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beagleboy

@beagleboy

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

@Perpetuity,@Roshni,@Amulya, @Wiccamaya, @Joyness,@Crazy Vaish - Thank you ever so much for appreciating and liking my writing.

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beagleboy

@beagleboy

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

@Teju_wkar, @Noexcuse, @potterginny,@Amulya - Thanks so much for liking the poetry.

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nith125

@nith125

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

@beagle brilliant as always 👏

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beagleboy

@beagleboy

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: nith125
@beagle brilliant as always 👏

Thank you!!!!!😊😊

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orion23

@orion23

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Damn!

You nailed it yet again!

I just love the pain that flows through this..

Both the pieces are brilliant!

"I wonder what my tomorrow will bring,

I wonder what will be,

But as I sit under the willow tree

I hold the reins of the person that I resolve to be."

These lines!

Just perfect 👏

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beagleboy

@beagleboy

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: orion23
Damn!
You nailed it yet again!
I just love the pain that flows through this..
Both the pieces are brilliant!

"I wonder what my tomorrow will bring,
I wonder what will be,
But as I sit under the willow tree
I hold the reins of the person that I resolve to be."

These lines!

Just perfect 👏

Thank you ever so much.

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Fernweh

@Fernweh

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

@beagle, its so beautiful and poignant, am speechless cant say no more, you sure write brilliant stuff

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idonkno

@idonkno

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

I am at loss of words Beagle...This piece is a doozie!! I love how you have beautifully brought forward the various temperaments of a melancholic attitude by creating a fine balance between the inner imperfection and the visible sublimity which in addition also explains that the desire of perfection is the cause of the introversion. The emotional (sensitive) aspect is so wonderfully dealt by elucidating that how both beauty and distress both deeply moves a person wrapped up in sorrowful thoughts... This piece is one for the books :)

Edited by idonkno - 9 years ago

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Samridhi

@BinKuchKahe.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Beagle, this was a FINE piece. Absolutely beautiful <3

It is you guys that really keep pulling me back to the show.

BTW has the show gotten better this week? I haven't watched since Shravan beat Adi up at the wedding.

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indranigupta

@indranigupta

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

The melancholic soul and the atmosphere that you have created beagle...needs further reading...I wish you get it published somewhere..

Evoking an ambiance which is both dull and grey and yet beautiful ...to render the pain within ...a soul trying to break free of mind-forged manacles (Blake's words)...is to say the least full of possibilities...

I loved the way you used all the known icons of melancholic temper to make it into your own...

Awesome beagle...

Lovely👏

PS: For you beagle...a poem by American poetess, Emily Dickenson:

After great pain, a formal feeling comes -

The Nerves sit ceremonious, like Tombs -

The stiff Heart questions was it He, that bore,'

And Yesterday, or Centuries before'?

The Feet, mechanical, go round -

A Wooden way

Of Ground, or Air, or Ought -

Regardless grown,