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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey read all the updates in one go... this was really amazing and well written... can't wait for updates ... this is some real good therapy
Thank you !!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Honton pe tere
Shikvon ka shor hai
Par ye nighaahe
Kehti kuch aur hai

O o ho o..

Jo hai mile lamhe kahin
Chhut na jaaye hath se
Mil jaane de dil jo bane
Ek duje ke vaste


😭😭 These lines got me so emotional thinking about ShraMan.

Makes two!!!

"Moments of Impact."


Lovely one shots, dear. Each one them.

The emotions, the scenes - be it comedy, desire, passion or love - everything was penned so wonderfully. Loved them to the core. ❤️

Thank you so much Lara! You have no idea what it means to me, this coming from you! ❤️

In the last OS, I especially loved the scene where Sumo brings food for him in the office and he gets all teary hearing her.

No one pointed out to that one, you have an eye for detail!

And then he becomes deaf in love too, of course! 🤣

Of course man 😆


Love you for writing these awesome pieces.

Love you too!!

And pls, keep on writing - jaldi.

I I captain!

🤗🤗

Love yaa, Zoya!

@Bold
Lara 🤗
Thank you so so much!
Love you too!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Durga1

Miss Mr. n Mrs Shravan

Yup we all do!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Amaranthus

Hey read all the updates in one go... this was really amazing and well written... can't wait for updates ... this is some real good therapy

Thank you !!!

I'm glad you liked it!
Thanks so much!
😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
hey dear...itz awesome..
don't know how i missed it...today is 13th & update is of 4th..😭 but anyways better late than never.
itzz very very beautiful...loved all the moments of impact..Shravan's confession was beautiful..itz like a poetry...
truely loved it...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Akriti12

hey dear...itz awesome..

don't know how i missed it...today is 13th & update is of 4th..😭 but anyways better late than never.
itzz very very beautiful...loved all the moments of impact..Shravan's confession was beautiful..itz like a poetry...
truely loved it...😊

Thank you so much Aktriti!
Buddy me, il pm you the next time...
Glad you liked it...
😛
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

Thank you so much Aktriti!
Buddy me, il pm you the next time...
Glad you liked it...
😛

I've already added you as buddy dear...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Akriti12

I've already added you as buddy dear...😊

Oh then it must have been a mistake that you didn't receive a pm..
Sowii😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

Oh then it must have been a mistake that you didn't receive a pm..
Sowii😳

no dear..not ur mistake..i've added u after 5th october...so datz ok..'ll wait for next update...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'd read half of it long ago. But now I read it again.
Marvellous!
Loved how you weaved not so significant moments as impactful. That's how life is!
Awesome!

A bit long for lazy bumps like me so I felt a tad bit off track. Nonetheless, it was amazing!😳

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