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Originally posted by: indranigupta

The melancholic soul and the atmosphere that you have created beagle...needs further reading...I wish you get it published somewhere..

Evoking an ambiance which is both dull and grey and yet beautiful ...to render the pain within ...a soul trying to break free of mind-forged manacles (Blake's words)...is to say the least full of possibilities...

I loved the way you used all the known icons of melancholic temper to make it into your own...

Awesome beagle...

Lovely👏

PS: For you beagle...a poem by American poetess, Emily Dickenson:

After great pain, a formal feeling comes -

The Nerves sit ceremonious, like Tombs -

The stiff Heart questions was it He, that bore,'

And Yesterday, or Centuries before'?

The Feet, mechanical, go round -

A Wooden way

Of Ground, or Air, or Ought -

Regardless grown,

A Quartz contentment, like a stone -

This is the Hour of Lead -

Remembered, if outlived,

As Freezing persons, recollect the Snow -

First - Chill - then Stupor - then the letting go -

Originally posted by: AyeChavanni

Beagle, this was a FINE piece. Absolutely beautiful <3

It is you guys that really keep pulling me back to the show.

BTW has the show gotten better this week? I haven't watched since Shravan beat Adi up at the wedding.

Originally posted by: sanfan

Beagle...this is stupendous..👏👏

Its very difficult to come across good poetry in today's prosaic times...It was wonderful to read it..."Poetry begins with a lump in the throat" was how Robert Frost described the poet's writing process.

Its a very intimate process and if the writing can let us delve into that mind...it makes the experience very satisfying as if the reader has a peek into the mind of the writer.

Lovely..enjoyed reading it...