Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 70

this epilogue ws everything.. I had this huge smile on my face while reading this.. it had everything I wanted to see in edkv.. thank u for writing this.. keep writing amazing stories like dis..

Originally posted by: sapphire3

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Priii❤️
I had been reading the A/N for past 30 minutes
Smiling and crying at the same time
You know I'm crazy ..right?

Of course I know you're crazy, we are at the same level😆
You wrote a thank you note for us that's really sweet of you .
But it should me thanking you .

Oh come on!
Thank you Zo for patiently bearing me ..I know I can be annoying at times 😆

Never😎
Whenever I requested you too write something you gladly obliged...thank you

Tu maange aur mai na karoon, impossible!
Like you I waited to give those live updates too 😳

I know
Talking to you makes my day a lot better...trust me.

I do!😛
Thank you for being my friend 🤗

Thank you for being mine!!!!
I love you to the power of infinity ❤️
Makes two 🤗
Okay now no sentiyapa

I like the term🤣
Coming to the update

"Humari zindagi ki nayi shuruaat hai, humare pehle kadam toh need to be frozen in time.

Hats off for the feet impression foam idea

It's my dream
Omg he kissed her in front of everyone 😲
Hell yeh!!!

"Aur kuch? Control toh mujh mai hai hi nahi. Woh toh Sumo biwi theek se bani nahi thi aur ab ban gayi, toh a word of caution, ab se, ghar mai zara dhyaan se ghoomna, you might see a lot of this around!"

Aaja sabko dikha de ban besharam 🤪

Hahahaha😆
He did bring her favourite tulips was just playing earlier 😳

Yes he was! Biggest day of their life, how would he not?

He put those pictures on the wall where his favourite car was mounted ...can someone be more romantic? Naaa

Why did you take the car down?"

"Cause I love you more than all the limited edition cars in the world combined."

This man is love ❤️

That he bloody well is🤪 Mad love!
He remembered her wish to dress up like her mother ...kaha milega aisa Shravan Malhotra? ❤️

Pata nahi yaar.. we all want one such Shravan in our life
He apologised for the crap he said on preekar's wedding day...I so wanted him to apologise
N you have some telepathic abilities Zo 😳

I do? Or it's just that we both have the same dristhikone😉

*Drum rolls*
Here comes @mehboobkenam 😎

Padaharo ji mhare des😃

Jiska mujhe tha intezar jiske liye dil tha bekrar
Wo ghadi aa gayi

Ab nahi aati toh kab aati😳

Shraman's suhagraat *blushing*
Isse jyada Na tu likh pati na main pdh pati...yeah I've a habit of skipping explicit contents *hides face*
Loved it!!
Sahi kaha.. Mai khud blush ho ri thi while writing and baaki isse zyada mujh gareeb se expect na karna😆 Hoga hi nahi mujh se😛 Tu bohot cute hai ya!
"Sumo, pyaar hai, aa gaya toh aa gaya, ab waqt aur jagah dekh ke toh nahi aata na pyaar.." 🤣 🤣
Loving your version of besharam Shravan Malhotra

Me too! I believe Shravan would have been really besharam if the story was allowed to progress.. He was highly naughty😆

"Teri aankhon ke jaadu se tu khud nahi hai wakif,
Yeh usse bhi jeena sikha de jisse marne ka shauk hai...
👏 👏 👏
No words to describe how beautiful these lines are!

Toh mat bol kuch❤️

Seamaster Aqua Terra 150M James Bond Limited Edition by Omega.
Perfect gift for him

James Bond 😎
'My 007'
That day when he told her his password she said "007 bhi laga dete"
Aaj sumo ne khud laga diya😳

Haanji! Ab lag hi gaya!

"Uff! Tumhare hormones kuch zyada nahi phudak rahe!"
Ten years is a really long time ...kitna control kiya tab tak shravan ne 😆 ab to hormones ka phudkna bnta hai 😆

Ab nahi phudakte toh tum log maar dete merko😆

The kaleidoscope analogy was bang on!!

It was wasn't it😳
He wrote poems for her ❤️

I wish show mai dikhate, cause he was a poet, Namik ki awaz mai shayari, maar do bas 💔
Absolutely beautiful lines !!! Both Hindi n English ...Hindi one is ❤️ you know why😃

Yes I do! Thank you so much hon❤️
Loved it!! But quoting it would make my already long comment much more longer 😆

Word😆

Wow!! Sumo made a portrait . Nothing could be better than these gifts.
Nothing could...
What a way to announce a good news !!!!
She made a cake ❤️

Ab woh chef hai toh tareeka bhi chef wala seemed befitting...
Aww shravan having nightmares . Poor guy is so scared that he may not be a good father .

A person once cracked can never be the same again, he could change but never completely..
Twins!! Wow!!

I just love the idea of twins 🥳
Samar n Samairah how cute ❤️

Haina!
Thank you for writing cute lil moments of shraman n kids ❤️

Any time hon!
N ending with beautiful para from the title track ❤️

It's my most favourite.. It's got positivity and hope
Zo it was a masterpiece !!!!!

Aww yey!!!
The best epilogue till date.

Shush you! Bas kar😆
Thank you for giving a closure this show deserved .
It deserved all this and lot more...
P.s.- It's 4:05 am and I'm writing this comment...tujhe to pata hi hai I can't control 😆

Baap re! Pagal😆 Mai 3 baje bye bolke ekdam log jaise so gayi🤣
So forgive me if I forgot to mention anything . The whole update was my favourite .

I think you mentioned all of the update, and all of the running commentary points! Must say 4 baje bhi dimag is on point😆
I'll come back again 😳 .. coz ek bar me kaha dil bharta
That I know... Yahin aayegi, kahan jayegi aur❤️
P.p.s- Resh ne isiliye do res kiye 🤣
Ek me much jyada lamba ho gya comment 😆
Haan🤣

Aur woh bechari previous update ke comment ko 3 baar likhi aur woh reject hua cause it was long😆

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

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Suruchi🤗

So cute n lovely epilogue 😛

a wonderful journey of Shraman as expected by me

Thank God it met your expectations!😃

Every part is so so amazingly amazing I loved all part equally

First part of this epilogue is the cutest I enjoyed reading sometimes funny too..n emotional at same time

Beautiful ending.

Thank you!!

Gonna read all chapters again :-)😃

Aww yey!! Do let me know what it feels like to read it as one chunk, cause I still haven't😆

Every time I read these updates I miss EDKV more..

Aww man❤️

Thanks Zoya once again 😊

You're welcome hon!

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

"THE WEATHER OF LOVE

Love
Has a way of wilting
Or blossoming
At the strangest,
Most unpredictable hour.
This is how love is,
An uncontrollable beast
In the form of a flower.
The sun does not always shine on it.
Nor does the rain always pour on it
Nor should it always get beaten by a storm.
Love does not always emit the sweetest scents,
And sometimes it can sting with its thorns.
Water it.
Give it plenty of sunlight.
Nurture it,
And the flower of love will
Outlive you.
Neglect it or keep dissecting it,
And its petals will quickly curl up and die.
This is how love is,
Perfection is a delusional vision."

Their love story survived a falling out. . .They were meant to be... #EkDujeKeVaaste

This story is magic! ❤️

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Wowww... That was such a beautiful Epilogue Zoyaaa...

Why did this have to end? [;[]

Cause aj nahi toh kal all things do😳

I absolutely loved every bit of the Epilogue. ❤️ The growth in their relationship and the love with time was so beautiful to read.

Thank you!

ShraMan as parents was I think the best part. 😳

Agreed!

Eagerly waiting for your next.

Hopefully soon...

~ Mrina <3

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat

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👏 👏 👏 Beautiful 👏 👏
Family time,Fun,ShraMan Moments, ShraMan With Kids .Such A masterpiece .

Thank you so much Sana!
when saw Title Of PM Wanted to shout why its Ending ,and why Show Ended.
But its A Fact.

That it is, haina😳
The way U wrote "Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate Ending" 👏 Hats Off 🤗

Shukriya🤗

🤗 if Possible Write More.

Absolutely will😛
🤗 Thanks A looot Zoya.

You're welcome 😃

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Itna mat has tu. Woh jb v main thora long comment likhti hu woh delete ho jata hai. Kuch na kuch ho hi jata hai. So safety measures 🤣 Last time 3 rd attempt pe hua post.

Originally posted by: Flibbertigibbet

Flibb🤗

HUM PE YE ZOYA NE...KONSA RANG DALLAAA

FEELINGS NE HAMARI HUMEIIINNN

MAARDALLA! ALLAHHH! MAARDALA! ALLAHHH!!

Hahahah... Kuch bhi bro😆

*clutches heart.*

Drama Queen😎

This is so perfect i feel unworthy of commenting on it.

Dude! Kya bol rahi hai ya❤️

This is everything zoya.

It is?

Thankyou. thankyou thankyou thankyou <3

Anytime hon🤗

It's so amazing. good lord i dont even know where to start!

:')

Hehe😳

You say i make you laugh, it's very little for all that you do :)

No! Don't belittle your role

Also, it's kinda my job! as a seasoned player in the game of life :P

Hahaha.. good one😛

Your writing touches hearts. you know it touched mine. and you knew it was going to happen. <3

Yes I did... You know now why I was so excited for you to read this...

This so beautiful, i really do not have words.

As expected

You know what my favourite parts are.

"Teri aankhon ke jaadu se tu khud nahi hai wakif,

Yeh usse bhi jeena sikha de jisse marne ka shauk hai..."

Kya hai kya aaqir? maardaalte? aur kitta maarte?

This murdered me dead. i legit burried ny face in the mattress with my hands by my side in surrender!

I knew you'd do that!

And then ofcourse, Kaleidoscope.

This part was like a beam of light shooting up into the sky, calling out to me like i'm Batman and that is the bat signal. (i am not as cool as batman, i know )

It revived me from that "maut daaldiye" session above. :P

Haha! That's right! You're a fighter! Batman is cool, you are sass! Never change ❤️

All i can say is, this is one of the finest pieces of writing i have ever read. and it's not because its characters that i love. it is your writing. good writing has the power to move people. you writing does that to me to no extent.

Man! Bas khatam! Feel aa rahe hai mujhe ab😆 Why you have to say stuff like this! Bacche ki jaan legi kya?

Thankyou again!

Anytime!!!!

#stonedsisters #f**kinformationbrigade

(Honest confession, i dont remember how we came across the 2nd one XD)

I'll tell you... We don't know shit like Aditya didn't know shit..

He didn't care and neither did we..

Hence the name😆

P.s.

LADY ATHENA, THIS BRAINCHILD SHRAVAN OF YOURS IS MINE! <3

Kal raat ko hi de diya terko...

😃

Hi Zoya,
I can't ask more than this as a gift for Diwali... it made my day...
Whatever I wanted see everything in the show... that fulfilled here...
memory box revealed... Shravan's letter which he has written long back that revealed...
I wanted see them applying haldi to each other, Sumo had mehendi of Shravans name, sangeet dancing together how they practiced in the show for Preekar's sangeet,
They are parents of twins... that cute babies...

can't ask for more than this, I m happy... it didn't make me feel that EDKV is not there...

Thank you

keep writing & make us happy with Shraman's stories...

Originally posted by: Sunain

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Sunain🤗
Zoya Zoya Zoya...wht do i do with u..???..yar koi itna perfect aur fantastic kaisay ho sakta hai.. 🤪
Really really really loved it...to the core❤️

Aww my! Thank you ya!! 😳
Zoya today u again made me teary...this time dead one 😭 😭 😭

Aiyyoo...
EDKV is my life seriously i just can't stop thinking bout thm bout their love bout their life n so on..
Ur this SS made me envy Sumo sooo much tht i can't tell u its intensity with which m jealous of her..literally 😳

Hahaha! I think everyone here is😆
She had got wht every women wishes for...Dream husband..Dream Marriage...Dream home...Dream Married life...Dream love...Dream Romance...Dream children...Dream family...b so on...its like she got every thing..i like every thing tht a women dreams for...more over a Husband who loves her to the sqaure of infinity...
I soo wish to hav such a love pouring n showering husband.. 😳

Makes all of us
Zoya u nailed it indeed...n ya i concur bout missing EDKV n its messy ending..
n still miss EDKV so soo sop much tht most of the time m humming its OST
N everyonz like "will u stop it Sunain its over just move on" n i give thm my best will u keep ur mouth shut look n thy thankfully get tht..

Awwiee...
Wel cuming to the upii...
Shravan bold step was Awesome..kissed her in front of whole Malhotra Clan..dude got guts Bro! Quite amused 😳

Guts toh bhar bhar ke the usmai😆
More over the wedding nite was very very wel written..loved it

I'm glad... I was pretty apprehensive
Thn their cute cute moments sumtimes got me like 😭 n sumtimes
Shravanz overflowing besharmi scenes were ❤️
Tht kaleidoscope part was outstanding.. ⭐️
The way she told him bout the "good news".❤️
The way shravan took care of her❤️
Sadning was tht shravan had a nightmare..was insecure.. but
sumo asurrance made me 😃
I so knew tht thy wud be great parents as thy had to cope with their own childhood..
Moreover Shravan daddy version was ❤️
N their Quickies... 🤣 😳 ❤️

Thank you so so much! 😃
All in all u mad me relive thm...so thank u thank u thank u so so so so much...n i mean it 😳

You're welcome!!
U r a gem❤️

Aww yey!
lots of tight 🤗 for u..

Right back 🤗
n love u alot ❤️

Love ya too❤️
it was sheer pleasure reading this SS of urz n enjoyed yo the square of infinity 😳 😆
Haaa...like by now m damn sleepy...can't think of more...so pardon me if i had said sumthing foolish or nonsense 😳

Hahaha! Never! It's a sweet as hell comment!
So thn GOOOD NIGHT...N SLEEP THIGHT 😳
ummpphh...good nite kissi 😉

Don't scandalise me please 😆