Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 71

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow

that was amazing

absolutely loved it

totally brilliant

Originally posted by: Faith28

Happy tears happy tears(sniff sniff)...

Aww man.. sowwiii...

Loved it to the core...could not get a more perfect epilogue than this👏👏 and on Diwali...brightened my day..oppss night😉 Dil ko sukoon mila ab jaake😳

Arey thank you so much ya❤️

Please keep writing more stuff👍🏼 This story was BRILLIANT!!

I will indeed...

And yes, a spl mention to the poems...they were very beautiful and Apt😊

Shukriya...

Originally posted by: seabeauty

Wonderful ending to a wonderful story!!

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Thanks for this diwali gift zoya.

You're welcome😛

Read the last chapter too, actually was too caught up with school to comment but now I am doing so.

Arey its okay ya.. padhai first!

In the last chapter you nailed it, shravans plight when nanu said suman will stay in tiwari killa, 😆their seeking out secretly,their wedding 👏.

Thank you!

Yet to read the epilogue.

Take your time!

Happy Diwali again, have a great year ahead. 😊

Happy Diwali to you too🤗

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

Res

Will unress once I get my laptop cause the comment has to be big!

Too many favorites *grins*

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

Unresd on page 91 :-)

This time page no is correct😆

Originally posted by: Safire

Dear orian23,!!!i have lost words to describe!!!!

I'm Zoya😃 And glad to have put you at a loss of words😆

A kissing shravan's warning"ghar men sab zara dhyan se ghoomna,you will have to see a lot of this around you"and i am dead!!!

Don't die please😳

BTW, i am not to analyze para after para bcoz that will become another ss!!!

Aww man!

You know, i started reading this after breakfast and when I finished only i realized that I forgot to cook for the lunch!!!!so here I am off to cook😭

Arey I'm sorry...

{And my husband asks whether this will be the case daily😉}

Umm tell him that's highly unlikely 🤣

I guess there is another write-up by you already which I will read very soon!!!!

There are quite a few write ups by me.. You can find them all in the writer's corner on MF😃

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Originally posted by: Safire

Woh! One more thing I forgot!! Only yesterday i was thinking why nobody has written about twins for shraman and there you are!!!! It's a double dhansika for Diwali!!! Thank you so so so much!!!!!

Originally posted by: bindu356

Speechless... Finally we got everything we wanted.

Glad you feel that way😳

I want to save this forever because this chapter itself gives all the feels of our sumo and Shravan.

you r a gifted writer👏👏

Shukriya aapka...

Can we expect season 2 from our Zoya the great screen writer... If time permits... # being greedy#

Great nahi hoon ya.. Bas likh leti hoon thoda bohot😛 IDK.. We have Mrs. and Mr. Malhotra.. That could serve as S2😆

2016 Golden Globe, iffa, BAFTA and Oscar for best screen play award goes to ZOYA 👏👏

#bas boldiya#

Kuch zyada nahi ho gaya? 🤣

Itna bhi accha nahi likhti mai😆

But thank you!

Originally posted by: dhanyata

My language is not enough to express the beauty of this writing ! Honestly!

I love it totally.

Aww man! Thanks!

Malhotra house decoration, shrav cute talk during grahpraveesh, family teasing and the remarkable shrav dialogue and action to make them shut😳 with these stuff itself i am dead...

A lot many casualties this update has caused 😆

But then came the most beautiful moments. Sumo without parents must have faced so many hurdles, always felt herself as a burden, all those are getting repaid now. How thoughtful Shrav is. As sumo said, he left no stone unturned to show his love.

Ab pyaar hai, aa gaya toh aa gaya...

Their cute twins are soo soo adorable.

Twins are clearly a hit!

As i said i can't describe enough. But one thing, i feel is am getting jealous over the overflowing love i see here. 😆 Our shrav and sumo deserves more love of course.

your writing disturbed me emotionally that i started feeling jealousy over fictional characters. Ha ha ha 😃😆

You're not alone trust me😆

Thanks for the pm.

You're welcome!

and yes, we need to see more of your write-up on this couple. Promise us that you have only ended this alternate ending SS but would come with another beautiful one.

Yes! You have my word.. Only SS has ended, not ShraMan😛