Mil Jaate Hai Jo Bane, Ek Duje Ke Vaaste- Alternate ending - Completed - Page 22

Originally posted by: orion23

Thank you so much Suruchi!!

Take your time hon!

Please get well soon 🤗

Originally posted by: pearl100

Yaar rehem karo hum pe 😆 tum accha sa romance dena har ek chapter main 😆 kanjoos CV's nahi diye the 🤣

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

You are amazing writer ..I want to feel every bit of it par ajkal except weakness kuch feel nhi ho rha isliye next time agar PM nhi kiya toh i'll kill u 🥱😆

Originally posted by: orion23

Arey!

Romance ke liye Mrs. and Mr. series hai..

Iska naam hi alternate ending hai na, tho end toh karna padega😆

Originally posted by: orion23

Tu mana karegi toh bhi PM karoongi...

Kya kar legi tu🤣

Originally posted by: AMNP

Brilliantly written Zoya...this made me really emotional, especially Shravan's confrontation scene with his mother...this is what we had all been waiting to see...you have beautifully portrayed the insecurities and emotions that Shravan had gone through and finally Sumo realizing what Shravan had to endure...after reading this, missing EDKV more...waiting for your next part.

Originally posted by: castile

Unress on pg. 20

P.S. Its tooo long, sorry!

Originally posted by: Naamika

Thanks for this chapter zoya. I was just in search of chapter like this where shravan's pain is described and not portraying him like reason behind all the problems in ShraMan relationship. I'm really thankful for this chapter. I just loved it.