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Posted: 8 years ago
I hope Sumo realise very soon that she can't live without Shravan & withdraw her divorse case... They unite again...
Shravan still don't know Sumo is pregnant... When he will come to know...

Update soon...


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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome, mind blowing, superb, fabulous, amazing, great dude it's like wow 👏👏👏I read all part in one go (except 1&2 part)I miss them bcz of some reason but today I read all its mind blowing all characters are superb shiv is so brave in fact Shreya is too cute and shiv also and Shrman they are awesome and that girl 😡 but all over its superb plz next time pm me whenever you update next part bcz I don't want to miss this again 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Woah that was amazing...Sumo melt ho Rahi hai...that's a good sign...
Shiv is such a shoona baby...bilkul apnay Dad pay gaya hai😆
Wakai Kya hi Gary Sumo ka final decision... hoping in Shravan's favor..
Plz update soon. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey ya...missing your update long time now. Please update soon. What happened to shaman, their kid and their unborn ???
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved...shravan cares so much hope sumo too realises his love
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Posted: 8 years ago
New update - The Envelope Part I
So sorry for the delay, as I said I was suffering from a writer's block.. But no worries you can expect daily updates again.

Next Morning - Sumo's bedroom

The alarm rings and Shravan wakes up. Sumo is sleeping with her head over his chest and her arm around him. He tries to wake her up and says - Sumo mujhe pata hai ki aaj Sunday hai par mujhe abhi Shiv ko ghar bhi drop karna hai aur packing bhi karni hai. She snuggles even closer to him. He kisses her on her head and gently removes her arm and puts her head on the pillow so that he can get up. He gets up and goes to take a shower.

He comes out of the shower and with the clicking of the door, Sumo gets up and rubs her eyes. Shravan is standing in front of the mirror gelling his hair. Sumo gets up from the bed, and goes and hugs him from behind. She stretches on her toes to kiss him on the crook of his neck, then rests her head on his back. She says - Shravan, mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi, please mujhe maaf kardo. Main tumhare bina nahi reh sakti, please mujhe wapas ghar le chalo. Shravan takes her arm and brings her to face him. He wipes the tears that have started rolling down from her eyes. He says - Main bhi toh tumhare bina nahi reh sakta na Sumo, tumhe pata hai na, phir aisa kyu karti ho. He pulls her into a tight hug and says - tum apna saman ready rakhna, mere bangalore se aate hi hum log ghar chalenge, theek hai. She looks up at him and smiles through her tears. He pecks her on her lips and says - chalo main Shiv ko ghar drop kar ke aata hun. They go into Shiv's room he is almost ready. Sumo takes out his jacket from the cupboard and says - Shiv bahar bahut thandi hai, jacket pehen lo aur haan bahar mat ghumna aur dadu dadi ko pareshaan mat karna, theek hai.
Shiv says - Ok mumma.
Shravan - Chalo Chalein, he picks him up in his arms.
Sumo - Bye, main raat ko lene aaungi.

Sumo goes into the kitchen to cook breakfast. Shravan comes back after dropping Shiv. He rings the bell, She goes in a hurry to open the door, in an effort to move her bangs from her forehead she gets boiled potato on her cheek. She opens the door. Shravan sees her face and smiles. He comes closer and kisses off the potato from her cheek. Sumo blushes and turns back and goes to the kitchen. Shravan heads upstairs to pack.

Breakfast is ready so she goes upstairs to call him. He has made a mess while packing. Sumo - Do din ke liye jaana hai aur poora room aur closet faisla diya. Aur ye kaise packing ki hai? Hato, mujhe karne do. She starts rearranging stuff in the suitcase mumbling, kabhi nahi sikhoge, har baar mujhe phir se pack karna padta hai. He thinks how adorable she looks when she is faking anger. He smiles, goes to her, kisses her on her nose. She acts annoyed - hato abhi, main ye jaldi se pack karti hun, tum breakfast start karo, late ho jaoge nahi toh.

They have breakfast. Then he leaves for the airport after kissing her bye and reminding her to keep her stuff packed and ready.

Meanwhile, Pushkar has dropped Shiv and Preeta at PCT. Some of the staff members of PCT have also arrived. Together they prepare the material for the sandwiches. Then Shiv and Preeta head to a park nearby and start selling sandwiches. The guys who had tried to kidnap Shiv are also lurking around.

Sales of sandwiches on his counter are going well and he already has earned enough money to give to Shreya. Those two men who had tried to kidnap him also come on his counter and ask him to serve sandwiches. He recognises them but does not react. He starts preparing sandwiches and shouts out to the driver. - Bahadur uncle hum log vrindavan me bhi sandwich bechenge, and he winks at him. Bahadur gets that the situation is dicey and he calls the police, informing them that Shiv is in danger. Meanwhile Shiv keeps on pretending to prepare the filling of the sandwich. The policemen arrive in plain clothing to the stall and ask Shiv - beta ye tumne sandwich ka stall kaise lagaya, tumne vrindavan me bhi stall lagaya tha, wahan bhi police ne warning di thi. Shiv replies - uncle sandwiches toh maine bahut ache banaye hain, bilkul jaise vrindavan me banaye the. The policemen arrest the two guys on gunpoint and ask Bahadur and Preeta to come with Shiv to the police station. The police informs Ramnath and Shravan that the goons were caught all because of Shiv's bravery and quick thinking. Shravan tells his clients that he needs to return immediately. The clients request him to meet the opposing counsel once to inform the other party about broad terms of settlement before he hands over the matter to Pushkar and heads back. He agrees to meet the opposing counsel for lunch. Ramnath reaches the police station and speaks to the police officer who appreciates Shiv.

Meanwhile at PCT-
Sumo is reminiscing about the morning and remembers their goodbye kiss, when he was leaving for the airport. She is elated thinking that soon they will be back together.

At Bangalore -
Shravan and Pushkar meet the opposing counsels for lunch. One of the members of the opposing team is Trisha. On seeing the brothers she comes forward shakes hands and hugs both of them. They sit down for lunch, discuss the broad details of the settlement and then Shravan leaves for the airport. On the way he calls Sumo and tells her that the kidnappers have been caught, so he is coming back. He asks her to reach the police station and says that he will come there directly.

Sumo is about to leave for the airport when Kamini comes at her house. She says that she was passing by so she thought of meeting her and also dropping off a mail that had come for her today. She hands an envelope to Sumo and takes leave. Sumo takes the envelope and sits in her car to leave for the police station.

Next update - what is in the envelope..

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Posted: 8 years ago
OMG...!!!I cant believe mah eyes...An update ..!!!
Amazing work dea...yea..Sumo said sorry...Juz loved it...👏
Shiv is so so smart...Aakhir beta kiska hai..😆
Fabolus update man..Par envelope mey kya hai...😕Cliffhanger...😭
Update soonish,...
Love,
ANU
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Posted: 8 years ago
New Update - The Envelope Part II

This one is fairly long, I just hope you like it.

At the Police station

Sumo arrives at the police station. She goes inside and sees that Ramnath, Shiv and Preeta are sitting with the commissioner. She comes forward and takes Shiv in her lap. She kisses him on his cheeks and puts her arms around him protectively. She asks them all about what happened. On Shravan's instructions they decide not to tell her the truth - Preeta says - Sumo, wo main Preeti se milne gayi thi, toh wahan Shiv bhi tha. Maine socha ki iske, Priyanka aur Vrishti (varun and vandy's daughter) ke liye ice cream le aati hun, toh main aur Shiv, bahadur ke saath ice cream lene gaye.
Shiv - mummy ice cream parlour me wo dono uncle bhi the, maine bahadur uncle ko hint me bataya aur unhone hi police uncle ko wahan bula liya aur police ne un dono ko pakad liya.
Commissioner - haan, aapka beta bahut hi brave hai, isne bahut samajhdaar se kaam liya.
Sumo kisses him on his head, Ramnath caresses his cheek. Shravan enters. Sumo gets up and goes to him with Shiv in her arms. He gives her a side hug, caresses her on her cheek and takes Shiv from her. He says to Shiv - I am very proud of you beta and he whispers to him - tumne jo bravery dikhai uske liye bhi aur jo Shreya ke liye jo kiya uske liye bhi, bahadur uncle gaye hain Bill dene.

Meanwhile at Shreya's house,

The family is having dinner in candle light when suddenly the lights turn on. Shreya's dad says - Arey ye kaise, maine toh bill pay nahi kiya, Shreya smiles with joy. Shreya's mom remarks - oh toh ye Shiv ka kaam hai, main kal subah hi uske liye uski favourite kheer lekar jaungi, usse thanks kehne.

Back at Police station

Commissioner to Shraman - Aap dono ek baar mere saath aaiye, shayad aap in kidnappers ko pehchante hon. Shravan to Shiv - beta dadu ke saath ghar jao, main aur mummy bhi ghar se samaan lekar aate hain thodi der me. To Preeta - thanks Preeta, maine bahadur se keh diya hai, wo tumhe ghar drop kar dega, bahut der ho gayi hai.
Preeta - ok Shravan, ok Sumo bye. Bye beta.
Ramnath, Shiv and Preeta leave. Shraman head to the jail cell with the commissioner. Commissioner - kya aap log in dono ko jaante hain?
Shraman - nahi sir
Commissioner - koi baat nahi hum pata laga lenge.
One of the man shouts - arre saale humari company barbaad kar di, hume nahi pehchante.
Shravan to Commissioner - ye log shayad Enron se hai. Main inki company ke against case lad raha hun, isliye hi inhone aisa karne ki koshish ki.
Commissioner - Theek hai, aap log ab ghar jaiye, main dekhta hun inko toh.

Shraman come out of the police station, he puts his arm around her shoulder and they walk to his car. He asks the driver to go home with his luggage. They both then go towards Sumo's Mercedes. He gives her a tight hug and says - thank god Shiv theek hai. Chalo ghar chalte hain, samaan pack kar liya kya tumne.
Sumo - nahi, thoda sa bacha hai.
Shravan - koi baat nahi, abhi kar lenge.
Sumo goes towards the driver side, Shravan - Sumo..
Sumo - Shravan ye meri car hai na..
Shravan makes a sad face but then goes and sits on the passenger side.

They keep on sneaking glances at each other throughout the ride. They reach Sumo's house. She picks up her purse and the envelope and takes out her keys. She opens the door and goes in. Shravan follows right behind and closes the door.
He pulls her back by the waist and turns her around so that her back is against the door.
Shravan - Sumo, I missed you so much, he cups her face and plants a kiss on her forehead. She moves his hands and kisses him on the cheek and gives him a hug. He breaks the hug and pecks her on her lips, she responds back by kissing him with all the longing and love she feels for him. They start moving towards their room, she drops the purse and the envelope midway, and breaks the kiss just once to pull over and remove his t shirt. On reaching the stairs, he breaks the kiss, picks her up and heads upstairs.

Meanwhile at Malhotra House

Shiv and Ramnath are playing Chess. There is a phone call for Shiv. Kamal comes and gives him the phone. Shreya is on the line. She says to Shiv - Thank you Shiv, tumne apna promise pura kar diya, humare ghar light aa gayi.
Shiv - tum toh meri best friend ho na, aur friendship ka rule hota hai friend ki help karna aur haan ismein thank you ki kya baat hai, tum bhi toh meri help karti ho na. Ramnath smiles and thinks to himself - jaisa baap waise beta.
Shiv says bye and keeps the phone. Ramnath says to him - beta tumne bahut acha kaam kiya, humesha apne doston ki help karni chahiye. Lalaji enters and says - bilkul sahi kaha aapne bhaisaab, itni achi dosti itni aasaani se nahi milti, beta apni dosti ko humesha nibhana.

Meanwhile at Sumo's house

Shravan is lying on the bed with Sumo in his arms. She keeps on planting small kisses on his jaw, lips and chest. He takes her hand stops her and says - ye ab ghar jaake continue kare, chalo jaldi samaan pack karke chalte hain, Shiv wait kar raha hoga. She reluctantly gets up. Looks around and says - mera phone kahan hai.
Shravan - neeche hi hoga tumhare purse me.

She heads downstairs. She picks up her purse and notices the envelope. She says to herself - arre main isse check karna toh bhool hi gayi.

She opens the envelope, there are pictures inside. In one of them Shravan is having a meal with Trisha, in another he is hugging her. While she is looking at them he comes downstairs. She is seething with anger. She sees him, throws the pictures, picks up a flower vase and hits him with it, his hand gets hurt and starts bleeding, he tries to come closer to calm her down, keeps calling her name but she is mad with anger and pushes him away and keeps hitting him with whatever she gets. She keeps on crying and shouting that ki tum isliye bangalore gaye the.

Shravan says - Sumo shaant ho jao please, itna gussa tumhare aur humare aane wale baby ke liye accha nahi hai

Sumo - baby! Kaun sa baby?
Shravan - tumne mujhe bataye nahi, par Shiv ne tumhari baatein sun li thi aur usne mujhe bataya.
Sumo - oh, ab main samjhi tum apni girlfriend ko chhodkar mujhe kyu mana rahe the. Isliye hi tum meri itni care kar rahe the, hai na?

Shravan - Sumo, meri baat suno
Sumo throws the pictures at him, stares back at him with anger and hurt and says - just leave.

Shravan takes the pictures and heads out. Sumo breaks down into tears. (zindagi kaha kahan plays)

At Malhotra House
Shravan enters and heads towards the lawn. He sits down on the swing trying to figure out how his life got so messed up. Pushkar sees him, he comes and asks - kya hua bhaiya
Shravan hands him the pictures and silently heads upstairs to his room. Pushkar sees the pictures and figures out everything. He takes the pics along and heads to Sumo's house.

At Sumo's House
Sumo opens the door for Pushkar and let's him in without a word or reaction. Pushkar says - Sumo, main bhi gaya tha bangalore bhaiya ke saath, Preeti ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi isliye aa gaya wapas, parson phir jaunga, Trisha humari opposing counsel hai aur clients ki request par hi hum opposing counsels se mile the. Waha main bhi tha, aur bhi log the, ye photographs doctored hain, tu apne saath aur bhaiya ke saath aisa mat kar, kya tujhe pata nahi hai ki wo tere alawa kisi aur ke baare me soch bhi nahi sakte.

Sumo starts crying, Pushkar takes her hand and gives it a squeeze. He says - chal apne ghar chal. She picks up her phone, locks the house and comes with Pushkar to Malhotra house.

At Malhotra House
Sumo rushes in and goes upstairs to their room. She enters the room to find Shravan sitting on the couch and bahadur dressing up Shravan's injured hand.
She comes and takes the ointment from his hand and says - bahadurji aap jaiye, main karti hun. Bahadur leaves. Sumo starts applying the ointment and dressing up the wound as tears well up in her eyes. She kisses his hands and says - Shravan..
He pulls back his hand. She caresses his cheek where she had hit him, he turns his face away. She comes on the other side of the couch and tries to cup his face. He moves her hands and gets up. He goes to his desk, opens the drawer and hands her the divorce papers which he has signed. He says - kal subah ready rehna, humein ye court me deposit karne hain.

She breaks down and falls on the floor, looks up and says through her tears to him - I guess kuch galtiyon ki koi maafi nahi hoti.

Shravan - haan

He leaves the room.

I know this will make you sad, makes me sad as well, but is crucial to the track in my head. Till then -

"The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring,

Renewed shall be blade that was broken, the crownless again shall be king. " - Tolkien

Please don't hate me guys.. Lots of Shraman moments in store ahead..




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Posted: 8 years ago
woah man...literally spellbound...read last two parts in one go..n thy were fantablous..
haaawwhh..Shravan signed the papers😲..i so guess hez planning sumthing..for sure..plzz continue soon..so eager to knw wht unfolds ahead😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
woah
what
divorce papers
no way
continue soon

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