Mrs. & Mr. Shravan Malhotra - Thread # 1 - Now moved to Wattpad - Page 36

Originally posted by: sheeluneelu

Wonderful piece ...m speechless

Originally posted by: sptrno

Awww speechless spellbound this is sooo beautiful heart-touching amazing awesome fantabulous loved it totally...ShraMan Mil Hee Jaate Hai Jo Bane Hai EK DUJE KE VAASTE...

Lots of love hugs,

Spandana

Originally posted by: angel_writer

unresss MOMENT OF IMPACT

i know dear i m very much late with comments...i m really sorry fr that...

nw about the update...

that was very beautiful...or i shuld say that ws PERFECT dear..

loved every bit of it...

loved the way shravan confessed his love for his sumo...

really thnx fr such a piece dear

and ya thnx fr the pm...

Originally posted by: sameer45

😆

beautiful couple... ladte bh h bt pyar bht h...

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Zo.. 🤗
What to say yr...beyond words.. 👏
Moments of impact..Beautiful..
Flashbacks..❤️
Shra proposal was so dreaming
her childhood home Best gift shra gave to her..
The swing ah I love that..
Adorable..
Marvelous zo..
Thnx buddy..
Load of love and hugs... 🤗

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

this is truly beautiful

i love your writing style

thank you for the pm

update soon

Originally posted by: AbhilashaM

Whoa!

So Zoya Di, at last I finished it.

Absolute brilliance👏!

I can't choose out which particular scene, act or OS I liked the most.

It was just like a beautiful journey which I would never like to finish.

All the four OS were exactly in your style.

Talent Speaks.

If we would have got to see these scene in the show, I am sure many would have fainted out of excitement.

Words are less to describe them.

Hope to read more of them.

Love❤️

PS:

The last one was really long one. Total 5744 words excluding the author's note. Just wanted to know how much time did you took for writing it.

Honton pe tere
Shikvon ka shor hai
Par ye nighaahe
Kehti kuch aur hai

O o ho o..

Jo hai mile lamhe kahin
Chhut na jaaye hath se
Mil jaane de dil jo bane
Ek duje ke vaste

😭😭 These lines got me so emotional thinking about ShraMan.

"Moments of Impact."

Lovely one shots, dear. Each one them.

The emotions, the scenes - be it comedy, desire, passion or love - everything was penned so wonderfully. Loved them to the core. ❤️

In the last OS, I especially loved the scene where Sumo brings food for him in the office and he gets all teary hearing her.

And then he becomes deaf in love too, of course! 🤣

Love you for writing these awesome pieces.

And pls, keep on writing - jaldi.

🤗🤗

Love yaa, Zoya!