|ShraMan SS: Zehnaseeb| [Chapter 10 (Last), Pg55, Apr 29th] - Page 25

Originally posted by: shalu121

nice story
i really loved itt
pls jaldi update karoo 😛

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

awww these two are uber cute

waiting to see what happens when they finally meet

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: astonm

I am just going to re-read from Chapter 1 because it's been so long, I am horrible I know.

Chapter 1

I don't know if I mentioned it in my last comment but this chapter gave me HSSH vibes because of the way the adults interacted with Suman, and due to the rishta.

Also I love the banner for the story , that rain scene was so beautiful!

Chapter 2

LOL, Kamini yelling at Pushkar seems to be an EDKV theme. I loved it! And Nirmala is in this YAY! I loved her character initially but then they butchered it :(

Ahhh, the phone call and Pushkar calling her bhabhi, so many feels! Sumo is so cute and Shravan already sounds smitten with her! ASDFGHJIKL!

Nirmala, Ram, Kamini, Lala Ji, Pushkar, Manju, Sameer & Preeti are aboard the ShraMan train, yay! LOL, that only leaves the two idiots!

Chapter 3

I am really liking the Nirmala-Ram-Shravan realtionship here!

Suman is so cute in this! I love how the whole family hears her phone conversations! Awww, Shravan and Sumo agree on something already - that rant about marraige, holy, so accurate!

Nirmala is so cute pouting about not being able to put the phone on loudspeaker again!

Shravan is so smitten.

LOL PARSAD YAHAN BHI AAGAYAAA! I love this Mrina!

Chapter 4

Lol, Nirmala is so cute, I can't deal.

This phone call, ahhh! They're so cute, these dorks <3

Look at them being cute and discussing their likes & dislikes. Aw, Shravan being worried about her work, SO CUTE!

Hai, they are so smitten, this is giving me so many feels Mrinaaa!

LOL, Pushkar is so direct, "yaar, mujhe naa Preeti bohot pasand hai." I love this!

ShraMan are being so cute. I am hearing the HSSH theme song in my head now.

Chapter 5

These. Phone. Convos. Are. So. f**king. Cute.

Bas.

This Shravan-Pushkar bromance and the Sumo-Pushkar relationship is so cute. I love how he calls her "bhabhi".

Ahhh, they're coming to Delhi in the next chapter! I am so excited!

Mrina, I am loving this so far, my feels right now! This story is SO cute! I hope you're doing well <3

Originally posted by: pritiyerne

Please update soon

Originally posted by: amlavs

Amazing..

Read it in one go...

I loved it..

So different from the original...

U wrote it beautifully...

Plz update soon..

Excited for their first meet...

LavSriya

Originally posted by: --Amulya--

Ha, I was seriously missing this romcom feels of our Shraman... thanx for this and I did send you a buddy request.. hoping you get pm's from you on the updates

Originally posted by: Niii28

Plz update faster 😊