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Posted: 8 years ago
Its super duper update...interview se zyaada, i enjoyed sumo's imitations 😆😛 shravan herogiri...hah ahaha
complete jalkukdi she is.

but shravan should realize this, even he can't tolerate sumo being friendly with anyone else..haina !!

Oh..so shravan is regretting signing papers. please make him accept it and resolve it as well.

😭 oh...again misunderstanding...sumo didn't inform him...why cant she write a detailed message explaining she was concerned for his health...dil kolke baat nahi karegi...pir misunderstanding toh ayegi na !!

oh yaa...now diya new admission to shravan's office (shraman's life)...she not in country...pata nahi..how will she interpret this again ?

well written...please update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you guys, your appreciation means a lot.. Love you :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Sumo is out of India may be now shrawan got to know about that lady who created the misunderstandings between them.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its nice update...but etani misunderstanding
plz update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
poor nanu
hope he gets better
amazing update
loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great shrvn kitna cute lagta h ese gussa karte huye but ab kya kya hoga plz jaldi jaldi update krna
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Posted: 8 years ago
Plz bring some positivity in next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
New Update - Chicago 1.0

Chicago

Its evening, Sumo 's flight has landed, she comes out of the Airport. Anuj is there to pick her up. She goes towards him, he takes her trolley and gives her a hug.

Sumo - Nanu kaisey hai?
Takes her to the car. He deliver as they talk.
Anuj - Dadu abhi kaafi better hain, kuch dino me ICU se bahar aa jayenge, Aaj toh late ho gaya hai, kal subah hospital chalenge,
Dadu tujhe bahut miss karte hain, kai baar wo sochte hain ki hum sab chote bacche hain aur sabpe chillane lagte hai ki meri Suman ko kahan bhej diya. Arya aur Rishi (Anuj's and Ritika's kids) jab bhi shor machate the aur unki dopahar ki neend disturb ho jaati thi toh maa se kehte the ki Shravan aur Suman se kaho shor na kare, (Sumo smiles as she reminisces) Shravan ko bhi bahut miss karte hain, koi hai nahi na yaha jo unke saath chess khele.

They reach home, everyone welcomes her, gives her a hug.
Mami - beta tu fresh ho jaa, maine saari teri pasand ki cheezein banayi hai
Mama - Wah Mami aur bhanji me itna pyaar
Mami - Haan, beti hai wo meri, bahut acha kiya beta tu aa gayi. Shravan aur Shiv kaise hain
Sumo - dono ache hai, bas thode naraaz honge, dono so rahe the jab mai flight le kar aa gayi
Rachna - beta, jaa tu unse baat karle
Ritika - Haan Suman, come I will show you to your room.
She takes her upstairs, her luggage is already there. She changes into pj's and turns the radiator on as it's very cold and switches on her ipad.

At Malhotra House

Shravan, Shiv and Nirmala are having lunch. Shiv finishes his lunch and runs upstairs to his parents' room with Shravan's ipad as he wants to continue playing Super Mario.There is a facetime call from Sumo. Shiv receives the call.

Sumo *Thank god you picked up Shravan, Shiv! *
Sumo - Hi baby, *kisses*kaisa hai mera shivi, dadi ko tang toh nahi kiya na, papa ki tabiyat kaisi hai?
Shiv - main theek hu aur papa bhi, mumma aap apne nanu ke paas gayi ho na, papa ne bataya, main pray karunga ki wo jaldi se theek ho jaaye, taaki aap jaldi wapas aa jao, mujhe aapki bahut yaad aa rahi hai.

Shravan comes upstairs and peeps on the Screen as he hears Shiv talking.
Shravan *Sumo, tumse toh mai baat hi nahi karunga*
Sumo - baby main bhi tumhe bahut miss kar rahi hu, a tear escapes her eyes.
Shravan - Sumo, ye tumne kya laga rakha hai hmm.. tum mujhe bata nahi sakti thi, main bhi chalta na saath me, nanaji kaise hain?
Sumo - abhi better hain, kal subah milne jaungi
Shravan - acha main aaj ki flight se aa raha hu
Sumo - Shravan, tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai aur Shiv ko kaun dekhega
Shravan - wo ma papa ke saath reh lega, main aa raha hun, that's final.
Shiv - Mumma mumma pata hai aaj humare class me ek new girl aayi hai.
Sumo - acha
Shiv - Haan uska naam Deepika hai, aur wo humari colony me hi rehti hai, isliye hum log ek hi school bus me school jayenge.
Shravan - Haan, ye Diya ki beti ke baare me baat kar raha hai, police ke kehne par usne Deepika ka school change kar diya hai.
Sumo - Oh Ok, acha main abhi thodi der pehle hi pahunchi hun, subah, I mean tumhare yaha raat ko call karungi. Shravan, apni flight details de dena, tumhe airport se pickup karne ke liye.
Shravan - Ok tum rest karo.
Shiv - Good night mumma *kisses*

Chicago

Sumo dreaming

*Nanaji and Shiv are playing chess, Shravan and Sumo watching them.

Shiv - Checkmate! Maine nanu ko hara diya
Nanaji - aakhir beta kiska hai
Shravan - nahi Nanaji, aakhir student kiska hai, aapne toh iske dadu ko bhi chess sikhaya hai, toh iske guru toh aap hi hue na
Nanaji - Suman, dekh isse, ye apne papa ki tarah bahut bada vakeel ban gaya hai*

Shravan sleeping in the plane

*Ramnath and Nanaji playing chess
Ramnath - Tiwari ji Aaj toh main hi jeetunga
Nanaji - Dekhte hain Ramnath, main na aajtak koi case hara hun, na hi koi baazi.
Teenage Shravan and Sumo are watching from the window.
Nanaji - Check mate!
Shravan enters
Nanaji - aao Shravan, dekho tumhare papa ko maine phir se chess me hara diya
Shravan - Nanaji, please mujhe bhi chess khelna sikhaiye na
Nanaji - Haan par ek shart pe, tumhe mere saath roz chess khelna padega
Shravan - Done, Nanaji
Sumo who had gone to get tea comes in with a tray of tea and snacks.
Sumo whispers - kya done hai chashmish
Shravan - Yahi ki main yaha roz aaunga, Nanaji se chess seekhne
Sumo whispers - par fees mujhe deni padegi
Shravan whispers - wo kya
Sumo whispers - tu roz mere saath badminton khelega
Shravan - Ok, done*



Next Night in Chicago

Shravan reaches, he comes out of the Airport, Anuj has sent a car to pick him up. He wraps his scarf tightly as it is cold and windy. He sits in the car and they are driving towards the house *just a few more minutes Sumo, I'll be there*

At Anuj's house

Sumo is sitting on the couch *Shravan kaha reh gaya, abhi tak toh aa jaana chahiye tha*
Maasi smiles - Suman, Shravan aa hi raha hoga, shaam ka time hai na traffic bahut hoga.

The bell rings, Sumo rushes to the door..

Shravan's POV

*God it's cold, someone open the door... She opens the door and pulls me in.. And oh that warmth, she envelopes me in a tight hug.. I've missed her so much*

Sumo..kisses her on the head

*she looks so cute, just like a teddy bear with her pj's and robe and the cute ear muffs, but why are her eyes all teary and puffy*

Sumo, Nanaji theek hai na
She nods, *then why are you so upset? *

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Sumo - Shravan aao dinner kar lo, tumhari tabiyat ab kaisi hai, she turns up the radiator, thandi bahut hai, aao yaha baitho.

Shravan - Sumo abhi theek hun main, kal se toh fever bhi nahi aaya, tumne khana khaya?

Maasi - nahi, tumhara wait kar rahi thi ye kabse, chalo dono khana kha lo, aur rest karo, kaafi long flight thi na


They are about to finish dinner when Anuj arrives

Anuj - Hey Shravan, kaisa hai
Shravan - Hi Bhaiya, mai theek hu, Ritika bhabhi kaha hai?
Anuj - Haan uski hospital me shift hai, koi surgery thi aaj, wo khatam karke aayegi. Sumo, Arya aur Rishi se milwaya isse, bahut excited the tujhse milne ke liye, dadu tujhe itna yaad jo karte rehte hain...
Sumo- nahi bhaiya, wo dono so gaye the
Anuj - acha, (hands over a bottle of mulled wine) Shravan, ye le teri favorite
Shravan - thanks bhaiya
Anuj - chal tu rest kar, subah milte hain.

Shravan and Sumo head upstairs to their room. Sumo unpacks Shravan's stuff while he changes. He comes out from the washroom and sits on the couch. She sits on the couch kept on the side. Shravan opens the bottle which is kept in a heated up kettle to keep it warm. He pours some in a wineglass, then asks Sumo - ye lo, but be careful, ye thodi strong hai. He then pours some wine for himself. Both are silently drinking their wine.

Shravan - Sumo, Nanu toh theek hai na
Sumo - Haan
Shravan - toh tum itni upset kyu ho
Sumo - main kaha upset hun
Shravan - Sumo, tumhe lagta hai ki tum mujhse jhooth bol sakti ho?
Sumo shakes her head in a no.
Shravan - toh phir koshish bhi kyu karti ho
Tears fall from her eyes. Shravan gets up and sits on the side of her couch, hugging her. She also puts her arm across his waist and leans on him.

Shravan - Shh.. Kya baat hai
Sumo - Shravann.. Nanu ko mai yaad nahi hu.. Aaj jab main milne gayi toh mujhe Priya keh ke bula rahe the
Shravan - toh kya ho gaya Sumo, tumhe pata hai na ki unhe humesha se tumme tumhari ma ko dekha hai, ho jaata hai, pareshaan mat ho, dekhna wo jaldi hi tumhe pehchan lenge. Acha, tumne Shiv se baat ki kya? Pata hai usne football team join kar li hai, aur jaanti ho kyu?
Sumo - kyu?
Shravan - kyuki Deepika ko football pasand hai.. Haha

Sumo has had around 4-5 glasses of wine by then and is quite drunk

Sumo - mm.. par mujhe toh tum pasand ho.. haan thode se.. bas thode se khadoos ho.. but I really really love...












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Posted: 8 years ago
Yaar this is not fair now i my dying to read next update. continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love... Love... Love... Love... Love this update but love what???? Plz update asap

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