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Posted: 8 years ago
Congos for the century Zoya 🥳
Edited by Animagus_Sirius - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Res
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Unres

Zo meri jaan 🤗
Prii my love 🤗

I love you bas !

I love you too Sistaa😳
Hum toh Vikram Baitaal hai 😎 , ek dusre ki jaan kaha chodne wale 😉🤗
Never!😆
Coming to the update
Aditya is still alive
I don't remember killing him 🤔

Damon ❤️
Merko laga earth se chomu species extinct ho gyi 🤣
Nahi abhi samay hai usko🤣
Log pair pe khulhaadi marte hai aur tum kulhadi ka poora truck apne par girane gaye the wahan.."


I know right😆 He was damn stupid that way😉
"Ma ke chehre par muskurahat dekhne ke liye woh bhi kar loonga.."
Haye re bechara masoom Adi !
Gareeb insaan...

There was a time I wanted this night-dress with the pompom topi
"Haw! No one loves me.. Alone lonely life.. Oh the pain..
Nataunki hai pura 🤣 But he is so cute ❤️
Haina! Cutesy pagal😳
Suman giving him gyaan hai he be like


Same expression 😆
Nimmo ke do anmol ratan
Ek hai aditya ek shravan 🤣
Uske Karan Arjun aa gaye😎
Whenever she says "Mere bacche " in her saccharine sweet voice
I want to drown her in DAAL
LMAO🤣 Let's frigging drown her in daal!
Bold Sumo flustered Shravan ...haaye ❤️
Aye Haye!
Shravan pulled him off of himself when adi hugged him ...Poor adi 😆
Poor Adi? Shravan pe chance maar ra and you're saying poor aadi!
Uska pehla pyar adhoora reh gya 🤣
Nonsense 😆
Omg! Shravan Dancing on Aise na mujhe
Mar gayi na?
And then the kiss !!
Pappi!!!
Dead ! Dead ! Dead ! ( Does it remind you of someone ? 😉)
Lol virus😆
Now that Aditya became Mohnish Behl . He could be bade bhaiya in next barjatya's project 😆
Yeh and get out of our lives isn't it? 😉
Super se bhi upar wali update !!!
Thank you!
Thanks for the gift 🤗
You're welcome! I had lost, it's only fair right?
I lub you re ❤️
I lub you more!

@Bold Thank you Prii🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

Congos for the century Zoya 🥳

Anshika 🤗
Thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hey Zo...!!!🤗

You said aaram se unres karna toh I took it seriously.😆

How mean Zoya. I mean how mean is your Sumo. 🤣

"Meri party ka kya?" "I don't know and I don't care." Loved her retorts man.🤣

Loved the fact ki Shravan opens up to Sumo. Chahe koi bhi baat ho

Suman and her ego... ufff. 😕

Cut to the beginning of the party. Loved their telepathy. Sumo ne Mann mein bulaya aur lo Shravan chale aaye. 😆

"I'll bathe you." ahem ahem. 😉

"Forgiven for the next 10 mistakes you make.." Desponess happening. 😉 And how i love it. ❤️

the dance and the kiss. ufff..*fanning myself.* 😳 temperature badh gaya yaha thand mein bhi 😛

Aditya ke baare mein I don't wanna say anything. I still hate him.😆


Zoya. You are definitely the best dialogue writer we have here. Undoubtedly.

So, If i ever get to produce or direct a film or a show, Zoya will you be my dialogue writer?😆

Kaatil update Zo. Cant wait for the weekend and 28th. 😊


Lots & lots & lots of love

Eva😳

Edited by evaviego - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
It's amazing dear !!! ❤️👏
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Oh god i love this shravan to no extend!

Yey!
The besharam and daring he is😳
Poor sumo...i pity her for the teasings that follow
Hahaha Low key she loves it😉
Beautifully penned zoya👏👏👏
Thank you...
A hug to you for writing this super romantic piece 🤗
Hug right back at you 🤗
And we'll shower together tonight turned me into a live tomato earning me glares from my elder sister and ab usko poora shaq hai ki I have a boyfriend and i'll get spyed till she is satisfied 🤣
Oh shit🤣 Apologies for putting you in trouble😆
I had a smile reading it and specially the part when he comes back in anger and she pacified him ...loved loved loved it
Glad you loved it...
Update soon...dil maange more😆😆
Hahaha 28th is the date😉

Love,
Dolly😃

@Bold Thank you so very much Dolly!!
😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

Ressy

Unress

Anshika!!🤗 Its so nice to see you back in full form!
I loved your poem btw😛

Dude I officially love This shameless mischievous,flirty Shravan
Yey!!!
You see I do not get swayed easily by emotions I tend to go by logic ,physics does that to u🤣
LMAO!😆
But you just left me speechless... Adithya's redemption was perfect, I was quite attached to his character even though they showed him in a negative light
I wasn't😆 But it needed closure...
Totally in love with this os
Thank you!
Keep writing
Will do😳
Love
Your no. 1 fan 😉
Hehe you're cute😛

@Bold Thank you so much hon!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyparrot

Beautiful update!

Loved this Besharam Shravan!

Thank you so very much!
😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon


"... death at his hands was way better than life itself."


That's epic there! 👏
Thank you Lara🤗

I loved Aditya's redemption track and ShraMan's argument on it gone wrong at night.
The whole thing was handled by you awesomely.
Yey! Coming from you

Aditya and Suman's exchange in the beginning was so hilarious!
Lol... I enjoyed Sumo's retorts so much.
She was handing out burns like there's no tomorrow😆

The party, ShraMan making up and publically making out 😆 - all superb.
Thanksie!

Keep writing such awesome pieces. 👍🏼
Keep ShraMan alive through your works. 🤗
I shall try my very best! 😳

Love and hugs,
Lara.

@Bold Lara❤️
Thank you so much!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Safire

Nice chapter!!!

Thank you Saf😃
Married life is highly unpredictable~~absolutely true!!!
Getting it from someone like you, I have to agree!!
I feel happy that you chose to make Adithya a person willing for redemption...,
Everyone deserves a chance if they repent, it's up to God to punish, who are we...
Love your writing...
Glad you do😳

@Bold Thank you so very much Saf🤗

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