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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: smart1010

Its sucha cute story. Your Shravan/Sumo are way too cute.

Please update soonish!!!!

With Love.

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _Eternity_

Fabulous update dear..
Dil khush ho gya padh k..
Shra toh gya..he is falling in love with her..
Sumo itni taraaf shra ki ..kya baat hai..
Yr photo dekh k aur London ka ladka aise hi shaadi k liye gya I agree with shra...
Continue soon..
Thnx for pm dear..

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Teri orre

Chapter 5

Suman was in her room and she was still thinking about what Shravan said to her matlab usne jo Bhi Uske hone waale pati ke liye bola tha... She was so scared.

Suman apne aap se- Haye O Rabba agar Shravan ki baat Sach ho gayi.. Or woh London waala Sach mein waisa hi nikla tou .. Nahi -2 Sumoaisa kuchh nahi hoga... Ab uncle ji usko achhe se tou jaante hain woh aisa waisa nahi ho sakta g... Woh theek hi hoga... Lekin sumo uncle ji thodi 24 ghante uske Saath rehte hain...

She was in her thoughts ... Suddenly someone knocks the door and ya ofcourse our Shravan was on the door. Suman usko Bahut hi hairani se dekhti hai...

Suman - Aap!!! Yahan? Kuchh chahiye tha g??

He was still at the door- aww nahi Suman kuchh nahi chahiye but Kya mein andar aa sakta hoon? Kuchh baat karni thi tumse ...

Suman - haanji aa jao g ...Waise abhi or Kya baat karni hai aapko mujhse...

Shravan-woh sorry Suman ... Thodi der pehle jo Bhi Maine tumko kaha... Mujhe realise huya ke woh sab mujhe tumse nahi kehna chahiye tha... I mean thode hi dino mein Tumhari Shadi hai or Maine tumko woh saari baatein boli... Really very-2 sorry...

Suman - it's ok hai g ... Ab tou keh hi diya g jo v kehna tha aapko...

Shravan - Lekin abh sorry Bhi tou Bol raha hoon na...

Suman - haan tou jayiye Maine Bhi aapko maaf kiya g... Pata aapko main kitna darr gayi thi or kaise-2 khyal aa rahe the mere Dimag mein...

Shravan was feeling guilty- hey I m sorry yaar... Bas Maine tou sirf apni opinion Di thi nothing else. Maine baad mein socha ke dad tou usko jaante hi hai na... Tou achha hi hoga woh...

Suman - haan uncle g jaante tou hain Lekin woh Bhi thodi na 24 ghante sath hote honge...

Shravan - hey Suman tum aisa Mat socho woh aisa bilkul Bhi nahi hoga... Agar dad ne kaha hai tou Vishawjit achha hi hoga ... Plz tum dad pe bharosa rakho...

Suman - Wah g Wah pehle tou insaan ko darate ho or firr aake bharosa rakhne ko bolte ho... Ajeeb ho g aap tou ekdum se...

Shravan-arre yaar tou Sorry Bhi bola na ... Or ab yeh Bhi tou keh raha hoon ke dad jaante hi honge and woh ladka achha hi hoga...

Suman - matlab yeh tou woh baat ho gayi g ke pehle insaan ko maar do firr baad mein usko sorry Bol do... Hain g yeh Bhi koi baat hoti hai ...

Shravan-oh Goddd ab maafi maang raha hoon na... Mujhe maaf kar de meri Maaa... Galti ho gayi mujhse ... Jo Maine tumse panga liya...

Suman - haan tou soch ke panga Lena chahiye tha na g ... Ab aap maafi maang rahe ho... Matlab yeh tou woh baat ho gayi ke bande ko jaan se maar ke baad mein usko Bol do v bhai maaf karde ... Maine Galti se tujhe maar diya...

Shravan - hey Bhagwan Sumo tum baat ko kahan leke ja rahi ho... Main seedhe-2 tumse maafi maang raha hoon na...

Suman - Wah g Wah ab maafi maang rahe ho ... Agar main aapki baaton mein aake iss shadi se bhaag jaati tou ... Tou uss ladke se shadi kaun karta ...Aap????

Shravan - oh hello main bhala uss ladke se shadi kion karonga... For your kind information main waisa nahi hoon ok...Ke ladke se shadi Karoon ...

Suman - Kya pata g... Bade-2 shehron mein tou waisa Bhi hota hi hai... Aap Bhi bade Shehar se ho g or woh ladka tou usse Bhi bade and advance Shehar se hai g... Kya pata woh Bhi waisa hi ho ... You know ladkon mein interest ... Kya pata chalta hai g ... Woh aapko pasand kar le... Waise Bhi handsome and Good Looking tou aap ho hi g...

Now this time Shravan was super irritated - ENOUGH... How disgusting you r Sumo... I can't believe ke tum aisi baat kar sakti ho... Chheee...eeewwwuu ... Yakk...

Suman - ab aise-2 muh banane se Kya hoga... Jo kehna tha woh tou keh hi diya g aapne...

Shravan - bas karo yaar ... Mujhe na ab us ladke pe Taras aa raha hai... Ke uski shadi tumse ho rahi hai... Fas raha hai woh tumse shadi karke... Bechara...

Suman - oh hello... Aap uski itni Fikar kar rahe ho g... Kya lagta hai woh aapka???

Shravan - kuchh nahi lagta woh mera... But Sumo Plz main tumhare aage haath jodta hoon Plz mujhe maaf kar do... Jisne bhi tumhara naam Suman se sumo rakha hai Na sahi rakha hai ... Thank God Tum sirf muh se baat karti ho Kisi Ke haath pair nahi todti Verna socho Kya hota logon ka jo tumse panga lete ... Main tou aage se aisa soch bhi nhi sakta ... Ja raha hoon main... Byeee and he Ran away from her room.

Suman - haan-2 tou jao na g Maine tou aapko invitation nahi bheja tha na aane ke liye... Bade aaye Suman Shergill se Panga lene ... Hmm bhaag Gaye Na ...

Thodi der ke baad sab log khana khaane ke liye hall mein aa jaate hain... Suman and Shravan Bhi aate hain ... Both were giving each other a tough look... But itne mein Suman ki cousin Roop ( her Tauji's daughter and she is one and half Year elder to Suman and they both love each other very much but Roop is still unmarried and thats why Suman's Taayi ji is not very happy with Suman wedding)and uski family Bhi waha aa jaati hai... Suman saw her cousin and bhaag ke jaati hai and she hugged her so tightly.

Suman thoda Gusse se- Kya Roop Di aap sabse Late aaye ho...kitna miss kiya Maine aapko...

Roop- arre nahi meri Lado aisa mat Bol ... Tu jaanti hai na main tou khud bhaag ke aa jaana chahti thi but as you know papa g ka business ... Or Maa ko tou achhe se jaanti hai... Aaj kall tou Bahut naraz chal rahi hain...

Suman ekdum se hit her head- oye Rabb g ... Achha yaad dila diya Di aapne... Abhi milke aati hoon varna or Bhi naraz ho jayeingi... She goes to her Tauji and Taayi g

Suman - Sat Shri Akal Tauji and Taayi g

Tauji khush ho ke- oh mera bacha ... Jeete raho beta... Kaisi hai meri cartoon network...

Shravan yeh sab sun ke khush ho jaata hai and he laughed and in his mind - hmm Cartoon Network sahi kaha sab se badi cartoon hai Suman... Thodi pagal Socha tha Maine but yeh tou Bahut jiyada pagal hai ...

Suman yeh dekh Leti hai- Kya Tauji aap Bhi na... Main cartoon nhi hoon ... Then to her Taayi g...

Suman - aap kaise ho and she tried to hug her but she didn't give any response back... Suman ko thoda sa bura lagta hai Lekin firr woh Roop se baatein karne lagti hai...

Suman - hey Di aap ko na mujhe kuchh dikhana hai ... Aap chalo mere room mein... Mumma aap humara khana room mein bhej dena... Wohin kha lenge hum...

Raaste mein Roop Suman se Shravan ke baare mein poochhti hai...

Roop - Sumo ye ladka kaun hai ... Pehle tou kabhi Bhi kisi function mein nahi dekha humare ghar...

Suman - haan Di ye woh Papa g ke dost Ramnath uncle hai na unka beta hai...Shravan

Roop - oh jinhone tumhara rishta karvaya hai ...hmm ... Kafi Smart and cute lag raha hai...

Suman - Haan wohi but Di aap Shravan Ke baare mein mat socho ... Avin hi hai woh ajeeb sa...

They reached in her room... But Roop was still talking about Shravan...

Roop - achha matlab ... Ajeeb kion hai woh...???
Suman - arre Di pata hai Kuchh bhi bolta hai chahe Kisi kaisa bhi lage and firr baad mein aake sorry bolega ... Avin Kuchh bhi ...
Suman brings out her wedding Lehnga and show her Di...arre Di aap usko chhodo and aap yeh dekho... Kaisa hai batao pehle...

Roop - oh wow Suman ... It's really very beautiful and tum isko pehan ke ekdum princess lagogi... Sach mein...

Aise hi Suman apni cousin ko apni shadi ki shopping dikha rahi thi and dono Bahut khush lag rahi thi...

Aise hi din beet jaate hain and Suman ki Shadi ka din Bhi aa jaata hai... Sab log khush Bhi the and woh sab kaam Bhi kar rahe the...

On the wedding day... Shravan was in his room and he was getting ready but usko thoda ajeeb-2 feel ho raha tha... Matlab woh iss shadi ko leke itna Khush nahi tha... Woh Naha dhoke apni coffee lene ke liye woh kitchen mein jaata hai Kionki aaj abhi takk usko kisi ne uski coffee poochhi Bhi nahi thi... When he came to the hall... Sab log wahan ikathe huye pade the and sab log kuchh pareshan Bhi lag rahe the... Jaise kuchh galat ho giya ho...

He asked his Mom- mom Kya huya sab log itne pareshan kion hain??

His mom- beta woh Kya hai na ke Suman pata nahi kahan chali gayi... Sab log Bahut pareshan hain iss liye...

Shravan-Kya !!!... Aise kaise yahin kahin hogi woh ... Matlab pareshan na ho sab...

His mom- nahi beta woh ik letter Chhod ke gayi hai ke woh yeh Shadi nahi karna chahti...

Shravan shocked - Kya ... Oh no... Woh aisa kaise kar sakti hai... Ab Kya hoga... Barat tou kisi time pe Aati hi hogi... Unko Kya boleinge mom...

His mom - haan Gaye hain tumhare dad ladke Waalon se baat karne... Dekho Kya kehte hain woh log...


Hey friends so I hope you all will like this... And ya kaisa laga surprise... Aage-2 dekhiye Orr Bhi surprises baaki hain... :)


Precap- Shravan returned back to Mumbai .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Yeh Kya kar diya G suman ne?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: bhaktiii

Yeh Kya kar diya G suman ne?

Bhag gyi 😆 thanks to Shravan 😉
Edited by nicky13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Hehe.. Ab Apne lambu per iljam aayega Kya?
;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhaktiii

Hehe.. Ab Apne lambu per iljam aayega Kya?
;)

Hahahaha... Let's wait and watch 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Sumo bhaag gyi..big thanks to shravan malhotra.. 😆
Interesting update dear..
Continue soon..
Thnx for pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Like ??? I just love it ❤️
Bechare shrvn ko kitni baar sorry bolna pada 😆or sumo🤣🤣
Or sumo bhi na shrvn or vishvjit ki Jodi bana Rhi thi🤣
And than cartoon network 🤣🤣🤣
Thank you sooo much for this update study ki tension phurr ho Gai 😃
And than sumo ka bhagna😆
Now waiting for next part 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Amazing update...really liked shraman fighting scene. ..thanks for the pm

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