ShraMan FF: Contradiction & Reality - Chap 16 on P. 31 & A/N on P.31 - Page 2

amazing updates
absolutely loved them
continue soon
superb

Oh my !
This was beautiful.
Best Friends standing for each other .
Her leaning on him when Aditya spoke. Aww.
Him asking her for the help even though he messed up big time .
But she would deal with him later.

The best part was you updating two parts , but tell me there is a third one , pretty please ?

This was love! ❤️
The flow of your story was amazing with the perfect amount of drama, angst, heartbreak, love and their beautiful friendship.

The friendship which is their very essence. He botched up and big time and the first thing that came into his mind was to confess. That was brilliant. For a second there, young and adult Shravan merged.

And Sumo leaning onto Shravan. Dont have words to describe how fulfiling the moment felt.

Their private cuccoon amidst the chaos and cacaphony around. Wish the cvs handled it your way.

Is there gonna ba a part 3?? Where Sumo swears to deal with this errant, impulsive bestfriend of hers?? Pls Pls pretty pls...

my God it was just awsm.. both shots were mind blowing... no matter how much they pretend they hate each other, they just can't let anything happen to other one.. shravu's dawning with realization of guilt n how he pleaded like a kid to sumo to say something. , to bring him out of mess .. it was so cute ... nhow he put his court on her, how he stood in front of her like her strength, her never breaking wall, n how she clutched his shirt, rested her head on his side...these moments were so adorable... n adi well I hate him. .hated him from the day he entered in edkv...hate guys like him...always intruding in other's lives, so chipku more than fevicol even... n when u had an inkling that there's something going on between them, y did u butt in?? y didn't u just kicked ur ass out of shraman's lives?? bloody asshole, creep... wat kind of man r u ha...just bcz shravu said all this u had no bloody right to molest her...u beast... n nirmu kaki hate u...how can u favor adi? ? I really felt that ass is ur biological son n shravu is adopted one... nice shot back sumo... God this girl ..I loved her strength... u just made everyone quite... wat a reply man. amazing... n mami well no matter wat ur never gonna change...selfish lady... n last warning of shravu was God...man only u had that courage to do that n sumo I imagined the way u would've showed finger towards door to leave them... this is being gutsy shraman... such a long comment...:p ...sorry but wat to do when it comes to shraman I forget everything. .. please update last shot soon n pls make it a. happy ending... if possible please pm me ...:)

This is amazing👏👏

Amazing yr..
Love it...
One more update yr..
Make it three shots and last part on ShraMan conversation..

Amazing work

Beautiful...loved the update. .and we don't mind if you turn it in SS

Dude you are so talented!!
You guys can amazingly wrap up EDKV in the given number of episodes ( though still praying for extension).

This was brilliant. The intensity, the passion was all there. Shravan's regret , guilt and last attempt to salvage their relationship was wonderfully brought across. He is as afraid to lose her as a small kid fears to lose the hand of his mother in a fair.

And he gave a nice babaji ka thullu to Ramu!! 😆

And so glad you had Sumo introspect her own actions. His destruction and rage were tearing her insides and finally she broke her inhibitions and told him the truth. A truth that will set him free.

Shravan's wrongs does not make Sumo correct. She has her own share in this mess. And the way you equated their trades of revenge and family's happiness was a brilliant move.

But she has now let go of the relationship. Sab kuch khatm!! Poof!! Just like that...

Its for Shravan to now rebuild it. Waiting eagerly for the next part.