Teri Orr -A ShraMan FF (next part coming soon) - Page 12

Originally posted by: MistiofMistz

Concept is beautifully written. It's very fresh and different. Wow! Sumo and Shravan first convo on the phone great. Can't wait to read more? Simply awesome. Shravan can't stop thinking about Sumo. Can't wait for their first meeting. Nailed it perfectly with characteristic of Sumo and Shravan. It's hard to believe that Sumo ran away from her wedding and now staying with Shravan in Mumbai. Let see how they come out of this mess.

Originally posted by: nicky13

hi thanks dear ... Hey you also watch Ishqbaaz... Me too and I m also a fan of ShiVika... 😊

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Great sumo and shrvn stay together ab karani or bhi interesting ho jayegi but I pata nhi kyu lag rha h sumo shrvn ki vajah se nhi apni Taiji ki vajah se bhagi h (I know jada socha Mene) but majja aaya update padne m m to ye soch rhi hu jb pushkar or sumomo sath m bolna shuru karenge tb bechare shrvn ka kya hoga😆( I know phir kuch jada soch rhi hu)😆😆

But it's great👍🏼

Originally posted by: bhaktiii

The journey begins...

Originally posted by: MistiofMistz

Yup, I love ShiVika & ShraMan

Originally posted by: nicky13

arre Harshi socho -2 dear Sochne Ke paise thodi lagte hain ... 😆 anyways thanks for your reply Sweety 😳

Originally posted by: arshuaar

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">sorry for late reply...
wonderful updates...
thanx for pm 😊

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Good...