Teri Orr -A ShraMan FF (next part coming soon) - Page 7

Originally posted by: nicky13

thanks g 😊 I will send you the PM dear

Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Enjoyed the update..
Superb dear..

thanks dear 😊

Omggg inne sare g's 🤣
You reminded me of my college. We used to call our seniors G . Suppose someone name is preeti singh
We used to call Preeti ji singh Ji 😆
Sigh!!!! Those days
Coming to the updates
I read all parts in a go
It was damn cuteee ❤️
Suman reminds me of kajol from k3g 😳
Loved the bromance ❤️
Super duper awesome chapters 👏
Cant wait to read about sumo, shravu and dhanno
So nicky ji continue real soon ji 😆

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Omggg inne sare g's 🤣
You reminded me of my college. We used to call our seniors G . Suppose someone name is preeti singh
We used to call Preeti ji singh Ji 😆
Sigh!!!! Those days
Coming to the updates
I read all parts in a go
It was damn cuteee ❤️
Suman reminds me of kajol from k3g 😳
Loved the bromance ❤️
Super duper awesome chapters 👏
Cant wait to read about sumo, shravu and dhanno
So nicky ji continue real soon ji 😆

😆 ji thanks g so much g ... Update is on the way g ... Will update it today g 😉

Originally posted by: aayra24

Thankyou hai ji..I'll be waiting ji..jyada wait na karana ji...oh god I'm in love with this 'ji'

will update it today g 😆

Chapter 4

Suman and Shravan reached at Suman's house. Shravan took his luggages and both entered inside the house. Ramnath and Suman's grandfather were in the living room and were talking...

Suman to Shravan's dad- uncle Ji yeh Dekhiye main aapke liye kinko le ke aayi hoon ... And woh Shravan ki Orr Ishara karti hai...

Ramnath Shravan ko dekhte hain and Shravan run towards his dad and both hugged each other.

Ramnath broke the hug and- hey beta kaise ho tum...?

Shravan-I m gud dad ... How r u?

Ramnath - gud then he introduced him with Suman's grandfather - bauji lijiye miliye mere bete se ... Shravan... Mumbai mein lawyer hai ... beta chalo inke paon chhoo ke ashirbad lo ye Suman ke dada Ji hain...

Shravan touched his feet.

Suman's dada Ji - Arre jeete raho barkhurdar... Or main sirf Suman ka hi nahi tumhara Bhi dada hoon ... Tum Bhi mujhe Dadu bula sakte ho Suman ki tarah.

Shravan- aww thanks Dadu ... theek hai main aapko Dadu hi bulaonga Suman ki tarah and he looked at her .. She was also looking at him... Both smiled.

Itne mein Shravan ki mom and Suman ki mom Bhi wahan aa jaati hain Shravan apni mom ko hug karta hai and then he touched Suman's mom's feet.

Suman ki mom- arre jeete raho beta... Bahut hi Tamanna thi tumse Milne ki... Tumhare baare mein Bahut suna hai bhai sahab or behan Ji se... Kaise ho beta tum..? Safar kaisa tha?

Shravan-Ji Aunty main theek hoon.. And safar bhi Achha tha... Aapko Bahut -2 Mubarak ho Suman ki Shadi ki...

Suman's mom- thank you beta... Waise raste mein Suman ne tumko jiyada bore nhi kiya hoga ... Woh Kya hai Na thoda jiyada bolti hai woh .. Kisi Orr ko mauka nhi deti firr agar Ek baar bolna shuru Kare tou...

Shravan again looked at Suman and smiled- arre nhi Aunty aisa Kuchh bhi nhi hai ...

Suman to her mom - Kya hai Mumma aap bhi ... Jab Shadi Ke baad chali jaongi Na tou miss karoge aap Mujhe and she made a fake gusse waala face ...

Suman's mom became senti and so is her Dadu but than her Dadu tried to change the topic...

Suman's Dadu - arre bahu baatein hi karte rahoge tum log ya Shravan ko kuchh khilaoge pilaoge Bhi ... Itni door se aaya hai thak giya hoga ... Then to Suman - Suman puttar ja usko uska room dikha de...

Suman - Ji Dadu ... Firr Shravan ko- chaliye Ji main aapko aapka room dikha doon...

Shravan's mom- hmm tum room mein chalo Shravan main Bhi abhi aati hoon ...

Shravan - Ji mom and then Shravan and Suman went from there.

But on the way to room Suman kuchh na kuchh bole ja rahi thi and Shravan usko bas dekh raha tha and smiling. Room mein pahunch ke...

Suman - Lao g aa giya aapka room... So just feel like home g... Kisi Bhi cheej ki jaroorat ho na tou bata dena ... Chaliye aap na fresh ho jao main aapke liye kuchh khaane ko leke aati hoon... Waise mujhe Bhi na Bahut bhookh lag rahi hai... Tou abhi aati hoon g main...

Shravan with a smile- Ji Suman g...

Suman was about to turn but usko kuchh yaad aata hai...

Suman - oh Teri ... Main tou bhool hi gayi g ... Bathroom mein towel tou hai hi nahi ... Rukiye main abhi nikal ke deti hoon g...

She went near the almirah and opened it but towel was on the top most rack and she was unable to reach up to that rack. But she was trying and jumping to reach. Shravan was watching her and she was talking to herself.

Suman - Haye rabb g ki hai thodi hight Orr de dete kuchh chala jaata aapka... Lao karlo gall...aise hi bolte hain sab log ke har Bande ko na apna kaam khud hi karna chahiye... Then she turned her face towards Shravan but she was talking- ab aap hi dekh lo g Kya khaak karon main apna kaam khud se... Aap meri hight Dekhiye or woh Dekhiye towels kahan pe rakhe hain... ab unko uthane ke liye mujhe kisi ki help tou Leni hi hogi... Hai ke nahi? Ya tou Kisi tall bande ko bolongi Mujhe help karne ko ya fir koi table ya chair ka sahara loongi... Khud se Kya ekele kar paongi main ... Hai Ke nhi logic.. Boliye aap??

When Suman said meri hight Dekhiye Shravan was looking at her she was looking so sweet and cute and He was lost in her innocent beauty but Suman was talking non-stop.

Suman - o g wahan khade ho ke Kya smile kar rahe ho aap... Kuchh help kijiye na... Itni lambi height Di hai rabb ne aapko qutabminar Ke jaise...

Shravan come back in his sense - aww Kya keh rahi thi tum?

Suman - main ? Lao kar lo gll saari Mahabharata suna Di Maine aur aap poochh rahe ho Ke Kans kiska mama lagta tha ... Had hai Waise ... O g main tou yeh keh rahi thi ke chai Tyar hai pee lijiye aake... Arre woh uper se Towel utarne ko Bol rahi thi utar dejiye...

Shravan - oh ok ... Abhi utar deta hoon tum Ek side hato...

Suman side pe ho jaati hai but still talking- aap mujhe Ek baat batao ... But sachi-2 Batana g... Kahin khoye hoye the... Koi girl friend hai Kya jo uske baare mein soch rahe the...

Shravan uski ki taraf hairani se dekhta hai he was about to say something but

Suman - Lao g kar lo gall ... And hit her head with her hand- ab bade shehron mein tou yeh aam c baat hoti hai... Aapki girl friend to pakka hogi... Dekhne mein Bhi aap good looking ho g... Achhi khaasi body hai aapki...or eyes and smile tou aapki poori killer hai g... Koi Bhi Ladki flat ho jaaye... Hai ke nahi g?? And she giggled

Shravan was so surprised after hearing all these things from her ...

Shravan - kion har good looking ladke ki girlfriend ho kahan pe likha hai yeh?

Suman - matlab aapki GF nahi hai ... Come on g aap kisko bana rahe ho Suman Shergill ko... Ho hi nahi sakta ke aapki GF na ho ... O g main bet lagane ko Tyar hoon iss baat pe... Bata dijiye Don't feel shy man ...

But then Shravan's mom came inside the room - arre Suman beta kaunsi baat pe bet laga rahi ho?

Suman thoda ghabra jaati hai- nahi Aunty Ji koi baat pe nahi...main Shravan ke liye kuchh Khaane peene ko leke aati hoon aap log baatein kijiye and she ran from the room.

Shravan and his mom was talking and Suman came their with so many things to eat and tea.

Suman - Lao g aap na kuchh kha lijiye Aur chai Bhi pee Lena g... And she put the tray on the table and about to go but Shravan's mom stopped her

Shravan's mom- arre Suman kahan ja rahi ho beta aao baitho na tum ...

Suman - nahi Aunty Ji aap log baatein kijiye main jaati hoon... Aap log itni der ke baad mil rahe ho ... Aap apne bete se baatein kijiye and inko achhe se khilana ... Mujhe pata hai jab Maa apne bachon se door hoti hain na tou unko apne bachon ke khane ki Bahut tension rehti hai... Mere ghar pe Bhi aisa hi hota hai... Meri Mumma aisa hi karti hain... Jab main Ek baar summer vacations mein mama g ke ghar Amritsar mein gayi thi na g tou ... But achanak usko kuchh yaad aata hai and - oh Teri mama g se yaad aaya ke mujhe Mumma ko Unka massage lagana tha... Oh Rabba kaise bhool gayi main... I m sorry Aunty g main ja rahi hoon ...

She left the room but Shravan and his mom was smiling ...

Shravan-oh God mom kitna bolti hai ye Ladki ... Non-stop Bina Kisi break Ke and Kuchh bhi bolti hai ... She is so weird hai na?

Shravan's mom - haan Lekin cute Bhi hai... Dil ki Bahut achhi hai woh...

Shravan - oh yeah... But Mom pehle kabhi Bhi aapne or dad ne Suman ke baare mein I mean uski family ke baare mein kabhi nahi bataya? Kabhi koi baat bhi nhi ki ...

His mom- haan kabhi mauka hi nahi mila... Woh tou achanak se Mr. Chauhan ne apne bete ke rishte Ke liye kisi Ladki ke baare batane ko tere dad se baat ki tou unko Balli bhai sahab yaad aa Gaye jo ke tere dad ke Bachpan ke dost hain... Tou bas firr humne Suman or Vishavjeet ki baat ki tou sab ko sab theek laga tou ban gayi baat and ho giya rishta...

Shravan - hmm really mom ... Itne kam time mein ... That's really very quick...

They talked about one hour then Hid dad came there...

Ramnath - hmm Kya baatein ho rahi hain Maa bete mein?

Shravan - hey dad ... Kuchh Bhi nahi... Bas aise hi idhar-udhar ki...mom Mujhe Suman ke rishte ke baare mein bata rahi thi...kaise huya sab kuchh ...

Ramnath- oh ok... You know Shravan Suman ko dekhke Yakeen ho jaata hai ke aaj ke bache Bhi apne patents ki baat maante hain... Pata hai tumko Suman ne sirf photo dekh ke hi haan kar Di thi ... Woh Bhi iss liye ke Maine yeh rishta karwaya tha

Shravan was surprised ke Suman ne sirf photo dekh ke hi haan keh Di thi he was in his mind- Bahut hi ajeeb Ladki hai yaar... Matlab sirf photo dekh ke aap kisi ke baare mein kaise jaan sakte ho... Weird Sach mein...

Ramnath-arre Shravan Kya soch rahe ho tum... Achha tum thodi der rest kar Lao hum log firr baat karte hain... Than to His mom - chalo Nirmala usko thoda rest karne do ... He must be tired...

Nirmala- ok beta have some rest ... Firr baat karte hain ...

Shravan - Ji mom theek hai...

His mom dad went and He was standing near the window and he was still thinking about Suman and thodi der baad she came there ...and Shravan ko again Kahin Orr lost dekhti hai... She come close to him and pat his shoulder... He came back in his sense

Suman - arre aap firr kho Gaye kahin... Firr aap kehte ho ke aapki GF nahi hai... Maan kion nahi lete ho g aap!!

Shravan - tum... Aisi koi baat nahi hai meri koi GF nahi hai Suman ...achha tum mujhe Ek baat batao... Tum uss ladke ki photo dekh ke hi shadi ke liye maan gayi thi Kya?

Suman - haanji ... Perr kion aap kion poochh rahe ho...

Shravan - matlab tumne usko bina miley hi shadi ke liye haan keh Di ...

Suman - haanji perr kion??

Shravan - Suman tum aisa kaise kar sakti ho yaar ... Matlab tum usko Ek baar mili Bhi nahi and tumne apni poori zindgi uske sath bitane ka Mann bana liya...

Suman - Lekin aapke dad ne yeh rishta karwaya hai g woh jaante hain ke woh ladka kaisa hai...

Shravan - arre yaar kaunsi century mein Ji rahi ho tum... Shadi tumne karni hai zindgi tumne bitani hai mere dad ko ya tumhari family ko nahi uss ladke Ke sath ... Suman ...come on yaar... Aise kaise Bina Kisi Ke baare kuchh v Na jaane kaise come on yaar ... I m so surprised no actually I m so shocked... Ke aaj Ke time pe bhi aisa kuchh hota hai ...

Suman - nahi Shravan woh humse bade hain ... Duniya dekhi hai g unho ne...

Shravan was bit irritated now- oh come on Suman ... Maanta hoon woh bade hain Lekin firr Bhi zindgi tou Tumhari hai... Tumse jiyada hairani tou mujhe uss ladke pe hoti hai ... Matlab London mein rehte huye Bhi woh yeh sab kar raha hai... ...

Suman was surprised ke Shravan kaisi baatein kar raha tha...

Shravan again - achha tou mujhe tum Ek baat batao ke kall ko agar shadi ke baad tumko pata chale ke woh ladka sahi nahi hai... Usko koi bimari hai ya uska kahin or chakar chal raha hai ya woh drugs leta hai... Then what will you do?

Suman ab yeh baat sun ke darr jaati hai- Shravan aap na Plz Rehne dijiye... Aap dara rahe ho mujhe ... Aisa Kuchh bhi nhi hoga ...

Uske pehle Shravan kuchh bolta Suman ki mom Suman ko awaz lagati hain... Suman Shravan ko ajeeb tareeke se dekhte huye wahan se chali jaati hai...

Shravan Suman ke jaane ke baad- oh god yeh Maine Kya kiya ... Thode dino mein uski shadi hai or main usse yeh sab baatein kar raha tha... Lekin sahi hi tou kaha Maine usko... Ya Shravan tumne sahi kaha hai but galat time pe... Mujhe usko sorry kehna chahiye... Bol doonga ke Maine tou sirf apne dil ki baat kahi thi... Haan yahi theek rahega... Main usko sorry Bol doonga...


Ok friends ... Enjoy it I have tried my best ... Plz give your feed backs dears :)

Precap-Shravan Suman ko sorry bolta hai ...:) and a Surprise ;)

I like how you update so fatafat!

Originally posted by: orion23

I like how you update so fatafat!

This one was damn cute!

Yeh ladki pagal hai..

Muh pe shravan ki itti tareef! Pyaar ho jayega bande ko!

Photo dekh ke shadi! Kamal hai..

And shravan, itna concern! Ya pyaar ho chuka hai already😆

Surprise!

Aaisa na karo...

Jaldi update!

Tu kar hi degi..

Tera pata hai😃

thank you for liking it... Aaj kall thoda free hoon tou Iss liye update fattack se likhti hoon ... Next update hopefully tomorrow...

Nicky g apki ye jhalli sumo hume bahut pasand hai g.
Shravu is now full on lattoo on her 😆
Kare bhi kya bechara bandi muh pe tareef pe tareef kiye ja rhi hai
I love her innocence 😳
Amazing update hai g 👏
Pm n itti jaldi update ke liye thank u hai ji 😳