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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 8

Shravan and his friends reached at the restaurant Aditya had some important work so he took the leave for 15 minutes and Pushkar Preeti and Shravan were talking... But Shravan was lost... He was thinking about Suman... Pushkar noticed that

Pushkar- Shravan...

Shravan was still Losted... He didn't reply back ...

Pushkar again but bit louder- SHRAVAN... And he touched his hand ...

Shravan came back in his sense..

Shravan- aww Haan ... Kuchh kaha tumne Pushkar... Sorry I didn't listen to you... Come again please...

Pushkar- Shravan tu Na jab se Chandigarh se vapis aaya hai Na tab kuchh ajeeb hi behave kar raha hai ... Tu theek hai buddy... Teri tabiyat theek hai ... Kuchh lafda tou nhi kiya tune wahan Shadi mein ?????

Shravan - arre kuchh nhi ... Kuchh bhi tou nhi huya tha wahan... Shadi hui and mom dad se mila unke saath time spend kiya ... and then I came back ... Orr Kya Hona tha ... Kuchh bhi tou nhi ...

Pushkar- Haan tou theek hai Na agar kuchh nhi huya tou Ek baar Bol de Ke kuchh nhi huya itni baari bolne ki Kya jaroorat hai ...

Preeti- come on Pushkar Kion Shravan ki investigation karne mein lage ho ... Arre woh apne parents ko miss kar raha hoga ... An Ek poora week unke Ke sath spend kiya hai usne ... Tou definitely woh sad hoga ... Hai Na Shravan??

Shravan- Haan Preeti yehi baat hai ... Tu kitne achhe se samjhti hai Mujhe ... Tu sach mein meri Sachi waali friend hai ... Nhi tou kuchh log tou bas naam Ke hi friend ban Ke ghoomte hai and he looked at Pushkar... And then he took Preeti's hand in his hand and told her- thank you so much Preeti... Tum aise hi rehna kabhi bhi change mat Hona ...

Pushkar made a sad face- Haan-2 main tou bas Avin hoon ... Main thodi Na tera friend hoon ... Ja Mujhe nhi tere se baat karni ... And he turned his face to other side ...

Shravan and Preeti laughed at his kiddish act... In the meantime Aditya came back...

Aditya- Sorry guys I had some urgent work and needed to finish today ... Then he saw Pushkar jo Ke still rootha huya tha and Shravan and Preeti was teasing him and they were laughing too

Aditya- did I miss something??? Hey Pushkar what happened buddy... R u ok ?

Pushkar sentiment ho Ke - Rehne de Aditya Mujhe buddy mat bula main Kisi ka dost nhi ho sakta agar hoon bhi tou sirf naam ka hi hoon ...

Aditya laughed too - oho lagta hai koi Bahut naraj hai ??? Chal tera mood abhi theek karte hain ... And he and Shravan caught him from his arms and legs and they took him near the swimming pool and they were about to throw him in the pool...

Pushkar- arre yaar main tou mazak kar raha tha ... Please-2 pool mein mat fekna... Please guys ... Than to Preeti-please yaar Preeti bolo inko aisa Na karein ...

But Preeti was also with ShrAdi...

Shravan- Achha tou ab Bol Ke aage se aisa nhi karoge ...

Aditya - Haan-2 bilkul ab Bol Ke aage se humko sentimental dialogues Bol Ke bore nhi karoge ...

Pushkar hold his ears- arre yaar promised I won't... Please ab tou chhodo Mujhe ...

Shravan and Aditya leave him and laughed...

Pushkar- dekh li Tum dono ki dosti and you Preeti Mujhe laga tha Ke Tum mera sath dogi but Tum bhi ...

Aditya- oye abhi tune promise kiya tha Ke koi sentimental dialogue nhi ... Soch lo abhi bhi hum pool Ke paas hi hain ...

Pushkar scared- arre yaar mazak kar raha tha ... Lo Kya ab Banda mazak bhi nhi kar sakta ... Tum log tou serious ho Gaye ... Than again just diverted the topic- Arre Aditya kaisa restaurant hai yaar tera abhi takk khaane ko nhi aaya kuchh ...

Itne mein waiter told them Ke unka food ready hai ... Woh sab apne table pe aate hain ...

They were enjoying their food ... But there was a call on Shravan's phone and it shows home ...

Pushkar noticed it and he asked Shravan- arre Tumhare ghar se call aa rahi hai ... Koi hai Kya wahan?

Shravan- aww nahi woh mom ki call hogi ... Main dekhta hoon Tum log khao main unse baat Karke aata hoon... Please... And he left ...

Shravan- hello...Haan Sumo ... Sab theek hai Na ... Phone Kion kiya? Koi problem tou nhi hai Na ... Door locked hai Na ... Tum ghar se bahar tou nhi aayi Na ... ????

Suman- oho Kya huya g inne saare questions... Thodi c Saans le lo ... Bina break Ke hi bole ja rahe ho ... And inne saare questions Ek saath poochhoge tou main answer kaise karongi ... Main tou swaal hi bhool jaongi g ... Haan tou Kya poochha tha aapne... Boliya ...

Shravan shook his head in disbelief- kuchh nhi poochhna tha Mujhe ... Tumhari baaton se lagta hai Ke Sab theek hai ...

Suman- Na g Kuchh bhi theek nhi hai ... Woh Kya hai Na Maine abhi-2 apni unpacking Kari hai ... Firr Maine shower Liya kionki subah se inni tired ho gyi thi and busy bhi thi tou time hi nhi mila tha shower lene ka ... And Waise bhi hotels Na Mujhe safe nhi lagte nahane ko ... O g Maine suna hain Ke hotel washrooms mein Bahut baari cameras hote hain ... Tou Mujhe Na darr lagta hai ...

Shravan in his mind (hey Bhagwan kitna bolti hai yeh ... Kaam ki baat nhi batayegi ghar pe Akele baith Ke chup rehna mushkil lag raha hoga Iss liye Dimag khaane Ke liye Mujhe call kar Liya ... Orr Bol usko Ke call kar Lena ab bhugto)

Suman was still talking- tou Kya keh rahi thi main ... Haan yaad aaya washrooms mein cameras hote hain ...

But in between Shravan got an idea to tease her - sorry sumo lekin yaar camera tou Maine bhi laga rakhein hain ... And guest room Ke washroom mein tou do-2 hain and those are connected to my phone... So I can see you...

Suman darr jaati hai - KYaaa ... Kya aap ne ... Pehle bolna tha Na ... Please boliye Na Ke aap jhooth Bol rahe ho ... Aap aisa nhi kar sakte ...

Shravan laughed- c I got you... I was just joking... I just want to divert your attention... Yaar please jis baat Ke liye phone kiya hai woh batao itni lambi story Kion suna rahi ho ...

Suman irritatingly - SHRAVAN ... Dara diya aapne Mujhe ... Bahut khrab ho aap ...

Shravan- thank god tumko pata Chal giya ... Ab bolo kis liye phone kiya tha ???

Suman- Haan tou Bata rahi hoon Na ... Kya bolna tha ... And started thinking... Aww Haan yaad aaya Mujhe Bahut bhookh lagi hai and ghar pe khaane ko Kuchh bhi nhi ... Kya khaaon main boliye ...

Shravan murmurs- mera itna Dimag khane Ke baad pooch rahi hai Kya khaoon ... Khoon rehti hai ab tou wohi pi lo ...

Suman-arre Kya bole ja rahe ho .. Mujhe kuchh samjh mein nhi aa raha ... Loudly boliye Na please...

Shravan- arre yaar ghar pe tou Kuchh bhi nhi ... Arre yaad aaya mere room Ek blue colour ka hand bag hai ussmein Kuchh sweets hain Tum woh kha lo and fridge mein kuchh cold drinks honge dekh lo nahi hai tou woh kitchen mein gas Ke paas waale rack mein coffee padi hai bana Lena ... Aata hain Na ... Lekin Haan ghar pe milk nhi hai so black coffee pi Lena ... Main aate huye grocery Karke aata hoon ...

Suman- black coffee.. Oh God... Chalo koi Na yeh bhi sahi .. New life and new experiences... Chal beta Sumo ho ja shuru ... Changa g thanks and bye ... Hum yehi karte hain ... And sorry g aapko disturb kita ...

Now Shravan melted- arre nhi it's ok ... Chalo you take care of yourself... I will come after some time and will bring your food... Chalo rakhon main phone firr ...

Suman- ok g bye ...

Shravan - ok g bye ...

Sorry guys for the late update actually I was busy... I know it is a small update but next time I will try to write the big one ... Enjoy buddies and please give your feedback... Thanks

Love

Nicky ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Reswa nahi karungi unreswas 🤣 🤣

Me 1st ye kaise ho gaya 😲
Oji UNRESSWA hai ji
finally Aaj khush to Bohot hogi tum hain 🤣 🤣
Starts mast hai ji bechaare wakil saahab kin talking machines ke beech phase now with an addition of sumo
He was thanking god that of them Sumo is not permanent but poor him didn't knew everything doesn't go according to his plans
Pushkar typical majnu 🤣 🤣
Their first meet was awsum I could feel wakil saahab was mesmerised by Sumo
And man first meet mein panga by doubting her car wakil saahab wrong move 🤣 🤣
shravan's advice to Sumo was correct
And Sumo having doubts 😊 I m glad
their convo was cute
and omggg she ran away 🤣 🤣
this tayi ji ye to ek dumb chaalu nikli yaar correct ball pe seed ha sizer nice strike woman 🤣 🤣
Poor wakil saahab stuck with Sumo now
Now I am sure he will think thousand times before giving advice to anyone 🤣 🤣
shravan pushkar scene was hilarious 🤣
Sumo dialogue something lyk aapki baat maan know to yaha aayi hu lol
poor shravan and his big mouth lol
loved all the updates
thanks for pm
Edited by 0Bella0 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ary tussi tu chaa gaay gi... 😉
really liking dis punjabi Sumo...n anoyed Shravan... 😆
pushkiii n sumo r sooo talkative... 😆
really loved n enjoyed ur story...
lukng ahead for more...keep it soonish.. 😉 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
Pushku is such a dramebaz 😆
Shravu teasing sumo 😆
Cute chappy ❤️
Update soonish
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb..
Enjoying this Punjabi tadka.
Thnx for pm dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was so funny, when shravan says mera itna dimag khaane ke bad pooch rahi ho kyaa khaoon. It was really funny , shravan imitating her ok g bye.
Update soon, & Please try to write big chapter
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for update! Kuch exclusive ShraMan moments ho jaye?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nicky how can u be so awesome???😃
Believe me, you surprise me each n every time I log in to IF!!🤗
Will say just one thing - "I LOVE YOU!!!"🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
I love pushkar and sumo character most ❤️ pushkar Santo hone ka chance nhi chodta hehe mere frnd GRP m bhi meri ek frnd h jo kabhi senti hone ka chance nhi ab idea mil gaya use handle karne ka😆
And again sumo ko chup karna muskil hi nhi namumkin h🤣
Waiting for next long update😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
especially the phone convo so cute
continue soon
superb

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