|ShraMan SS: Zehnaseeb| [Chapter 10 (Last), Pg55, Apr 29th] - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
Very Good and Well Written part Mrinalini..
I liked the way how you added more scenes to this story , and it perfectly fits in this plot..
Lets see How will their first meeting will go..
Continue soonsih...
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Posted: 9 years ago
mrina thanks for the pm...n I've a request pls update next part soon...just can't wait to read out about their first meeting...being impatient u know...
the chapter was so so lovely... how he called her n her reply...she's a cartoon...so cute one...
n the mere thought of another girl irked him n she didn't mind being called bhabhi ji ...not bad...actually that's great...
n how sumo called pushkie to inform about pri ...God she's so adorable...
n she had an inkling that shravu will win the case...wow...abhi se hi telepathy n inkling started...
n God hell she knew it that pushkie keeps his phone on speaker...haha...
n finally they're going to meet...m so excited for their first meeting. ..eagerly waiting...
mrina pls make it up fast...
loved the chapter as always :)
waiting for next pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awe sweet update
shravan n sumos talks were so sweet
sumo liking the fact hes wanting to fly down to see her
n shravan liking fact she is ok being called bhabhi by pushkar
both just need to get act together n accept b4 family start thinking about other proposals which shravan aint liking talking about at all
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww i cant stop smiling after reading this update😳
Sumo and Shravan r damn cuteee❤️
I loveeedd d small small moments in this like -

Shravan now comfortable with suman that he started calling her sumo😛
Pushkar sumo convo
Sumo wishing shravan without knowing that he actually and her finding abt the times wen he heard her through loudspeaker😆

They do have an connection😛
I can actually imagine these things😆
So Shraman meeting
Update soonish😳
Edited by Anapneo3003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really nice update.suman and shravan plan to meet in a week...like pushkar sumo talks.amazing story.update fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello mrinalini, loved the update! Cute conversations between shravan and sumo😉 show mein hum kya kya nahin dhek paaye wo sub thum likh dhena! Iam here to read them happy happy👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
loving the build up. cant wait for them to meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awasome
I read all 5 part in 2 day.
Really Beautifully written
Now excited for these two cute ppl meeting
Phone conversion etna achha hai to mulkat kaisi hogi
Awaiting next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved ths chap Cant wait fa thr frst meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome...
..so beautifully penned...
no words...
.. loved it...
different concept...
read all parts in one go.. so amazing

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