Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 65

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

Agnes❤️

I loved it Zoya di!!!

I'm glad you did Madhu!

"Liked?...Loved it. You're a magician"

Its not Shravan. Its not Sumo. Its you. You are the magician.

Oh my... *Grins like the fool she is* Thank you🤗

You are such a wonderful writer, not Shravan.

You are just awesome.

Oh stop it you😳

Every time you come up with an extraordinary piece.

And the most beautiful thing is in your stories is that Shravan is not flawless, yet he is the best person in the world. You make him the perfect one.

Not just Shravan ya, I feel everyone in this world is perfect in their own special way. We are all flawed, but how we rise above them and make our cracks our strength is what makes us perfect.

"BE LOVE" how did you get the idea.

I read Prii's piece and I felt the love. And that's it, Be love popped. Wrote Shravan's writing first and then built a story around it😃

Infact Im wondering if you are writing any novels too. Tell me if you are, coz Im going to read them all.

Haha no.. I don't think I ever will...

If we are going to get EDKV season 2 you should be the writer.

Gosh you are just throwing compliments my way, my cheeks hurt from blushing now...

Im not exaggerating or something, Im writing this from the bottom of my heart.

You should be wondering Im writing more about you than the update, because you are awesome.

You are awesomer! Its not everyday and everyone that can unabashedly speak their heart, iske liye special 🤗

The update is asusual wonderful.

Yey!

Subtle romance

Kamini chachi and Vandy's jokes

And Mr perfect Shravan MalHOTra

Bold Sumo

Loved it to the core.

Glad you did😛

Lots of love❤️

Madhu

Originally posted by: evaviego

Oh my my... meri nazrein toh bus updating by weekend pe hi atak gayi... another one coming...

tab toh pakka i'll comment by evening or max by tomorrow.

So...how to you praise the Jaan of the forum for her writing skills without gushing over her like a fan girl and embarrassing her...just by saying Zoya you are amazing and...Patli gali se bhaag Jaao😛

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Leave shravan or sumo you are a magician ...you seriously do magic with words which penetrates directly...deep into my heart

Arey ya... Thank you.. When you guys say stuff like this my heart swells ❤️

The way you write,

Makes the moment bright.

From happy to sad,

And frown to smile,

All i can say that,

U have the power to cheer up any vile.

Dude! You actually wrote a poem for me!

I don't even know what to say except I feel on top of the world

Okay crap...utter crap i know but i ain't shravan or zoya how could do magic with words but came in my mind so wrote it...i seriously cannot describe it in words...

You're being modest!

Its super cute! I love it😳

Every part of it was amazing👏👏👏

Yey!!

But specially that line "farz h mera or haq h uska ki mein use kuch du" omg!!! What to say read it thrice and my heart thudderd loud...

I just love the words Farz and Haq, and I ,love Urdu! No other language can do justice to emotions...

That is all i could manage to say at moment ...loved it

And you've said a mighty lot

Excited for your next...thanks for p.m😊

Me too! You're welcome!

Dolly

Originally posted by: Nik03

Res 😳

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Originally posted by: reshmanair356

So...how to you praise the Jaan of the forum for her writing skills without gushing over her like a fan girl and embarrassing her..

Oh my God! What are you guys doing? Killing me with comments is it?

just by saying Zoya you are amazing and...Patli gali se bhaag Jaao😛

Hahahah too cute😆

Man you killed it at Shravan's reason for 'the help with jacket sessions' between them...

I know right! I guess being a closet romantic has its perks!

'you want to know who is the centre of my universe...read the first word again' type of feels I got😳

Oh that one, "Tum meri zindagi ka markaz ho"

Mamaji with mamiji and the Belan made the most cutest moment😆

Poor Mamaji😆

Shravan's shaayari was neatly swept under the carpet by the CVs ...I wonder why myself...would have given more depth to him.

Absolutely!

Make up love..now you are talking😳😉

Aren't I☺️

Originally posted by: Nik03

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Am going mad 😲
Sorry bro 😕

Originally posted by: Nik03

Am going mad 😲
Sorry bro 😕

Originally posted by: Sadia.Ritu

Res.

Thenga to Pri😎 and I love you + miss you like hell🤢

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Unres

Wonderful update Zoyee..see I never can praise appropriately cause too much boring I am...but you know naa.. I love your writing!! Its like pani puri...khatta meetha teekha all flavours together..

Chal jhooti!

Boring hai? Kuch bhi! 😆

And pani puri se better compliment nahi ho sakta!

Yummy

I loved their private conversations most...😉

Hahaha 😉

He called her panda?? It was adorable😆

Yeh! He meant cute and warm...

Loved it from A to Z...

Glad you loved it so!

Loved that mama mamiji part too much🤣

Hahaha Belan prem katha 😉

PS: jab res kiya, main just few seconds pehle ghar ayi college se, aate hi India Forums check in and found your update and danced like a mad bandi😎

Aww man! Too cute you are!