ShraMan FF [AU]: Coming Home [Update: C12, Pg 68, Oct 28th] - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awwwn really cute and adorable
Show ka to satyanash ho gaya
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
amazing 2 chapter.love it.plz update fast and thanks for pm.love your stories.
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Awesome. i am loving this version too.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Amazing update
Everyone knows about Suman and Shravan's feelings accept themselves
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
Anjali awesome yr..
Love ur writings..❤️
It so beautiful and cute..
Their little fights, then sweet talks and hug and blush omg I just love it..
U take us away from real Edkv and I love that thing right now..
Thnx for pm dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Suman blushing and Shravan enjoying he sight of her. That's something we like.

Enjoyable read, as always! Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb
Loved it
Everything is so perfect nd seems real
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
OMG OMG OMG NEW STORY AAAHHH
So excited I danced for a minute when I saw your PM 🤣
Do you know how much I wait for you to write something coz you are the BEST writer on IndiaForums , mere liye.

I loved Asad - Zoya and your stories made me love them even more but what you are doing with EDKV is on a whole another level.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS

The writers of the show are really testing my patience and I just can't take the negativity anymore , I sometimes dont even wach the show and prefer watching Ishqbaaz coz that show gives me the happy feels , a break from all the nonsense on our dear Shraman.

Please continue this and update fast , not going to leave any comments on the how the story is going coz every but of it is fantastically happy happy and awesome ❤️


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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was sooo CUTE!! loved every bit of it...seriously..amazing..flawless..wow
.do continue soon...thanks for the pm..
~Aisha
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: .SardiKiDhoop.

I know exactly what you mean by HSSH kinda sweet because I'm feeling just as contently warm and fuzzy on the inside while reading this as I did when I watched that movie for the first time!

Loved the first two chapters, your AU work is really satisfying to read and I especially needed this after what the current, emotionally-draining track of the show is putting us all through. I'm also glad you're writing the rest of this in English because my knowledge of Hindi is quite limited, even more so when I'm reading, haha.

The dialogue is flawlessly written as always - you keep SO well to the characterization and I honestly feel like I'm watching the whole thing playing out right in front of me. I loved how the first person Shravan went to see was Sumo and that little reunion was too cute - how they simply went about as though pretending it wasn't like they hadn't seen each other in 3 years and how annoyed Sumo got by the end of it. Pushkar and Priya were my faves throughout, loved his teasing and her motherly little talk with Sumo. And the second chapter just brought such a huge smile to my face, especially when Sumo ran up the stairs and hugged him without warning. And I'm also quite enjoying her reactions to the not-so platonic hug and Shravan's "naked" comment haha - I'm looking really forward to how they're going to navigate their way into this phase of their relationship, keep writing! <3


THANKS GIRL! You always leave me such amazing, well thought out comments that they make me smile like an idiot. So thank youuu for that! <3
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