aur uska Pati

At Malhotra House

Next morning Sumo wakes up. Shravan is sleeping with his head nestled in the crook of her neck.
Sumo gently puts his head on the pillow so that his sleep is not disturbed and gingerly gets out of the bed.

She checks her phone which is kept on the sidetable. There is a missed call from Preeti. Sumo calls her back

Sumo - Haan Preeti bol
Preeti - di wo main aapka samaan le aayi hun ghar se, wahi aapko dena tha.
Sumo - Thanks meri pretty Preeti, please upar bhijwa de.

Shravan thinks - samaan bhi mangwa liye, toh ye pakka yahan rehne wali hai. Kaisey poochun. Sumo unlocks the door, Shravan continues to pretend that he is asleep.

Sumo goes into the washroom. Preeti and bahadur come upstairs with her stuff.

Preeti - Di ye lo, kahaan rakhun
Sumo - thanks Preeti, tu bas wahi closet ke paas rakh de, main dekh lungi.
Preeti - Theek hai di, main jaa rahi hun, aap taiyyar hoke aa jao, breakfast bana lete hain
Sumo - Haan

Shravan - hmm Sumo ke haath ka khana. Par ye samaan yaha rakh rahi hai, ye yahin rahegi.. smiles inwardly.. bewakoof itna khush kyu ho raha hai, ye saare time phir se tere saath rahegi, tera sir khayegi.. Par iske bina toh... Theek hai rahe, mujhe kya.. Arre par ye kaise poochun ki ye yahin rahegi mere paas

Meanwhile Sumo has come out of the washroom and is arranging her clothes in the closet.

Shravan - kya kar rahi ho
Sumo - jyada pareshaan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai, main bas apna samaan yaha rakh rahi hun, main Shiv ke room me rahungi.
Shravan - thinks *kis pagal se pala pada hai, pushpa main chahta hu ki tum yaha raho, isliye pooch raha tha, yaha nahi rehna mere paas toh ab dekho* - ye closet space meri wife ke liye hai. He looks at her legs * bolo pushpa ki tum meri wife ho, aur please aise...Shravan kya kar raha hai control.. Tu isse naraaz hai* pretends to be busy on his phone but keeps on stealing glances

Sumo - Haan jab wo aa jayegi tab rakh legi apna samaan yaha, abhi toh yahaan mera hi samaan rahega. Sumo catches him staring at her legs. She takes her robe and rushes in for a shower.

She comes out of the shower and starts drying her hair in front of the mirror. Shravan is watching her, she pretends to be oblivious. She goes to her side of the closet and takes off her robe, and starts wearing her clothes. Shravan can see her through the blinds, he continues pretending to sleep.

Shravan - *hmm, jao jo karna hai karo, ab main nahi phasne waala. * he closes his eyes and lies back.
Sumo - *khadus, kal raat ko toh meri godi me sir rakh ke so raha tha, ab dekh bhi nahi raha.* She hurriedly ties her hair, wears matching bangles, puts on her bindi and sindoor and goes downstairs to the kitchen.
Shravan *phew, thank god, chali gayi*

Kamini Chachi - Arre waah aaj toh Suman ke haath ka khana khane ko milega, hum toh bhai taras hi gaye the.
Sumo - Chachi aap bhi na, sab kuch toh Ramu kaka seekh gaye hai aur aapke supervision me toh acha bana hi lete hain
Kamini - kuch bhi ainvayi, uske haathon me aisa swad kahaa*itni mushkil se isko ghar se nikala, phir aa gayi, kuch Soch Kamini*

Breakfast is ready, Sumo takes out breakfast for two in a tray. She calls out to Kamalji to serve breakfast for everyone. Shiv enters the kitchen and hugs Sumo.

Sumo - she bends down and kisses him good morning baby, arre waah tum taiyyar ho gaye, Chalo papa ke saath breakfast karoge? Maine apne baby ke liye omlette banaya hai.

Shiv nods, Ok jao upar jao, main aati hun breakfast lekar.

Sumo comes upstairs with a tray. Shiv is sitting next to Shravan talking to him - mumma kehti hai ki omlette me bahut protein hota hai, papa omlette kha ke main bhi aap ke jaisa strong ban jaunga, haina.
Shravan - Haan bilkul
Sumo - Shravan, ye lo tumhari coffee. He sits up takes the mug and keeps it on the sidetable.
Main brush karke aata hu, phir hum saath me omlette khayenge. He gets up but feels dizzy. Sumo holds him by the arm.

Sumo - Chalo
Shravan - main chala jaunga
Sumo - kaha na maine Chalo, har baat ke liye daantna padta hai. She helps him to the washroom. She holds him while he brushes and washes his face.

Shravan - Sumo, bahar jao
Sumo - acha theek hai, girna mat, ye towel rack pakad lo, mai yahi hu door pe. She goes out and stands near the door.
Shravan - Sumo
Sumo - Haan, she goes in and helps him back to the bed.
Sumo hands over an omlette to Shiv - ye lo sweetie, jaldi se finish karo. Shravan drinks his coffee. Shiv takes a morsel and feeds it to Shravan. Shravan also takes a piece and feeds him.
Sumo - aur mujhe kaun khilayega?
Both of them take a piece, Shravan realises what he is doing and feeds the piece to Shiv. Sumo eats the piece that is in Shiv 's hand. She gets up and turns back. A tear escapes her eyes. She says - main fruits lana toh bhul gayi, abhi laati hun and she goes downstairs.

She comes upstairs with a bowl of fruits and gives an apple slice to Shiv.
Shiv - mummaa mujhe nahi khana.
Sumo - Oh mujhe toh laga tha ki kisiko papa ki tarah strong banna tha, Chalo jaldi finish karo, School Bus aane hi wali hogi.
Shravan *Sumo ki bacchi, mujhe bhi phansa diya, kha Shravan ab baith ke apples kha*

Sumo - waise ek baat batao, tumne phir se school me maar peet kyuki ki, mana kiya tha na maine
Shiv - mumma, wo dono ladke phir se Shreya ko tang kar rahe the
Sumo - beta par ladai toh nahi karni chahiye thi na tumhe. (Bus horn) , dekho tumhari Bus aa gayi, main bata rahi hun, ab school se aisi shikayat aayi toh dekh lena. Chalo ab. She takes him downstairs to drop him off.

Comes back upstairs to their room - aur tum, tumne usse kuch kaha kyu nahi. Ye jo tum Superhero bane phirte ho na, uska hi asar hai.
Shravan - acha, waise tumhe toh ye hero pasand tha?
Sumo - Bakwaas mat karo, apne bete ko samjhao.
Shravan - Haan, Haan Sumo toh mera naam hai, humesha yuddh ke liye taiyyar, ladai ki toh mera beta.. Wah!
Sumo - Haan, main logon ko punch karti phirti hun
Shravan - Aur nahi toh kya, Anuj bhaiya ko kisne maara tha, bechare.
Sumo - Haan, ab toh woh bechare lag rahe hain, jab tumhe cycle race me hara ke chidha rahe the, aur maine unko maara tha, tab toh bada mazaa aaya tha.
Shravan -* haan tab mere liye ladti thi, mujhse thodi*
Acha acha ab tang mat karo na, meri white shirt la do, mujhe Diya ka interview lena hai.
Sumo mutters angrily - seedha baithte toh ban nahi raha hai, interview lena hai
Shravan - Arey maine hi bulaya tha, ab last minute cancel karunga toh acha nahi lagega. Calls Ramesh ji.

Shravan - hello, Ramesh ji, Abhi ek lawyer Diya Singhania interview ke liye aayengi, aap please HR interview ke baad mere saath unki conference call setup kar dijiyega, main unka interview le lunga. Cuts the call.
Ab theek, ab toh main kahin nahi jaa raha. Ab please meri shirt de do.
She helps him put on his shirt. He tries to set his hair but to no avail.
Sumo - smiles *pagal* she takes the hairbrush and bottle of gel and gives it to him. She then switches on the phone camera - ye lo
Shravan sets his hair to perfection, Sumo smiles mischeviously, shifts to his side and ruffles his hair from the back.
Shravan - Sumo!

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