ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31 - Page 4

God it really looked like a confession...a confession that all edkvians were waiting badly since the day sumo made shravu meet nirmu ...but since the show is going to end, they're gonna show all this in a rush... the way you described each n everything was mind blowing...m out of words... all were at fault...yeah but mostly ramu was. how could you be so insecure of ur wife n son man?? trust...it's the one thing on which relations are made... you doubted ur wife n demanded a divorce. .threatened her to stay away from her son...and she complied...I wish once you'd have tried to talk to shravu nirmu if you'd really loved him but no you left as he made no choice.. you lied to shravu about nirmu ... n even after knowing that your son loves sumo u offered her a blank cheque to leave ur son... ur son was never a thing to be sold out...but in ur anger, ur ego, ur fear u forgot everything... n sumo I knw it wasn't easy for u to handle that situation but you too shouldn't have been that rude to him... u knew it always that after his mother, ur the only one for whom's love he really craved for... but you'd to chose ur family over him n I know you were not at fault but somewhere a lil maybe... n shravu u too are at fault like ur father...you saw wat ur father made you see...you forgot how much ur mother loved u ...u must had asked her the reason once... n how can u forget that the girl who was once ready to jump off the terrace for ur trust can ever hurt u ?? n even in cafe she confessed she won't ever hurt you no matter wat...I wish you'd have trusted her n tried to find out her weird behaviour but instead you believed ur father...well yeah you must have as he was always there for u... n you were so insecure of sumo like ur father that you broke all relations with her...n she chose adi over u ...u didn't care to find out y ...instead u kept taunting her, insulting her n at bachelor's party man u crossed all limits.. u forgot she was ur childhood besty ... u put so dirty allegations on her...u forgot in ur revenge that she was a girl n she's going be accused for her allegations all her life... once you'd said "do you really think you can hide anything from me?? y u even try??" u forgot that too...you missed the smile on her face when you said yes for marriage... but everything messed up...like hell... m glad you made it an ss ...waiting for next shraman part... beautifully written.. sorry for such a long comment ;)

You literally amazed me this time.
This was WOW.

I would've never thought that way about what a child wants when his parents part ways.
He wouldn't think much of right and wrong but would've appreciated the one who stayed.

Your take on Sumo's love for Shravan , was so beautiful !
That lady had done so much for the people she loves but how did it falter when it came to him.

It was heartbreaking to see that child in Shravan again whose parents manipulated him .

I am so waiting for the Sumo-Shravan confrontation.
And Nirmala's too.
You've set the bar high.
-God bless

It's a wow... beautiful penned...❤️

Wow emotional kar diya

Read it all in one go. This is so amazingly written! This is what Shravan Ramnath confrontation should have been! Nothing will justify the fact that Nirmala never contacted his son in these 11 years. I so wish CVs had utilized their time in showing this instead of what they did. Shravan's story has so much depth and layers of emotions. It just cant be justified by showing him in the wrong light. Please continue this story and update soon! Its beautifully penned.

hey dear...read all the parts in one go...itz awesome...

This story is like an unfulfilled wish coming true! You are highlighting all those points that I wanted them to emphasize in the show. I am loving this. Please update soon :)

You write so well. This is how I want Shraman to be.. Each others' strength. I absolutely love this story.