Teri Orr -A ShraMan FF (next part coming soon) - Page 13

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Your welcome😳

One thing sometime in excitement I do stupid thing so plz ignore them😊

no problem Harshi ... I m also very stupid sometimes 😉

Nicky ji kya likhte ho ji aap 👏
N this girl is so crazy , she eloped from her own wedding
And came to mumbai, alone!!!!!
Puri jhalli hai !!! 😆
Poor shravu is paying for his big mouth 😆
Aur gyan de ladki ko 🤣
I missed commenting on the 5th chap but it was amazing!!!
Loved it!!
Update soon wanna see the high voltage drama 😆
Thanks for the pm 😛

Originally posted by: sapphire3

Nicky ji kya likhte ho ji aap 👏
N this girl is so crazy , she eloped from her own wedding
And came to mumbai, alone!!!!!
Puri jhalli hai !!! 😆
Poor shravu is paying for his big mouth 😆
Aur gyan de ladki ko 🤣
I missed commenting on the 5th chap but it was amazing!!!
Loved it!!
Update soon wanna see the high voltage drama 😆
Thanks for the pm 😛

thank you so much sweetie... 😊

Hi guys I m sorry I m not able to update it today... But will do tomorrow... :)

Originally posted by: nicky13

Hi guys I m sorry I m not able to update it today... But will do tomorrow... :)

Teri orr

Chapter 7

Suman was settling down her stuff ... She brought her luggages from out side and Shravan was just watching her... And he was lost in her... Yahan takk ke Suman usko kuchh poochh rahi thi yeh Bhi sunai nahi de raha tha usko...

Suman - chaliye main apna Samaan andar le aayi hoon g ... Kahiye kaun sa room hai mera ??

But he was still lost in her... Suman was asking again but without looking at him coz she was still busy with her stuff... Shravan again no reply.

Suman come to him- O g aapko kuchh pochh rahi hoon main...

Shravan this time come back in his sense...

Shravan - aww kuchh kaha tumne...??

Suman surprised- Wah g Wah kab se Bole ja rahi hoon main... Aap ho pata nahi kahan khoye huye ho g...

Shravan - nahi kahin Bhi nahi ... Kya poochh rahi thi tum ???

Suman - g main apne room ke baare mein pochh rahi thi... Kaun sa room hai ...

Shravan - room tumhara !!! Kion??

Suman surprised- oye hello bhool Gaye Kya g aap ... Main aaj se yahin Rehne waali hoon:)

Shravan-oh haan yaad aaya...

He was about to tell her about her room but he got call from Pushkar ... He picked the call.

Shravan-haan Pushkar ... Bolo ...

Pushkar - kahan ho tum ... Vapis aa gaye ya nahi ?

Shravan abhi batane hi waala hota hai ke Suman firr se usse apne room ke baare mein poochti hai...

Suman - Haanji batayiye na kaunsa room hai mera ...

Pushkar asked Him- hey Shravan ye Ladki kaun hai ...

Shravan Suman ko chup Rehne ka Ishara karta hai... But She was not understanding ke Woh Kya kehna chata hai... Woh firr se Usse poochti hai...

Suman - Kya ishare se kar rahe ho mujhe nahi samjh mein aa raha ... Bol ke batao g ...

Shravan Uske pass jaata hai and usko bolne se chup karvaane ke liye uske muh pe hath rakh deta hai and udhar Pushkar Bhi usko pooche ja raha tha...

Pushkar - Bol na Kaun hai or tu kahan hai... ??

Shravan - aww haan main Mumbai vapis aa giya hoon ... Orr woh tou TV chal raha tha... Tu suna kaisa hai tu???

Pushkar was happy ke Shravan is back- oh really tu vapis aa giya... Wow tujhe pata Maine tujhe kitna miss kiya... Achha shadi kaisi rahi ... Theek se ho gayi???

Shravan-aww haan woh theek se ho gayi ...

On the other hand Suman was trying to free herself from his grip but Shravan ne usko tightly pakda huya tha...

Pushkar - chalo achha hai ... Lekin tu vapis kab aaya.. Orr tune mujhe phone kion nahi kiya main lene aa jaata tujhe ... Kahin Chandigarh mein koi Ladki tou nahi pasand aa gayi tumko ... Or apne purana dost bhool giya tu ... Dekh agar aisa kuchh hai tou abhi bata de... Reh lega Tera dost tere bina...

Shravan was irritated- oh sentimental insaan meri Bhi baat sunega ya aise hi apne ghode bhagata rahega... Orr tu na abhi phone rakh baad mein baat karta hoon main tujhse ... Bye

And he cut the phone...And then to Suman ...

Shravan - Tum ko samjh mein nahi aata Kya main tumhe chup rehne ko Bol raha tha... But Tum kabhi kuchh nhi samjhogi... Iss liye Maine aisa kiya... Tumko chup karvaane ka yehi Ek raasta bacha tha mere paas ... Tumhari awaz sun Ke Pushkar ko doubt ho jaata ... Dekho abhi Maine usko Tumhare baare mein kuchh nhi bola ... So Tum agar woh kabhi ghar aata hai tou Uske saamne nhi aaogi... Verna mujh se Bura koi nhi hoga ... Samjhi Tum ..

And apni baat poori karne ke baad woh uske muh se hath hata deta hai...

Suman ko kuchh Bhi samjh mein nahi aa raha tha ke Shravan Kya keh raha tha ...

Suman - Lekin ...

Isse pehle woh kuchh bole Shravan usko warning deta hai ...

Shravan dekho tumhare pass na koi option nahi hai ... Rehna hai tou meri baat maano nahi tou aap ja sakte ho g ... Samjhi ya nahi samjhi ... Waise samjhne mein hi Tumhari behtari hai... So jao woh right hand mein jo room hai usmein nahi Magar uske right waale room mein apna stuff rakh Lena ... And he left from there ...

But Suman ko ab Bhi kuchh Bhi samjh nahi aa raha tha ke yeh Shravan ka behaviour aisa kion tha... But he was right she doesn't have any other option so usko Shravan ki baat maanni hi hogi... And she put her stuff in that room jo Shravan ne bataya tha...

Suman was settling down her stuff in the room when she heard door bell ... She just opened her room's door but very slightly so she can see outside that who is there ... And she saw that two boys and a girl came inside And they all were hugged Shravan and were looking very happy and little bit angry with him...

On the other hand in the living room Shravan ke sabhi dost usko Milne aaye the... ( I want to tell one more thing and that is about Aditya.. He is also Shravan's friend and is the owner of a restaurant...and he is not negative here )Or woh Shravan ko hug kar rahe the But Uske Dimag mein kuchh Orr hi chal raha tha... Woh yahi soch raha tha ke kahin Suman ke baare mein inn sab ko pata na chal jaaye ... Kahin Suman apne room se bahar na aa jaaye ... And he was praying to god for this ...

Shravan in his mind - hey rabb g Plz bacha Lena aaj tou baad mein main dekh loonga ...

Pushkar was watching and he was surprised ke Shravan Kya kar raha tha... And he asked him

Pushkar - Shravan tu Uper ki taraf kion dekh raha hai yaar ... Ceiling pe kuchh problem hai Kya ? And khud Bhi woh Uper ko dekhne lagta hai...

Shravan usko dekh ke- haan nahi woh kuchh Bhi nahi ... Main tou woh kuchh soch raha tha...

Pushkar - soch rahe the aise face Uper karke ...!!!! Waise Kya soch rahe the tum ???

Shravan - woh main soch raha tha ... Main Kya soch raha tha ...??

Pushkar surprisingly - ab mujhe Kya pata Kya soch rahe the tum ... Wohi tou main poochh raha hoon ke tu Kya soch raha hai...???

Shravan - haan Kya soch raha tha main woh tujhe thodi na pata hoga ... Kionki lagi tou meri padi hai ... Tujhe thodi na pata hoga ... Kitne mushkil se Maine ...

Pushkar tou ab Orr Bhi surprised tha ke Shravan Kya Bole ja raha hai... ( poor Pushkar )

Pushkar - Kya lagi padi hai yaar Kya Bol raha hai tu??

Suddenly Shravan got an idea ...

Shravan shows him his pinky finger-yeh lagi hui hai Pushkar tou tujhe kaise pata hoga ... Main abhi jaake aata hoon

Shravan Suman ke room ki Orr chala jaata hai... But Pushkar calls him ...

Pushkar - oye tu uss room ki Orr kion ja raha hai Tera room tou udhar hai na...

Shravan - arre woh mere room ke toilet mein kuchh problem hai iss liye guest room ka use karne ja raha hoon... Main aata hoon jaake ...

Suman was watching all this and woh Shravan ko uske room ki taraf aate dekhti hai tou woh door close kar Leti hai... Shravan room mein enter karta hai... And he closed the door ...Suman apne aap ko busy show karne ka drama karti hai...

Shravan - dekho Suman main tumko ye kehne aaya hoon ke tum abhi bahar nahi aana mere dost hain bahar samjhi... Orr jab takk main tumko na bolon tab takk yahin rukna... Ok

Suman - g theek hai g ... Nahi aati ..aap kahein Orr main na maano aisa kaise ho sakta hai g... Aapke kehne pe tou main aapni shadi se bhag aayi hoon ...

Shravan child ke-dekho Maine tumko aisa kuchh nahi kaha tha samjhi tum ... So iss liye na yeh baar-2 mujhe blame karna band karo tum ...

Suman - Haanji bilkul sahi kaha aapne nahi kaha ... Directly na sahi indirectly tou aapne kaha hai na g...

Ab Shravan ko gussa aa raha tha... Orr woh gusse se Suman ki taraf jaata hai... And hold her from her arm...but itne mein door knock hota hai ... Shravan once again warned Suman ...

Shravan - dekho jo maine kaha na waisa hi karna... Baahar nahi aana tum ok... I will see you later...

And he left the room...

Outside the room Pushkar was waiting for Him ...

Pushkar - oye tune door kion close kiya huya tha... Mujhe Bhi jaana hai mujhe Bhi badi Zor se lagi hai... Hatto Ek side jaane de mujhe...

Shravan- aww... NAHIII ... tu nahi ja sakta...

Pushkar again hairani se - kion nahi ... Arre yaar ho kiya giya tujhe... Kya bole ja raha hai tu ...

Shravan thoda sambhal ke- nahi mera matlab tu mere room mein jao ...

Pushkar - Lekin tune hi tou kaha tha ke toilet kharab hai tere room ka...

Shravan - haan Lekin iss room ka tou Orr Bhi kharab hai... Iss liye tu mere room mein jao...

And he pushed him towards his room...

Pushkar was shocked - mujhe lagta hai Shravan ke tere ghar ke toilets nahi Tera Dimag kharab ho giya hai... Jab se Tu mila hai na ajeeb hi baatein kar raha hai ...

Shravan usko washroom mein jaane ka Ishara karta hai...

Shravan - tu ja na yaar kion paka raha hai...

And then to Preeti and Aditya - hey guys chalo na aaj hum log bahar khaana khaane chalte hain... Bahut time se hum log Gaye nahi kahin... Adi tere restaurant mein chalte hain I was missing the food yaar .. Kya bolte ho ...

Dono ek saath -- woohoo great idea Shravan ...

Shravan-chalo Pushkar ko aane do firr chalte hain hum log...

Pushkar room se bahar aata hai... And sab log ghar se niklte hain... But firr suddenly Shravan ko lagta hai ke usko Suman ko bolke aana chahiye ke woh apne friends ke sath ja raha hai...

Shravan - hey guys main apna wallet bhool aaya hoon tum log gaadi mein baithu main leke aata hoon and he went inside the house...

In the house he again entered Suman's room...

Shravan - Suman suno main apne friends ke sath ja raha hoon tum kuchh bana ke khaa Lena ... But sorry I don't know kitchen mein kuchh hai ya nahi ... Tum dekh Lena ... Theek hai...

Suman - Kya aap mujhe akele Chhod ke ja rahe ho g ... ??

Shravan-tou!!! Tum Kya chahti ho main tumko apne sath leke jaon... !!!

Suman - bas aap na do minute rukiye main ready ho ke aati hoon...

Shravan thoda gusse se-Shut up Suman ... Orr haan main door outside se lock karke ja raha hoon ... Tum usko andar se Bhi close kar Lena ... Samjhi ...

He was about to turn- Orr haan kisi ko door open nahi karna...

Suman - ji

Shravan - Orr koi problem ho tou landline se mujhe call kar Lena ... Mera number hai tumhare paas... Nahi hai tou woh uss phone book mein likha hai...

Suman - ji...

Shravan - Orr suno ...

Suman thoda chid jaati hai- oho Shravan aap jao bachi nahi hoon main samjhe aap... Orr agar aap abhi bahar nahi Gaye na g tou aapke doston ne ghar ke andar aa jaana... Orr unn logon ko mere baare mein pata lag jaana .. Orr agar aap yeh nahi chahte hain na g ... Tou aap ja sakte ho ...Main nahi darti hoon kisi se Bhi ...Punjaban hoon main... Orr I hope aap yeh samjh Gaye honge ...

Shravan Bhi thoda attitude se- haan-2 ja raha hoon ... Lekin tum koi putha sidha kaam nahi karogi ... Samjhi... Byeee


Suman - ok g maharaj g byeee ...

Shravan chala jaata hai apne friends ke sath... Suman ab ghar pe akele.. Tou Kya hoga next update mein dekhte rahiye...

Precap-?????

Awesome update dear..
Fully enjoyed..
Continue soon..
Thnx for pm dear

Pushku n shravu my adorbs ❤️
These two are the cutest ones in this story
And sumo to hain hi apni badi kamal ji 😆
Sumo alone in his flat 😲 ...ye ladki jarur koi siyapa karegi 😆
Fantastic update 👏
Enjoyed it thoroughly 😃
Thanks for the pm sweety 😛

😆😆 shrvn bar bar bacha nhi to pushkar se chupane 😆

superb update
absolutely brilliant
loved it
continue soon
superb