|ShraMan SS: Zehnaseeb| [Chapter 10 (Last), Pg55, Apr 29th] - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sunain

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Mrina...tht was just incredable really loved it
Glad to knw thy r getting closer...n their talk shalk was outstanding
Sumo congratulating him n he smiling bout the fact tht she was damn sure tht he had won..woh bhi she
just felt it
Shravan n sumo r going to finally meet...woah πŸ₯³
Kya ho ga jab ya donno amanay samany aaein gay...OMG i can't just stp thinking bout them yar..bs yar ab on ko milwa ji do cant wait anymore 😳
Pushkar n Sumoz friendship ia cute..n found it really adoring whn she called him to alert him..n more over she knew tht thy were on speaker phone..i was damn amazed πŸ˜†
N bhabhi ji was just perfect
Really cant wait for the nxt part..plz plz update soon plz 😳
love u yar for this lovely update πŸ€—


Thank you for such a lovely comment Sunain. πŸ€— So glad you enjoyed the update. πŸ˜ƒ
Next update should come in a few days... I'm working on it. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊
Shraman First meeting was so Nice.😊
Shravan Malhotra Feelings were so Nice.😊
The Whole Part was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊

PriyaSweety-Anu


Thank you Priya! 😊 Glad you liked the update. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Vinayarao

Nice update ...

It was so nice to read their phone conversation...

I m just waiting for their 1st meet & their expression. How they both react each other when they will come face to face...

I m eagerly waiting for next part...

Thank u for update & PM

Update soonish



Thank you! πŸ˜ƒ You'll get to read their first meet soon. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Wow it means in next update Shrman meet each other awesome abhi jb phone conversation hi itni awesome h to jb milenge tb kya hoga great

Plzzz update soon and pm me as well😊


Thank you so much Harshi... Really appreciate your comments. Please add my PM ID. Details on Page1. You'll get PMs. for sure. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jerry2308

Amazing. ...interest develop ho gaya hai😳..also he is going to call her sumo now..

Excited for their 1st meet
Continue soon


Thank you so much yaar! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing update
absolutely loved it
continue soon
superb


Thank you Pinky! 😳


Originally posted by: ..Ananya..

This is one of the cutest updates I have read in a while.

Continue Soon


Thank you Anan! πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: smart1010

Awww!! It was a nice simple yet beautiful update. Please update next chapter soon, pretty excited for their first meeting I hope you will make it special.


Much Love.
Mehwish!!!!


Thank you so much Mehwish! 😳 Well, I'm working on the next chapter, will post it soon-ish. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessAshVik

Awww by the end of this update, I had a big smile on my face!

I Loved it!!! I am really enjoying how the story is going. Please please update soon!! I am so looking forward to read about their meeting!! Thank you for the PM!!


Thank you so much for the lovely comments Sara! πŸ˜ƒ I hope the next chapter gives you an even bigger smile. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Very Good and Well Written part Mrinalini..

I liked the way how you added more scenes to this story , and it perfectly fits in this plot..
Lets see How will their first meeting will go..
Continue soonsih...


Thank you Mayur!!! πŸ˜ƒ I have actually changed a whole lot from the original AsYa one. From here on, it's gonna be completely different. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

mrina thanks for the pm...n I've a request pls update next part soon...just can't wait to read out about their first meeting...being impatient u know...
the chapter was so so lovely... how he called her n her reply...she's a cartoon...so cute one...
n the mere thought of another girl irked him n she didn't mind being called bhabhi ji ...not bad...actually that's great...
n how sumo called pushkie to inform about pri ...God she's so adorable...
n she had an inkling that shravu will win the case...wow...abhi se hi telepathy n inkling started...
n God hell she knew it that pushkie keeps his phone on speaker...haha...
n finally they're going to meet...m so excited for their first meeting. ..eagerly waiting...
mrina pls make it up fast...
loved the chapter as always :)
waiting for next pm :)


I'm so happy you loved the update so much Sanju! πŸ€— I'm so sorry for the delay but I was busy was Diwali. I'm working on the next chapter. 😳 Should come up in a few days. 😊

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