Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 77

Originally posted by: minho

Awesome update 👏

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

You are actually the os queen! No one writes better than you!

Aww come on.. stop being so nice... I write okayish... I'm no Queen and definitely not the best... But thank you for such kind words 🤗

You will get many analyses! So I won't do that on any of your writings!

Okay😆

I would just sit and read and feel!

Exactly why I write, so way to go buddy😎

Lots of love to you!

Originally posted by: Arpi1234

Wow.. Just wow 👏

Thank you!😃
Love the song...

Amazing isn't it!
Shravan bringing aditya with him for niru kaki.. . That's really nice...

It's all about family at the end of the day 😛

You are just Brilliant 😉

Aww thank you!

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Call it a co incidence but the song 'Aise na mujhe ' was playing on the radio while I was pulling up the driveway back home.

Arey wah!

Perfect choice of song when a naughty Shravan decides to fluster Sumo publicly ...ermm...a tiny glitch. ..Sumo was not the only one to be flustered 😳

Naughty Shravan is more unpredictable than angry Shravan...

Sabko le doobta hai😆

Pinch in the midriff. .a small sound of hayo rabba left my lips as well here😆😆

Hahaha just as I would like it😉

Sumo has this inherent nature of letting her ego take an upper hand over Shravan. .but as long as they kiss and pinch and make up...who am I to event twitch an eyebrow😊

Absolutely buddy😎

Shravan went and got Aditya along...can imagine Aditya's condition during their drive to Malhotra house. ..poor guy must have gulped down gallons of saliva 😆

He got out of the car and thanked all the God he knew to exist😆

But on a serious note ...people do mess up...one should not let a mistake ruin a beautiful thing. ..Shravan's laudable gesture didn't not mean Aditya's behaviour was excused. ..it only meant that Shravan chose peace for himself.

@Bold Exactly! I'm glad the point hit home...

Holding on to a grudge pulls you down, you are not the only one that suffers but also those around you. Let it go like a helium balloon... Don't let it tie you down

Darn. .I need to control my OS sized comments.

Nah, It's cool.. Everyone is allowed to speak their hearts out on any of my threads 😛

Awesome chapter as usual Zoya..

Thank you...

This usual might have become pretty casual to you by now right😉

Nope, appreciation never gets old, even if it's "usual"😉

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Beautifully penned..
Thank you Vinu!
Shravan still couldn't forgive his parents & himself than how can he forgive Aditya so easily after what he did to Sumo...but he realised his mother's happiness is more imp than his stubbornness for not allowing Aditya to attend the party.

Sahi baat... kabhi kabhi doosron ko khud ke oopar rakhna padta hai, and in it he found his liberation too...

But has become more naughty after marriage & kissed Sumo in front of everyone...now Ramu kaka also understood anything can be expected from his son when he is with Sumo...aj kal ke bache..is it most natural thing to do in front of everyone now for Shravan?...itna besharam when did he become?
He always was ya... Bas show mai kabhi khul ke bataya nahi🤔
Thanks for PM
You're welcome...
Vinu

Originally posted by: Wiccamaya

mischievous Sassy Sharavan... after so many days such a heart warming story. 👏

Originally posted by: theGoldenGirl

Zoya Zoya Zoya!!!

Oh My Dear God! How can you write so beautifully!

Honest confession, I have no idea😆

U know I'm a typical PCM girl who seeks logic more than emotions in a fiction, the one who believes love is beautiful but only in books.

I used to be that person, not very long ago...

But that poetry talked of love of Real world. That it exists in actuality! It was so genuine, that too when it came from Shravan, it made me cry, like bitterly cry, by the end. You defined love. I now believe in it.

Oh my good God... Firstly, sorry for having made you cry. Secondly, @Bold My gosh that is a huge compliment! Like massive... Thank you..

Shravan's pain was depicted so flawlessly, as if you were him. I know I friend who has similar tale like his, exactly the same(parents part), except that her story didn't have a happy ending, I know how much she has suffered in life. In your poem that pain was palpable.

I'm so sorry about your friend, I hope she finds peace and love, she deserves it...

How Sumo could join those broken pieces, he might have fallen more for her. His gratefulness is described so well.

Shukriya.

Loved it so so much or rather it became Love for me.

Damn girl you're making me blush now... 😳

You write like an absolute professional.

Why thank you!

Agar asal mein ShraMan hote toh shayad yahi dialogues hote, yahi gestures hote, yahi poetry hoti!

Shayad...

Shall I suggest you something? I think you should send it to Dilip Jha as an appreciation for his story. No sane person can ignore and not make good use of a talent of this quality. Plus your vocabulary is really vast. Do make something of it, if you aren't already.

Thank you so much... I write cause it makes me happy, appreciation is a boon..

I'll definitely think about your suggestion...🤗

I had decided not to read any fanfiction for some days, but this series is special, very special!

Aww yey! Happy that you broke a rule for my works 😛

However, I've decided I'll read PARCHED later, so that I'm not deviated more towards it than already.

Hehehe sure hon, you can take all the time you need...

Your comments are important to me so I'll be patient😳

Keep writing!

Will do!

Originally posted by: Nik03

Unresed @ pg 96
😳

Originally posted by: deltadawn

Sumo bashing Aditya and her complete trust in Shravan and Preeta to do exactly what she thinks they will do 👏 I wish there was a wolf whistle smiley here as well.😆

Hahahah... I would love the wolf whistle smiley😆

Shraman hain + Married hain to ladai to banti hai.

Ekdam correct!

Shravan ko thanda karna bhi is ladki ko aata hai aur boiling point pe bhi yehi la sakti hai jaldi jaldi 🤣

Yeh bhi ekdam correct hai. Tu sahi pehchaanti yeh dono ko 😆

The Shravan of our collective forumwasi imaginations and dreams is so well purrrfected here and uniform across storylines (mostly)

Mostly eh😉 Thank you!

If Shraman post marriage were anything less it would be major heartbreak. Good thing they stopped where they stopped aisa lagta hai kabhi kabhi.😳

Mujhe bhi honestly...

Aditya got his much needed redemption.

Yup!

The dance was HOT and no one dares The Shravan Malhotra !! 😆

Never, unless they love loosing 😆

handled a serious topic, showed the conflict sticking to the characteristics of Shraman as they were, made it peppy with the dialogues and finished in style.

Shukriya...

Zoya kaise.. kaise karti ho yaar?

Sach boloon? Pata nahi merko... Bas ho jaata...