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Posted: 8 years ago
#91
Eagerly waiting for next part. Hope their differences will be resolved soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#92
Loved it..hope sumo learns to trust sshravan. ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#93
Uff so much ego... This Sumo more egoistic than our shows Sumo...
Itna stubborn... Jo Shiv samaj sakta hai yeh madam kyoun nehin...

Will they resolve their differences...

Waiting for next chap
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94
New Update - Following the Court's Orders

Shravan changes and comes down for dinner. He is happy to see that Sumo has made all his favorite dishes. He exclaims - Arey waah meri favourite wali daal. Ramu kaka ke haath ka khana kha kha ke bore ho gaya tha main.
Sumo - does not respond back. She says to Shiv - theek se khana khao, poore table pe daal chawal gira diye hain.
They finish dinner and then Shravan goes on the couch and switches on the TV. He is watching a football match. Shiv comes and sits on his lap.
Sumo - Shiv, tumhe subah school nahi jaana hai kya, chalo utho brush karo aur sone jao.
Shiv - mumma please, thodi der
Sumo makes an angry face and points towards the bedroom
Shravan - Sumo abhi itni der bhi nahi hui hai, thoda sa match dekhne do, phir main sula dunga
Sumo mumbles - khud to bigada hua hai, apne bete ko bhi bigad raha hai. Discipline naam ki cheez hi nahi hai baap bete me.
To Shravan - Theek hai, jo karna ho karo.. Aur haan coffee table se pair hatao
She goes to her room to sleep. A few hours later she wakes up and goes to Shiv's room to check on him. Shravan is sleeping gingerly on a corner and Shiv has occupied most of the space on the bed as he keeps on moving in his sleep. He has also hogged most of the comforter
Sumo picks up Shiv in her arms, covers Shravan with the comforter and carries Shiv to her own room and goes off to sleep.
Next morning - Shravan has gone for a run, a car follows him and stops at some distance from Sumo's house. Shravan enters the house. Sumo is about to go inside the bathroom for a shower when Shravan comes in all drenched in sweat, he takes off his shirt and goes in the bathroom.
Sumo shouts out in exasperation - ye kya harkat hai, mujhe PCT jaana hai late ho jaungi main. Tum Shiv ke bathroom me bhi toh jaa sakte the.
Shravan - wahan toh wo taiyyar ho raha hai school ke liye.. Yaar I just came back from a run.. 5 min ruko aata hun bas shower leke.
10 min later. Sumo - Shravan! bahar niklo nahi toh main andar aa rahi hun.
Shravan - toh aa jao, maine kab roka hai
Sumo mumbles - toh aa jao...sapne dekhte raho tum.
Shravan comes out - Jaaiye jahanpanah, the bathroom is all yours.
Sumo goes in, meanwhile Shravan has settled on the bed with the newspaper and coffee. Sumo comes out of the shower wearing a robe.
Sumo - niklo yahaan se aur mujhe taiyyar hone do.
Shravan - Itni thandi hai, aur ye bed kitna cosy hai, main toh kahi nahi jaa raha. Tum bathroom me change karlo.
Sumo - mujhe sari pehenni hai, ab niklo yahan se.
Shravan - main yahaan se nahi uthne wala, aur itni thandi me tum sari kyu pehen ke jaa rahi ho. Kuch aur pehen lo sardi lag jayegi.
Sumo - mera sari pehenne ka mann hai isliye. Ab niklo.
Shravan - Arey yaar subah se mat shuru ho jao, jaa raha hun.
Sumo comes down to the living room, wearing a white sweater with blue jeans. Shravan smiles when he sees her. They have breakfast together.
Then they go outside to wait for the school bus. Shreya also comes there with her mom and they say hello.
She says to Shravan - Shravan uncle, aap ab yahin rahenge na.
Shravan - haan beta.
Shravan to Sumo - lagta hai isne poore mohalle ko bata diya hai.
The bus comes - both of them kiss Shiv goodbye.
The car is still there. One of the guys sitting in the car says to the other - toh ye hai iska beta.. Shravan Malhotra tujhe toh hum ab batate hain.
Sumo is at PCT, she calls Shravan and says - Acha suno
Shravan says - bolo na
Sumo - Shiv ki bus 2 baje aayegi, dhyan rakhna aur haan maine tiffin bhej diya hai, tum lunch kar lena. Aur haan please ghar mat failana.. Aur haan Shiv ko bolna homework kar le...tum sun rahe ho na, kuch bolte kyu nahi.
Shravan - tum kuch bolne dogi tab bolunga na, don't worry main Shiv ko khud hi school se le aunga aur homework bhi karwa dunga.
Shravan goes and picks up Shiv. They have lunch together and then Shiv starts doing his homework on his daddy's watch.
He is a little tired after studies so he falls asleep, Shravan carries him to his bed and switches off the lights.
Shravan decides to pick up Sumo from PCT. He locks the door and goes to pick up Sumo. The guys in the car watch him leave. Sumo is surprised but comes with Shravan in his car. Shravan calls bahadur ji and asks him to pick Sumo's car and drop it off at Sumo's house. Thereafter the battery of Shravan's phone dies. Shravan and Sumo are driving back home. Sumo's phone is vibrating but she does not notice as her bag is on the back seat with some stuff from the office. They reach home. Bahadurji is waiting for them outside the house. The police also arrives then.
Shravan asks - what has happened, why is the police here.
Bahadurji - Sir main jab yahaan aaya toh ghar ka darwaza khula hua tha, main andar gaya toh koi bhi nahi tha.
Sumo cries in fear - Shiv! She runs inside the house frantically searching for Shiv, Shravan follows her...
Clearly he is not there. Shravan hugs her and tries to console her. Yahi kahi hoga Shiv, abhi mil jayega. Darne ki koi baat nahi hai, wo tumhara beta hai, usko kuch nahi hoga..They go out to speak with the police and start asking around the neighborhood..

Next update - So where is Shiv.. How will Shraman handle this situation.. Sorry thoda melodramatic ho gaya na
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hayiio rabba...ye ki hoya😔...nice update ha👍🏼...cheeti cheeti agla wala😳...mujhme toh kamini ghus gayi.. 😃😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mindblowing upii!!!
Shiv missing 😲
i guess ya trisha ka hi kaam hai..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Am sure..now sumo will blame shravan calling him careless. But i wish she wouldnt say that he did this wantedly for any reason...Please sumo don't kill his heart now by doing all that. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#98
It is so sad that Shiv kidnapped... 😭
Who will be the culprit now... 😡
I hope now Sumo will come closer to Shravan while searching for Shiv... 😔

They need one another's support to each other..

Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#99
New Update - Finding Shiv
In the previous chapter, while Shravan had gone to pick up Sumo, at Sumo's home -
Shiv was sleeping in his room. The bell rang and he got up to open the door thinking that his parents must have arrived. He takes the footstool and peers through the keyhole. Seeing that two strangers are standing outside he asks them to come later.
They do not leave and continue to ring the bell. Finally they try to break open the door. Shiv blocks the door using the armchair. He runs upstairs to Sumo's room. He picks up the phone and tries to call both his parents, they don't pick up their phones.he opens the cupboard and takes out some cash and hurriedly puts it in a bag.
He runs downstairs and leaves from the back door. He goes to the lane behind the house and sees that a truck is standing there. He goes and hides in the truck.

Meanwhile, at malhotra house Ramnath and Nirmala decide to go to Vrindavan to pray for their family and they leave for Vrindavan by car.

At the house -
Shiv is hiding in the truck. The two men break into the house and start searching for Shiv. The truck starts moving. Shiv is very scared. The guys are not able to find Shiv and they leave. The truck stops and Shiv gets out. The car follows him. Shravan gets out and takes the city bus. The car is still following.
Shraman reach home and start searching for Shiv.

Meanwhile at the bus stand, - Shiv gets out, the guys also get out of the car. He sees them and hides into an open luggage compartment of a bus. The guys check all the buses and finally give up. The bus in which Shiv is hiding starts moving.

Meanwhile in Delhi -
Shraman and the family are at the police station waiting for leads. They have also given ads in social media and the television. The police officer asks them to go home and rest, and that they will inform them if there is any news.
Sumo says she will not go. Pushkar says to them - Sumo tu aur bhaiya ghar jao, shayad Shiv ghar aa jaye. Main hun yahan, jaise hi kuch pata lagega main bataunga.
Shravan - haan wo shayad kahin aas pass hi gaya hoga, chalo ghar chalein wo aa jayega.
He puts his arm around her shoulder and they leave the police station. Shravan opens the car door for her, she sits and then he sits in the car. He fastnes
her seat belt and says - wo mil jayega Sumo.
Sumo says - hume usse akele nahi chodna chahiye tha. Main bahut hi buri maa hun, usne mujhe call bhi kiya, par maine hi uska phone nahi uthaya. She starts crying. Shravan holds her hand - aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai Sumo, ismein tumhari koi galti nahi hai. Dekho rona band karo, tabiyat kharab ho jayegi.
They reach home. They see that a black dog is sitting outside. Sumo pats him and says - tum bhi Shiv ka intezaar kar rahe ho na Charlie, wo aa jayega, jaldi ghar aa jayega, she rushes inside the house crying, Shravan follows her feeling completely helpless. They go inside Shiv's room. Sumo is sitting on the floor with Shiv's picture. Shravan sits next to her. She puts her head on his shoulder and leans in. He holds her in his arms. Both of them remember the time they spent with their son

Flashback Sumo -
Shiv is a toddler and has just started to crawl. Sumo is looking for him everywhere and is on the verge of tears. She is standing near the bed, suddenly she feels a tug at her kurti and looks down, Shiv comes out crawling from under the bed.
Sumo - badmash, bed ke neeche chupe the, pareshaan kar diya na tumne mumma ko.

Flashback Shravan -

Shiv is a baby and it is night time, he refuses to sleep and is crying constantly. Shravan takes him from Sumo and goes to the balcony. Shiv falls asleep, Shravan brings him inside, and he wakes up. Shravan sits in the rocking chair and starts rocking the chair holding Shiv, Shiv sleeps peacefully. Shravan thinks to himself - main tumhe kabhi kuch bhi nahi hone dunga.

Back to present - Both of them fall asleep, it's very early in the morning, they receive a phone call. Sumo picks up the phone. It's the police officer on the other side. Sumo says between tears - haan hum aate hain. She cuts the call and breaks down.
Shravan - kya hua Sumo, kuch bataogi bhi, please batao kya bol rahe the woh
Sumo - while crying Shravan unhe ek body mili hai, identify karne ke liye bula rahe hain.
Both of them are extremely distraught as they enter the hospital. The police officer takes them to the morgue.

The body is of a little boy who is around Shiv's age. They come out of the morgue.
Sumo to Shravan - kitna chota baccha tha, humari tarah uske mummy papa bhi uska intezaar kar rahe honge.

Shravan gets sad but then reassures Sumo - Wo mil jayega Sumo, kuch nahi hoga usse. They drive back home for a shower and decide to start looking for him again.

Meanwhile - the bus stops and Shiv gets down when the conductor is busy in handing out luggage.

He has reached Vrindavan. He takes an auto and gives the driver the address of their farmhouse. He reaches the farmhouse and rings the bell. To his surprise Ramnath opens the door. He shouts out Dadu and hugs him tightly. Ramnath is equally surprised and relieved to see him as they were just about to leave for Delhi. He calls out to Nirmala - Dekho kaun aaya hai, Shiv mil gaya Nirmala. Nirmala says - main abhi un dono ko phone karke batati hun.
Ramnath - rehne do, koi zaroorat nahi hai un laparwah logon ko batane ki. Apne jhagde me bacche ko bhi bhul gaye.
Nirmala - par Ram..
Ramnath - Chalo jaldi karo ab Delhi ke liye nikalte hain...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Shiv...my darling. ...😃 such an intelligent child. Hero niklA hai Yeh bilkul hero.👏 How smart. Checking before opening the door. , taking cash and running away, holding address of their house. ..very smart boy. Thank god he escaped and reached ram nirmala safely. I totally agree with ramnath. This shock is much needed for parents who forget everything in their fight. Especially sumo. Why can't she stay back at malhotra house and fight her rights. At least shiv won't be alone. She brought him alone and went for work, fought with shravan so now he is fully involved in convincing sumo mission. They both forgot shiv na. This is needed now. Very nice update. Mast chapter hai👏

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