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Posted: 9 years ago
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There is a melancholy hanging in the air

that caresses my soul

and the birds perched on the willow tree

sound doleful as I stroll.

The evening mist that hovers around

is cool on my face,

The towering street lamps with their spectral light

guide me through the haze.

The owl perched outside my window sill

is watchful as I sleep,

The silver moon settles in the sky

as slowly nightfall creeps.

With heavily lidded eyes

I reflect on woebegone days,

when piqued with each other

under the willow tree, we parted ways.

The morning sun saunters in

bringing joyful cheer,

And in the bright lucent light,

for a moment, I forget my fear.

The birds up on the willow tree

joyously shake off morning dew,

But my world is silent once again

As I count my sorrows, two by two.

In my centre there is a heavy rock

that weighs down my heart-

-A lingering pain that seesaws

and wrenches me apart.

Under the mid-day sun,

as I walk under dappled shade,

I think of the Willow tree

Under which, as children, we played.

Twilight brings a calm

with its incandescent glow,

that settles a tumultuous storm in me,

and I eye the lake, still and deep, as men lazily row.

I wonder what my tomorrow will bring,

I wonder what will be,

But as I sit under the willow tree

I hold the reins of the person that I resolve to be.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is so beautiful that it hurts..❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Of Joy, since melancholy is incomplete without Joy.
Joy rippled through me,
a still lake hit by pebbles,
creating layers of mirth.
Hope flamed in me
like a voracious bonfire
to mark new beginnings.
Happiness sang me a sweet song
In tune with the single lark on my porch seat-
Melodious and loud.

Sunshine filtered through my window,
and illuminated my soul,
I opened my front door to
frosty gale
and smiled joyously
at the morning dreary and pale.

The storm clouds gathered above
pass by without a noise
Unfazed, with sure strides
I walk out the door with my dear friend Joy.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its so painfully beautiful.
I have no words to describe how heart-touching this is.
Amazing👏👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank god you posted joy... i was about to sink deep in melancholy... beautifully written...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my freaking God...
Beagle... You are mind-blowing man... This is awesomeness... This is love ...heart breaking, melancholic n joyous.. What do I even say... I'm such a huge fan of your writing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I guess Zoya has to add one more category in weekly forum awards especially dedicated to you...
this is so beautiful
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is seer brilliance. Every word of it just hit so hard. So painful but so amazing. I m going to remember this forever. It's AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL. I love poems and poems like this increases my love many fold. Thanks a lot for writing this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Melancholy and Joy.
Feeling Sumo?😳

Beautiful, Beagle!👏


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup

Melancholy and Joy.

Feeling Sumo?😳

Beautiful, Beagle!👏



Thanks Chick. A little bit of Sumo and a lot of me. Thank you for appreciating. 😃

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