Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 68

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Posted: 8 years ago
Resh do res🤣
Itna lamba comment karna hai😆
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"THE WEATHER OF LOVE

Love
Has a way of wilting
Or blossoming
At the strangest,
Most unpredictable hour.
This is how love is,
An uncontrollable beast
In the form of a flower.
The sun does not always shine on it.
Nor does the rain always pour on it
Nor should it always get beaten by a storm.
Love does not always emit the sweetest scents,
And sometimes it can sting with its thorns.
Water it.
Give it plenty of sunlight.
Nurture it,
And the flower of love will
Outlive you.
Neglect it or keep dissecting it,
And its petals will quickly curl up and die.
This is how love is,
Perfection is a delusional vision."

Their love story survived a falling out. . .They were meant to be... #EkDujeKeVaaste

This story is magic! ❤️
Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Tere do res kyun be?
Late ane ka fine 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wowww... That was such a beautiful Epilogue Zoyaaa...
Why did this have to end? [;[]

I absolutely loved every bit of the Epilogue. ❤️ The growth in their relationship and the love with time was so beautiful to read.

ShraMan as parents was I think the best part. 😳

Eagerly waiting for your next.
~ Mrina <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
🤗
👏 👏 👏 Beautiful 👏 👏
Family time,Fun,ShraMan Moments, ShraMan With Kids .Such A masterpiece .
when saw Title Of PM Wanted to shout why its Ending ,and why Show Ended.
But its A Fact.
The way U wrote "Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate Ending" 👏 Hats Off 🤗 🤗 if Possible Write More.
🤗 Thanks A looot Zoya.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3


Tere do res kyun be?
Late ane ka fine 🤣

Itna mat has tu. Woh jb v main thora long comment likhti hu woh delete ho jata hai. Kuch na kuch ho hi jata hai. So safety measures 🤣 Last time 3 rd attempt pe hua post.
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Posted: 8 years ago
HUM PE YE ZOYA NE...KONSA RANG DALLAAA
FEELINGS NE HAMARI HUMEIIINNN
MAARDALLA! ALLAHHH! MAARDALA! ALLAHHH!!

*clutches heart.*

This is so perfect i feel unworthy of commenting on it.

This is everything zoya.

Thankyou. thankyou thankyou thankyou <3

It's so amazing. good lord i dont even know where to start!

:')

You say i make you laugh, it's very little for all that you do :)

Also, it's kinda my job! as a seasoned player in the game of life :P

Your writing touches hearts. you know it touched mine. and you knew it was going to happen. <3

This so beautiful, i really do not have words.

You know what my favourite parts are.

"Teri aankhon ke jaadu se tu khud nahi hai wakif,

Yeh usse bhi jeena sikha de jisse marne ka shauk hai..."


Kya hai kya aaqir? maardaalte? aur kitta maarte?

This murdered me dead. i legit burried ny face in the mattress with my hands by my side in surrender!


And then ofcourse, Kaleidoscope.

This part was like a beam of light shooting up into the sky, calling out to me like i'm Batman and that is the bat signal. (i am not as cool as batman, i know )
It revived me from that "maut daaldiye" session above. :P

All i can say is, this is one of the finest pieces of writing i have ever read. and it's not because its characters that i love. it is your writing. good writing has the power to move people. you writing does that to me to no extent.

Thankyou again!

#stonedsisters #f**kinformationbrigade
(Honest confession, i dont remember how we came across the 2nd one XD)

P.s.

LADY ATHENA, THIS BRAINCHILD SHRAVAN OF YOURS IS MINE! <3






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Posted: 8 years ago
Ressi res..
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Zoya Zoya Zoya...wht do i do with u..???..yar koi itna perfect aur fantastic kaisay ho sakta hai.. 🤪
Really really really loved it...to the core❤️
Zoya today u again made me teary...this time dead one 😭 😭 😭
EDKV is my life seriously i just can't stop thinking bout thm bout their love bout their life n so on..
Ur this SS made me envy Sumo sooo much tht i can't tell u its intensity with which m jealous of her..literally 😳
She had got wht every women wishes for...Dream husband..Dream Marriage...Dream home...Dream Married life...Dream love...Dream Romance...Dream children...Dream family...b so on...its like she got every thing..i like every thing tht a women dreams for...more over a Husband who loves her to the sqaure of infinity...
I soo wish to hav such a love pouring n showering husband.. 😳
Zoya u nailed it indeed...n ya i concur bout missing EDKV n its messy ending..
n still miss EDKV so soo sop much tht most of the time m humming its OST
N everyonz like "will u stop it Sunain its over just move on" n i give thm my best will u keep ur mouth shut look n thy thankfully get tht..
Wel cuming to the upii...
Shravan bold step was Awesome..kissed her in front of whole Malhotra Clan..dude got guts Bro! Quite amused 😳
More over the wedding nite was very very wel written..loved it
Thn their cute cute moments sumtimes got me like 😭 n sumtimes
Shravanz overflowing besharmi scenes were ❤️
Tht kaleidoscope part was outstanding.. ⭐️
The way she told him bout the "good news".❤️
The way shravan took care of her❤️
Sadning was tht shravan had a nightmare..was insecure.. but
sumo asurrance made me 😃
I so knew tht thy wud be great parents as thy had to cope with their own childhood..
Moreover Shravan daddy version was ❤️
N their Quickies... 🤣 😳 ❤️
All in all u mad me relive thm...so thank u thank u thank u so so so so much...n i mean it 😳
U r a gem❤️
lots of tight 🤗 for u..
n love u alot ❤️
it was sheer pleasure reading this SS of urz n enjoyed yo the square of infinity 😳 😆
Haaa...like by now m damn sleepy...can't think of more...so pardon me if i had said sumthing foolish or nonsense 😳
So thn GOOOD NIGHT...N SLEEP THIGHT 😳
ummpphh...good nite kissi 😉
Edited by Sunain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow
that was amazing
absolutely loved it
totally brilliant
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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy tears happy tears(sniff sniff)... Loved it to the core...could not get a more perfect epilogue than this👏👏 and on Diwali...brightened my day..oppss night😉 Dil ko sukoon mila ab jaake😳
Please keep writing more stuff👍🏼 This story was BRILLIANT!!
And yes, a spl mention to the poems...they were very beautiful and Apt😊

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