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evaviego

@evaviego

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Posted: 8 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: orion23
You're really cute ya Eva!
These are my two forever favourite characters

CUTE..!!!! *Blush Blush Blush Blush Blush*

#BlushesReallyHard 😆😆😆

Awww.. Thank you.

And yaaa... my favs too. 😳

Chalo for cuteness's sake.. Pls excuse me if i am late in commenting. 😳

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#632

Originally posted by: evaviego

CUTE..!!!! *Blush Blush Blush Blush Blush*
#BlushesReallyHard 😆😆😆

Awww.. Thank you.
And yaaa... my favs too. 😳

Chalo for cuteness's sake.. Pls excuse me if i am late in commenting. 😳

Hahaha pagal 🤣

Sure, take your time..

I'll be updating by weekend or early next week, tab tak ho jayega comment ?😆

Edited by orion23 - 8 years ago

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Parvati

@Ppoduval

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Posted: 8 years ago

#633

The update is so beautiful! Its breathtaking! Cant tell you how much I loved it!!

This is love! :')

Such romantic writings 😳❤️

Hope this makes your day brighter! :*

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: Ppoduval
The update is so beautiful! Its breathtaking! Cant tell you how much I loved it!!
Thank you so very much!
This is love! :')
Sigh, indeed
Such romantic writings 😳❤️
Shukriya!
Hope this makes your day brighter! :*
Always. Each comment makes it brighter and brighter...

@Bold Thank you so much for your comment!!!!

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sapphire3

@sapphire3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#635

Res
---------
Unres finally 😎
Tera Einstein moment kabhi kabhi hota , mera teri har update me 🤣
Thrice I typed my comment 😎
Zo 🤗

Ishhh! Itni tareef

Forum wasiyon if you feel like killing me on 28th please do but only after you kill Zo 🤣
Coming to the update

😎

Chal fir bhi try karti😆
The title Be love ❤️ ...Zubaan toh pehle hi le li thi ab dil bhi ❤️
Maar daal merko tu!

"I am the gift darling..

Hell! You are

#Shy Mr.Malhotra

I love when men blush 😳

When you put it on me, your warmth and scent gets all over it, and I love that.."

Can this man be more charming?

Kamini Chachi Lalita pawar se direct Nirupama Roy 🤣

Mama Aur Mamiji ki amar belan katha 😆

LIKHAWATEIN 👏
Bro!

Is there any thing you can't do ? This poem is freakin' awesome . It's so deep yet beautiful ❤️
Get your work published .
You are outstanding !!!!!!!

ZO !!!!!!

I loved loved loved it !!!!!
And

Zo merko ab bhi yakeen nahi hua . Ek aur likhegi kya ? 🤣

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: sapphire3
Res

Priii🤗

Finally!

Aap aaye bahar aayi🥳

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: Itssanjh
Only one word! Wowww!

One word, Shukriya😳

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phoenix_edkv

@phoenix_edkv

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#638

I loved it Zoya di!!!

"Liked?...Loved it. You're a magician"

Its not Shravan. Its not Sumo. Its you. You are the magician.

You are such a wonderful writer, not Shravan.

You are just awesome.

Every time you come up with an extraordinary piece.

And the most beautiful thing is in your stories is that Shravan is not flawless, yet he is the best person in the world. You make him the perfect one.

"BE LOVE" how did you get the idea.

Infact Im wondering if you are writing any novels too. Tell me if you are, coz Im going to read them all.

If we are going to get EDKV season 2 you should be the writer.

Im not exaggerating or something, Im writing this from the bottom of my heart.

You should be wondering Im writing more about you than the update, because you are awesome.

The update is asusual wonderful.

Subtle romance

Kamini chachi and Vandy's jokes

And Mr perfect Shravan MalHOTra

Bold Sumo

Loved it to the core.

Lots of love❤️

Madhu

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Dolly Chouhan

@Namiksfan

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#639

Leave shravan or sumo you are a magician ...you seriously do magic with words which penetrates directly...deep into my heart

The way you write,

Makes the moment bright.

From happy to sad,

And frown to smile,

All i can say that,

U have the power to cheer up any vile.

Okay crap...utter crap i know but i ain't shravan or zoya how could do magic with words but came in my mind so wrote it...i seriously cannot describe it in words...

Every part of it was amazing👏👏👏

But specially that line "farz h mera or haq h uska ki mein use kuch du" omg!!! What to say read it thrice and my heart thudderd loud...

That is all i could manage to say at moment ...loved it

Excited for your next...thanks for p.m😊

Dolly

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evaviego

@evaviego

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#640

Originally posted by: orion23

Hahaha pagal 🤣
Sure, take your time..
I'll be updating by weekend or early next week, tab tak ho jayega comment ?😆

Oh my my... meri nazrein toh bus updating by weekend pe hi atak gayi... another one coming...

tab toh pakka i'll comment by evening or max by tomorrow.