Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 78

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

oh wow

that was amazing

so romantic

so sexy

loved it

continue soon

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

Unress @pg 96

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Marvellous update.. Beautifully written..

Thank you Jerry!

Really liked Aditya's redemption..

Glad you did... 😛

And Shraman's dance on one of my fav song❤️

Your's too

"Aj kal ke bacche. Hi Jata hai, khass kar jab baat Shravan ki ho toh yeh sab bohot expected hai."🤣 love this besharam shravan..

Hainaaa😉

Originally posted by: bworm

❤️

Lovely...

Thank you...

This shravan was 😳

Do write more. ...lover it.

Glad you did.. Yes absolutely...

Am gonna check out this song

For sure do!

Thank for the pm

You're welcome!

Originally posted by: nileshni679

Awesomely penned

Originally posted by: priety.priti

Zoya Zoya Zoya how could you write so beautifyy...i mean i am already a jigra fan of your writing but with every new OS its getting increased...a big 🤗for writing such a beautiful piece

Aww man! Thank you so much for your kind words 🤗

Sumo is enough for handling aditya no need of shravan the sher 😆 "Marna chahate ho to zaroor!" 👏

She's the Yin to Shravan's Yan, kaafi toh hona hi tha😉

mind blowing dialogues ❤️

Thank you!

and song its just perfect 😊

Shukriya!

really poor girl dared THE SHRAVAN MALHOTRA , dont she know her husband very well 😲😆 feeling pity for sumo

Low key she likes his brazen declarations of love😉

only she is the cooling as well as boiling point of shravan no one else can do that 😉

Word!😎

an dyou ended with great panache... beautiful 👏👏

"Shravan would be the death for her she thought, but a death at his hands was way better than life itself"

Yey!

Originally posted by: sapphire3

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Originally posted by: sapphire3

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Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Ain't this perfect dish of love,pain,emotions seasoned with naughtiness😉 Awesome piece ..

Thank you 😃

Superb .. The aditya thing inserted with human touch and natural .. no forgetting/forgiving but letting him be there to make peace with oneself ..

Hainaa...

Shravan's threat is enough for sane aditya to back off .. 😃

Bechara darr gaya hoga...

Sumo is no less in rebuking him off .. he did earned it all by his stupidity ... but banda bhi insan hai akhir apni galti samaj hi gya ... & maa ke liye toh Sumo bhi pighal gyi ..

But their fights are always bcoz of stupid issues .. 😆 & then playing silent war to hurt each other ..

Gadhe the dono bhi...

Shravan did make a shocking entry for everyone .. Indeed acted as the ringmaster to aditya .. playing by his rules ..

that mom-sons hug scene was karan arjun one 😆👏

That's exactly what I was aiming at😆

The best part was the naughty shraman scene .. scandalising ppl by kissing his Sumo in front of ppl .. Giving heartaches to poor ppl .. Ramu kaka had to do damage control .. & then finally is it night enough 😉

Hehehe...

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww supercute adorable sweet lovely as always hun!

Thanks a lot!!

Lots of love,

Spandana