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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow Shravan isse kehte hai mauke pe chauka marna...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read last two upiiz in on go...
woah man u r amazing!!!
Shiv iis such an inteligent kid..akhair doo genious ki production hai😆
Finally shiv is back...Shraman❤️
Ending was lovely..ab dekhatay Sumo kya karti hai..
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update . ...hope sumo forgives shravan
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Posted: 8 years ago
Above all, waiting to know about the little shravan or sumo that is expected😉 is that confirmed ? when will sumo inform shravan
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Posted: 8 years ago
New Update - Cont'd Winning her back 2.0

Dedicated toThe Nickster on her birthday


Sumo goes downstairs to the kitchen. She opens the fridge and takes out the bottle of Chocolate syrup. She mumbles - ab dekhna bacchu main kya karti hun. She goes upstairs, and paces outside the bathroom door. Shravan comes out wearing a towel. Sumo is just near the door so she collides against him and he holds her, she accidentally squeezes the bottle of Chocolate syrup and the syrup squires to her face. Shravan removes the chocolate with his hand and licks it. She gives an annoyed look, Shravan smirks. She goes into the bathroom to clean up, while Shravan gets ready.

They both leave for work, Shravan takes Shiv along and drops him at school. He goes to the office and is welcomed back by everyone. He goes to the conference room to meet his clients.

Meanwhile at school, the teacher punishes Shreya as she has not done her homework. She is asked to stand outside the class. The class gets over Shiv rushes outside to meet Shreya as Shreya is entering the class. She is crying as she is a straight A student and has never been punished. Shiv wipes her tears and asks her - Shreya tumne homework kyu nahi kiya, agar karne ka mann nahi tha toh mujhe keh deti na, main kar deta.
Shreya - humare ghar pe light nahi thi, papa electricity bill nahi de paye isliye.
Shiv - please ro mat, main papa ko bol dunga, wo tumhare papa ki help kar denge.
Shreya - nahi Shiv, mere papa tumhare papa se paise nahi lenge.
Shiv - theek hai, tum mere ghar aake padhai kar lena.

Shiv keeps thinking of ideas to help Shreya. Shravan comes to pick him up from the school. On the way he sees a vendor selling pav bhaji. The stall is very crowded. Shiv decides that he will also open a stall and sell sandwiches to earn money to pay the electricity bill.

They reach PCT. He gets down and rushes to Preeta's cabin. Shravan is surprised. He goes to Sumo's cabin. Sumo asks - Shiv kahan hai?
Shravan - wo Preeta se milne gaya hai. Pata nahi kya khichdi pak rahi hai uske dimaag me. Mujhse keh raha tha ki main usse subah subah hi malhotra house drop kar dun.
Shiv enters. Sumo picks him up in her lap and kisses him on the cheek. She says - kya khayega mera baby, aaj toh tumhari pasand ki bahut saari cheezein bani hai. Chhote bhature hain, pulao bhi hai.
Shiv - mumma, chhote bhature.
Sumo - Acha. Aur Shravan tum?
Shravan - Jo bhi jahanpanah pyaar se khila dein.
Sumo makes a face and calls the kitchen and asks them to bring chhole bhature for all of them. They have lunch together. Then Shravan and Shiv go to Malhotra house. Shiv goes to the house and Shravan to the office.

It is evening, they have returned to Sumo's house. Post dinner, Shravan and Shiv are watching a football match. There is a goal. They give each other a high five and Shiv starts jumping on the couch.
Sumo comes there and says to Shiv - utaro, abhi niche utaro, mana kiya hai na maine bed pe ya couch pe jump karne se. Shravan tum usko mana nahi kar sakte the, tumhe yaad hai na ye last month humare bed se gir gaya tha, kitne stitches aaye the. Shravan pulls her by the arm and she sits on the carpet. He says - arre, ab niche utar gaya na, tum baitho, humare saath. He pulls her closer so that her back rests on the couch. He puts his arms around her neck and his chin atop her head. He kisses her on her head and they continue watching the match. Sumo is very tired so she keeps yawning. Slowly she puts her head on his lap and drifts off to sleep.

Shravan asks Shiv to turn off the TV and to go sleep. He picks her up and takes her to the bedroom. He puts her down on the bed and covers her with the comforter.

He sits on the bed watching her sleep and he himself drifts off to sleep. Shiv comes upstairs to see where his papa is. He sees them both sleeping peacefully, so he closes the door and goes downstairs to his room.

Sumo is feeling thirsty so she gets up to drink water. She is surprised to see Shravan sleeping there with his back against the bedrest. She gently pulls him down to the bed so that he can sleep comfortably and steps out on the balcony. She thinks about the past few days and how unbearable it would be to live without Shravan.

Shravan comes from behind and wraps the comforter around her. He says to her - Sumo andar chalo bahar bahut thandi hai. He brings her inside, they sit on the bed. He tucks her hair behind her ears and says to her - Acha suno, mujhe kal dopahar ko ek case ke liye bangalore jaana hai. Tuesday tak aa jaunga, tum apna aur Shiv ka dhyan rakhna. Acha chalo ab bahut raat ho gayi hai, so jao.

Next update - so what will Sumo decide, will she withdraw the case.

Edited by Newriterondblck - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update...sumo is realizing that how unbearable it would have been without shravan.,..do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...feel light update. Shravan sumo scene was too good. Shiv is very cute. Just like his dad, he wanted to help shreya by some way. Good work
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice one...👍🏼sumo is realizing her mistake now...shravu n shiv wer really cute...😊update soon n plz uss trisha ko Bangalore mein mat lana...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for PM
Nice update
Beautifully written
Sumo the dramebaze
At least she realized how unbearable it would be to live without Shravan
Eagarly wait for bangalore update...
Update soon

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